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Oh no are you ok? Did you hurt anything? Oh no you dropped your muffin too. Hold on a sec. She helps him up and dust him off. She brings him over to the group and sits him down next to her. Here you go. As she hands him a new muffin. You should be more careful when walking on a train. She keeps cleaning him off like a mother would do. So tell me muffin, are you here by yourself? Or is your family around?

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I... um, I'm here alone. Flame said taking the new muffin. Why am I still talking to this pony. He thought watching her brush the dust off his shoulder. I uh, I gotta go now, but it was... Interesting meeting you Commander, thank you for the muffin... and the help of the floor. He said standing up and sneezing from the dust that had settled on his noise.
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Thunder could hear derpy talking to somepony behind him, but he couldn't make out the words.

He stands up and walks down to the end of the train car... And spies derpy talking to an unidentified blue pony.

"Derpy!" thunder shouted. "what do you think you're doing?!" he said as her stormed over to the two, now terrified, ponies.

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Derpy looked up at the towering pony. I was just helping find the mice in the cart that might be trying to get in our food. The look on Thunders face stayed the same. Did i do something wrong? Are you mad at me Thunder? Derpy's face went from happy to sad. I just dont know what went wrong?

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Heheh, Flame laughed and faked a smile to hide his fear. Well I... uh, Um, I better be going. He said walking towards the door.

Please let me go, please let me go, please let me go, Just let me walk out that door. He thought as he passed by the big pony named thunder.

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"Woah and where do you think you're going so fast?" he said as he puts his hoof out in front of the pony "Just what do you think you were doing back here?" he asked the pony

"and derpy? Why were you socializing with this pony here?" thunder asked "you can't let your guard down out here."

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Flame walked into the pony's arm ,I was um...Checking for mice ? I thought I saw one come in here and I...Uh...Chased after it. He said rubbing his nose, If you let me go I will... Give you this muffin. He held out the muffin that Derpy had given him. I don't want any trouble.

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Dizzy woke up to all the shouting Thunder was doing. He could also hear his mom talking too. Walks over to see whats going on. Uhhh thunder...Could you keep it down a bit. and why are you yelling at my mother like you run the place? You need to learn your place before someone puts you in it. Walking his mother back to her seat.

 

Dieheart was still in tears about the dream she had. Flower.....Flower are you up? I need to talk to you. Ya know...mare to mare.

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Thanks for helping me up... and the muffin's. Flame said to Derpy with a worried smile.

Ok I am just going to say it, I was looking for food, I have no family or friends im all alone so this was the only thing I could do, im sorry. He handed the canteen full of water back to Thunder.

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Thunder eyed the kid suspiciously and took the canteen. "You know, i don't know why i'm letting you go for now." thunder said to the kid

"and i'm sorry derpy, i don't know what came over me, i just want to keep everyone safe."

"do you have a name kid?" he asked the blue pony

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Flame Dancer. He said shyly, I better get going. He started walking towards the door. Thanks for not killing me. He said giving a shaky smile.

 

(OOC: I should probably be getting to bed soon, but I may be able to post some more, just giving everyone a heads up.)

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Dizzy and Derpy sit back down. Its ok Thunder. Just calm your new body down a bit. Mom you ok? I was just trying to help him find the mice so they would not eat our food. And then Thunder got mad and it did not make me feel to good. But then you came and helped me. Thank you Dizzy. You will always be my little muffin. I love you too mom. I just hope we can get that cure for you in the next town.

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Fire Flower rubs her eyes and starts to wake up, hearing Dieheart's voice "Hmm? Yes Dieheart? Is there anything wrong?" she asked as she yawned. She looked around and saw the Commander Derpy's stuff on the ground "What happened?" she said with a worried voice.

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Dieheart moves in close to Flower. I need to tell you something that i have never told anypony before. Iv been holding this in for so many years and iv done well hiding it. But now i just cant keep it in any more. I dont know if its this new body or its just all coming back to me.

