writing The Shy Gentleman

[Ferret Girl 2,642]

How is it that I apeal to the masses?

How is it that others enjoy my time?

I am but a shy gentleman, do you not understand?

For me to explain I require audience.

Applause are unnescesary, pretend rather to be invisible.

Forgive my natures, as well as my experiences.

For I am new in this regard.

Every which way I look, I see several people expectant of me.

What do they want?

What is it in me that they see?

Pessimism inside, and optimism my shell.

Emotions are hard to hide.

In my regard I ask of you,

"How may I be of service?"

For this is all I wish, for me to be of help.

For me to be of use in times such as these.

And whilst I may hold true to the pessimist side of mind,

I will always make time for you.

When your life has meaning, how do you express it?

How do you show the side of you that all you wish to see?

I am the shy gentleman, of this I am sure.

It would make my dreams come true, if all knew this to be me.

David Favret

To anypony reading this, please feel free to leave a reply and give me feedback, it really helps me to hear what you guys think.

[Dusty Soul 2,611]

As always it's amazing. The thing I like about a lot of your poems you have a message that I usually is true. This one is very well written, and flows really well.