who wants to help me write a rap song?

[Skullbuster 1,906]

so ive been wanting to get into music for a while now, and i decided rap would be the easiest way to go, ive already have a beat selected, and i have a few ideas for the lyrics, but that it! im completely stumped when it comes to writing the rest of the song, all i have is a few lines for the beginning, and part of the chorus, anyone willing to help?

Edited August 17, 2012 by SkullBuster

[thegoodhen 698]

I DO I DO I DO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Now to read the actual text you've written.

But count on me, man! YAaaaaaaaay! SO AWSUM!

Edit:

What should it be bout, man?

Edited August 17, 2012 by thegoodhen

[FedoraMemes 582]

If you gave us the lyrics you have already written, plus the beat, I would be willing to help. I know a little bit about writing rap/rhyming, so I should be able to help you.

 

Also, what style of rap is it? Is it hip-hop, or that shitty stuff you hear on the radio?

[Skullbuster 1,906]

YAY! support!

 

i think ill wait for at least 2 people and then ill post what i have so far

[thegoodhen 698]

If you gave us the lyrics you have already written, plus the beat, I would be willing to help. I know a little bit about writing rap/rhyming, so I should be able to help you.

 

Also, what style of rap is it? Is it hip-hop, or that shitty stuff you hear on the radio?

 

I said I'm in, man. So it's hiphop.

[Skullbuster 1,906]

If you gave us the lyrics you have already written, plus the beat, I would be willing to help. I know a little bit about writing rap/rhyming, so I should be able to help you.

 

Also, what style of rap is it? Is it hip-hop, or that shitty stuff you hear on the radio?

 

it is most definantly NOT the latter, i was kind of thinking of making it a tad up beat, give me a second and ill post what i have so far

[Brook 663]

I'd be happy to help you write, but a rap song needs a thing to sing about.

 

So I can't do it without a subject, give me one and I could write you 5 pages of lyrics.

[Skullbuster 1,906]

 

(skip to 0:48)

 

the song is going to be called "Stand Up"

 

so far the only lyrics i have are the very first lines:

 

HI fillys and gentalcolts

your gonna love me cuz im all sorts of nuts and bolts

 

and part of the chorus:

 

and maybe one day ill be a famous brony

like mic the mic or mando pony

but i guess we'll just have to wait and see

until then im stuck doing stand up comedy

[thegoodhen 698]

Eh. That isn't exactly... Much yet.

But-what should it be about? I'll write my verse.

May post it tomorrow.

[Skullbuster 1,906]

Eh. That isn't exactly... Much yet.

But-what should it be about? I'll write my verse.

May post it tomorrow.

 

i know

 

my main idea, was a pony who does stand up comedy, but no pony likes him...or something like that

[FedoraMemes 582]

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=h8vlvMIe4hU

 

(skip to 0:48)

 

the song is going to be called "Stand Up"

 

so far the only lyrics i have are the very first lines:

 

HI fillys and gentalcolts

your gonna love me cuz im all sorts of nuts and bolts

 

and part of the chorus:

 

and maybe one day ill be a famous brony

like mic the mic or mando pony

but i guess we'll just have to wait and see

until then im stuck doing stand up comedy

 

Ah yes, one of my favourite rap songs of all time. I just recited the lines you gave me, and they do seem to fit the beat.

 

Got more swag than you, you can bet 8 bits,

I'm so funny, I'll leave Pinkie Pie in fits,

But wait there's more, nope you're off to the moon,

Yet I'll be waiting for you, hope you'll come back soon

Oh much lulz will be had, just you wait and see,

Because no more will we have Celestian tyranny,

 

It's a WIP, I haven't rapped over the beat yet, so I don't know how it fits, but yeah.

 

EDIT: (In a voice)

 

Dude, your rhymes aren't funny, your just like Angel Bunny,

Why so serious, dude, I ain't giving you my money!

Edited August 17, 2012 by DylanKLJ

[Skullbuster 1,906]

Ah yes, one of my favourite rap songs of all time. I just recited the lines you gave me, and they do seem to fit the beat.

 

Got more swag than you, you can bet 8 bits,

I'm so funny, I'll leave Pinkie Pie in fits,

But wait there's more, nope you're off to the moon,

Yet I'll be waiting for you, hope you'll come back soon

Oh much lulz will be had, just you wait and see,

Because no more will we have Celestian tyranny,

 

It's a WIP, I haven't rapped over the beat yet, so I don't know how it fits, but yeah.

