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Looks good!

For being your first time, its really good!

 

Maybe you should have made his headset a little bigger so it covers his ear more.

Other then that, i can't find any complaint. :D





 

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Well that is INSANLY good for a first. The back legs are the only things that are bugging me. They look WAY too straight, they probably should be more curvy.

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Did you draw with a reference? if not, the DO SO XD you'll get the proportions spot on :)

For the picture, the wings are too big(unless you wanted them to be), and the body is a bit long (hence why you struggled with the flank ;) )

Other then that, its awesome for your first pony art!


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No I didn't have a reference, I'll just call this my own style! Haha :lol:

I generally do realism, I did my best to avoid the first generation style too.

 

I realized the wings are big, but I didn't want to try again. They either end up scrawny or fluffy, and fluffy is nice. :)

 

Thanks for the advise though, I will try to use a reference and see how that goes.

 

Ah i see, well if realism is what your going for, (i dont do realism at all XD) draw with reference in mind, then deviate from the mlp style to your own :)
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It looks good, better than my first drawing.. kind of inbetween, But the legs are a bit big, and the back leg is big 2.

Everything else looks good, except the legs and the hoofs,that's about it buddy.

 

Just keep on drawing my friend! (:

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No I didn't have a reference, I'll just call this my own style! Haha :lol:

I generally do realism, I did my best to avoid the first generation style too.

 

I realized the wings are big, but I didn't want to try again. They either end up scrawny or fluffy, and fluffy is nice. :)

 

Thanks for the advise though, I will try to use a reference and see how that goes.

 

o_O Realism?

 

If we ought to put realism and MLP together, it ought to look something comparable to this:

 

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That's something I could call realism, putting aside the exaggerated features and outlines looking at a few photos of actual horses.

 

You have to be a savant to be able to draw realism without heavily relying on references, just sayin'.

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It's pretty good I guess. You don't have to worry that it looks like a g1,2 or 3 because it doesn't, though I can't really tell if it's a mare or stallion.

 

Also, the leg to the left is a little bit too thick at the top which kinda make it looks like a cowleg or something.


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I really like this! The back legs are a little too straight, and one thing I'm definitely sure of is that I'm a fan of the large wings. It's a great style! I think though, whilst the wings themselves are a great size, the feathers are a little too large. Wings have feathers of a variety of sizes, but none of them are as large as that. They are also usually longer than they are wide. I love practicing drawing wings, and there are so many poses you can put ponies in to get some good wing angles. <3

I love this, you have a great style and I really want to see more of your character! :lol:


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