writing To Write

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

So often that I,

a person,

a poet,

am lost in emotion.

 

So often, i put pen to paper in an attempt to drown out harder feelings.

 

I,

a person of such,

limited only by twenty-six letters and a plethora of words. I must find a new way to bring about change that i want in my life.

This change is more idealistic than most.

So often,

I dream of it.

 

I write beautifully?

I do not quite understand.

What is it my hand creates not by will that is so highly admired.

Perhaps it is more contoversal than it seems.

I digress.

People see what people want to see,

In both dreams and reality.

I care not if you are of a degenerate generation, or of an educated venue,

I care not.

For so long i have heard of suffering only we can bring about through our selfish desires.

I look past it all,

past the hate in words,

and look instead to the paper.

The paper in which more commonplace and deserving words can be placed.

 

This is where I often choose to stay lost.

Better in a world where words are a solitary comfort from fire.

 

My hand guides me,

tells me what to write,

for I myself am unable.

If only they understood.

 

 

-David Favret

[Shiki 5,855]

This is my favourite of your poems so far. Very relatable and understandable to me, but also quite hard to comment on, because of what it's about. I canot find one flaw.

[Cherry Blossom 864]

This really makes me think about the purpose of little actions, such as art. It really depicts how differently a lot of people think, but I guess it's just really great!