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What had thunder done... He didn't know what he was doing, he lost his temper. He wasn't used to these new emotions yet.

"Derpy... Dizzy... I'm sorry" he said as he hung his head and left the two to be alone. He went to another empty cab to cool his head for a moment, he sat in a seat. Looking out the window, his mind wondered...

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Dizzy walks to the back cart to see Thunder. He sees him looking out the window at what would be high noon. Hey man is everything ok? My bad for snapping on you back there. I was just defending my mother. Knowing her she only meant well to the kid. Looking at the plane look on his face. What seems to be the problem? If you have any questions about being male let me know.

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Fire Flower was shocked about the news Dieheart was about to tell, she had no idea what she was going to say, it was all so sudden. "What is it Dieheart? Are you okay?" she worriedly asked with a serious face, she was thinking that something terribly wrong has happened.

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As dizzy talked with thunder, many questions flew threw his mind as they have since the... Incident.

"If you have questions, you can ask me." dizzy said

"well ive had a few on my mind..." said thunder

"what are they?"

"well..." he looked away for a moment and back, "how about i start with... What has gotten into fire flower and dieheart?"

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Dizzy look back into the other cart to see the two mares taking. Looks back at Thunder. What do you mean by that? Have they changed to you?

 

Dieheart takes a breath and....Ok. Well long before the war broke out.....I use to work of Anima. But at that time he could not be freed into the world unless the Princesses were dead. After he told me what he wanted to do i had to leave him because i could not bring myself to do such a thing. I started the Underground to stop the war but it lead to the Princesses killing each other anyway. And as they died they were saying the prophesy iv been talking about. It was like they knew what they were doing. But if i had never tried to stop them they might still be alive. The might not be as bucked up as it is now. Dieheart starts to cry again. This whole mess is all my fault. Their blood is on my hooves. I cant sleep with out seeing them die right in front of eyes over and over. I can still see there blood on my hooves every time i wake up. And the nightterrors never stop. The sins of my past keep haunting me and they wont go away. I.....i.....i just dont know if im doing the right thing anymore. Hangs her head and cries some more.

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Flame walked out out the door into a coach full of luggage, He thought about going through some of the bags looking for food, But instead he sat down with his back to the wall, He pulled his old coat covered in holes around himself and slowly began to fall asleep.

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Thunder thought to himself for a bit,

"Should I go speak with the pony that he yelled at? I think I will when we get to our destination..."

 

He snapped back to reality when dizzy asked him a question

"Yeah dizzy, you could say that." thunder said "but why me? Do you know?"

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Well i really dont know why. I mean if you really what to know what i think, i think its the hormones man. I mean just look at you. You are like the picture perfect colt. Strong, tough, bold, and you know how to take control, also you know what its like to be a mare. Your just what every mare looks for. And right now they are trying to understand their new bodies as well. Plus im married so they cant really come to me. So dont read to much into. Right now your that strong figure that everyone looks up to.
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He never thought of it that way.

"i guess you're right dizzy." said thunder "I guess i just forgot the old me" thunder said, now smirking

Dizzy chuckled and stood there for a moment, then made his way for the door.

"hey dizzy..." thunder said

Dizzy turned around

"...thanks."

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Fire Flower put her hoof on Dieheart's shoulder trying to cheer her up,"...It's okay Dieheart, don't put this on yourself, it's not you're fault. You're a good person and you did the right thing to leave Anima, he's a monster and we need to stop him. Listen, I know that we can't change the past, but I do know that we can change the future and right now we need everyone's help to do that, especially yours."

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Dieheart smiled at Flower and hugged her. Thank you Fire Flower. For understanding. And your right, whats in the past is done. I need to move on and make the world a better place. Thank you Flower, thank you. Leans over and looks at the guys in the other cart. She then waves at Derpy to come over. Whispering. So i know this has been on every ones mind so im just going to say it. What do you mares think about Thunder?

 

Dizzy went to go pick up the other bags and saw the girls siting together. He eavesdrops on there conversation. In thought. What are you girls talking about?

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