Hypocrisy is the Worst Policy by CaptainMcMuffin

[miygaiya 138]

Hello all.

 

I was sitting my AP Chem class and thinking random thoughts as the teacher droned on about something rather. Then I thought, "Hey, what if a guy who was afraid of heights and falling and such was turned into a pegasus pony and had to try flying to get a job?" So I set to work, in class, writing the first chapter, and I put it up on FimFiction. Here I am, plugging it and promoting it like a jellybean.

 

If you could check it out and leave some constructive criticism or just a silly comment, maybe a watch, I would love it!

 

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/48179/Hypocrisy-is-the-Worst-Policy

 

Thanks!

[Starshine 16,334]

 

 

So your life actually DOES flash before your eyes before you die.

 

/thread

 

And then I hit the ground.

 

 

 

I freaking lost it

 

It was a very nice read. Can't really tell much on how you could improve this stuff, it was perfect enough for me.

 

When will you update it?

[miygaiya 138]

I was actually planning on updating it later this week, just because I'm going to be bored from lack of workstation and minimal homework loads. But once school starts up in earnest, I'll probably be updating it once a week, maybe twice.

 

I plan on having at least ten chapters up in heee-uh, so if that's consolation for the wait then yay! :3

 

Totally not a bump, but I published a new chapter. You should totally go check it out, lolz to be had and fun to be gained as well. Take a gander!

 

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/48179/2/Hypocrisy-is-the-Worst-Policy/A-Horrible-Way-To...-Live%3F

 

K, it's been updated again. Chapter's not as long as I wanted it to be, but I haven't had too much time to sit down and type up another 2.5k words, so enjoy the half-length chapter!

 

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/48179/Hypocrisy-is-the-Worst-Policy