Spike's Long-Awaited Conquest

[MallaJong1 202]

I decided to post my very first fanfiction after I completed the first three chapters. Comments and criticism are appreciated.

 

Fanfiction Synopsis: Spike the Dragon snaps when Rarity rejects his whole-hearted love, and in a fit of "brilliance" convinces Luna to team up and conquer Ponyville and Canterlot. Though first Spike needs to teach a few ponies a few lessons. What is this insatiatiable sensation boiling deep within Spike's being? And can it be stopped before "brilliance" turns to "madness"? (Sexual activities are implied but not described. This is not a clopfic.)

 

Fanfiction Link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/37948/Spike's-Long-Awaited-Conquest