 

that looks good! ill probably add this to the first verse

[FedoraMemes 582]

that looks good! ill probably add this to the first verse

 

I added a little bit more in the edit, you don't have to use that because I just made it up in literally 30 seconds, but if you want, then feel free to use it. I'm so glad I could help!

[Lunalicious 223]

Oh, man. If it was old school rap, I'd be all over the place. I'm not too experienced in any other genres.

[MallaJong1 202]

Make a rap about the trials and tribulations of accepting bronydom. It took me a long time before I admitted I was, in fact, a brony.

[Skullbuster 1,906]

ok, so ive got an idea for the song structure, i counted 3 choruses which means 4 verses heres my idea:

 

verse one:

bragging about myself

 

verse two:

various jokes

 

verse three:

complains about the audience

 

verse four:

outro(no real ideas here)

 

Make a rap about the trials and tribulations of accepting bronydom. It took me a long time before I admitted I was, in fact, a brony.

 

 

i will defiantly do a song based on this in the future, i went through the same thing, thanks for the idea

[thegoodhen 698]

I'm here to keep ya laughing,

I'm eeeffin serious

I'm generally genious

and you should hide the hideous

Wait, that's what you do, that's why you are still in boxes

my plans are so ominious, more tac-tics then in clocks is

And Fox is

just a small tv compared to hub

When they got ponies?

Oh, please,

level up

And I'm back in business, crushing this kids like biscuits

no fist hits, no flip kicks, just fierce lips and diss bits.

Like misfits I spit things and get mints of cash friends

 

Lol, I have no idea what I'm doing. xD

[Skullbuster 1,906]

I'm here to keep ya laughing,

I'm eeeffin serious

I'm generally genious

and you should hide the hideous

Wait, that's what you do, that's why you are still in boxes

my plans are so ominious, more tac-tics then in clocks is

And Fox is

just a small tv compared to hub

When they got ponies?

Oh, please,

level up

And I'm back in business, crushing this kids like biscuits

no fist hits, no flip kicks, just fierce lips and diss bits.

Like misfits I spit things and get mints of cash friends

 

Lol, I have no idea what I'm doing. xD

 

i might use this, im not sure if it would be good for the first or second verse

[thegoodhen 698]

i might use this, im not sure if it would be good for the first or second verse

 

Im just derpin around. Not sure if it'll be good for anything really. xD But I put this together and it rhymes, so... xD

[Skullbuster 1,906]

Im just derpin around. Not sure if it'll be good for anything really. xD But I put this together and it rhymes, so... xD

 

lol thats how i made the chorus, i just put some stuff together that rhymed and made sense

 

and ive got a few ideas for verse 3, give me a minute to post them

[thegoodhen 698]

Oh, man. If it was old school rap, I'd be all over the place. I'm not too experienced in any other genres.

 

I bet you are... STRAIGHT OUTTA COMPTON CRAZY LUNALICIOUS NAMED... whatever xD

Ol' school's great, dude!

[Skullbuster 1,906]

ok, heres a line for the 3rd verse:

 

hey buddy, step away from that pie

i see that twinkle in your eye

looking at me like im a bullseye

[Modphase 1,271]

Ooohhh, I could totally help you with the lyrics! I've wrote quite a few in the past, which sadly I got bored of and didn't finish, but they were good!

[Skullbuster 1,906]

Ooohhh, I could totally help you with the lyrics! I've wrote quite a few in the past, which sadly I got bored of and didn't finish, but they were good!

 

thats great! the song info is on the first page

 

ok, heres where we are (ill provide an update each page)

 

(skip to 0:48)

 

HI fillys and gental colts

your gonna love me cuz im all sorts of nuts and bolts

oh come on guys dont be a bunch of dolts

now let me tell you some thing about me!

Got more swag than you, you can bet 8 bits,

I'm so funny, I'll leave Pinkie Pie in fits,

But wait there's more, nope you're off to the moon,

Yet I'll be waiting for you, hope you'll come back soon

Oh much lulz will be had, just you wait and see,

Because no more will we have Celestian tyranny,

 

Chorus:

and maybe one day ill be a famous brony

like mic the mic or mando pony

but i guess we'll just have to wait and see

until then im stuck doing stand up comedy

 

 

song structure:

verse one:

bragging about myself

 

verse two:

various jokes

 

verse three:

complains about the audience

 

verse four:

outro(no real ideas here)

[FedoraMemes 582]

verse four:

outro(no real ideas here)

 

In the original, it's Eminem going 'meh meh meh meh meh' (or something) so why not go 'ha ha ha ha ha' in kind of a mocking voice, which represents the audience making fun of him because he isn't funny.