Mogul Dash - Fluttershy befriends Lyra (Allegro Lullaby)

[Mogul Dash 31]

Enjoy guys! My newest song after being absent for 2 months.

 

[MVC NVMXD JVRXD 2,406]

There is definitely a lot of improvement here. I must say, though, that "Hush now, quiet now" sounds strange in the beginning, mostly because the original song and your song are in different time signatures/tempos. Through the whole thing, the beat keeps things together. The ambiance of the melody really keeps the song in interesting mood.

I'd give this a 7/10. Nice improvement.