writing One night of solace

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

Just as any friend would.

Only really wanting to be one of them.

I saw you standing at the edge.

And I wouldn't let you go.

I couldn't watch as you fell.

So I refused to let you go.

 

Just as any other person would say.

I told you my feelings.

You saw the hurt in all my words.

And you comforted me.

You werent able to sit and listen.

And so you comforted me.

 

It seems as though we were both flawed.

Both at our own throats.

And we each had one another.

All it took was one sentence.

Once phrase of words that mean so much.

And by the time it was done, we were both victims.

 

 

 

-David Favret

[khaine21x3 789]

We were once really tight,

but the murder of all our friends gave you a really bad fright.

I try to shelter you from his wrath,

but it seems he had your mind crushed.

You cried to me every night,

saying that you wanted to get out this plight.

I helped you escape but now I'm all alone,

in the place that used to be home

 

All the years have passed and we finally met again,

but it seems our thoughts have changed.

you were grateful for my help but we just have nothing in common anymore.

I cannot leave everyone to die just to be with you,

as much as it tempts me to.

You might have a wonderful and stable life now but out comrades are still poor and their children filled with tears,

I have to liberate them and bring the wonders of technology here.

 

Farewell my friend.

I'll stick to my ideals while you follow the current trend,

I cannot abandon my homeland even if it drives me insane.

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

insane.

A poem by a means to quell another poem?

 

Interesting...

Though, to be rather blunt, the flow is really rough. I tried reading it in several different ways, but the words did not flow very nicely at all. The sentences didnt connect just right.

 

 

By the way... One Night of Solace...one of my worst poems....

[khaine21x3 789]

A poem by a means to quell another poem?

 

Interesting...

Though, to be rather blunt, the flow is really rough. I tried reading it in several different ways, but the words did not flow very nicely at all. The sentences didnt connect just right.

 

 

By the way... One Night of Solace...one of my worst poems....

 

It's way past my bedtime so I just typed whatever comes to mind, your poem reminds me of past events and I just typed whatever comes to mind.

 

The terrorism, child rape, religious lynchings that I have to witness frequently is driving me insane...

Edited November 21, 2012 by khaine21x3

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

It's way past my bedtime so I just typed whatever comes to mind, your poem reminds me of past events and I just typed whatever comes to mind.

 

The terrorism, child rape, religious lynchings that I have to witness frequently is driving me insane...

 

Aorta likewise.. I am sorry if I seem like a jack ass right no... running on 2 hours sleep.

 

Writing isnt the best option in such a state.

[khaine21x3 789]

Would probably work better as a sad song of some sort after looking at it twice.I seem to get ideas and flashbacks whenever I read your titles or poems.

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

Would probably work better as a sad song of some sort after looking at it twice.I seem to get ideas and flashbacks whenever I read your titles or poems.

 

DO you remember things in a good way?

 

Im happy at least that they make you think... have you seen my sixth compilation? I personally think it has been my most meaningful set yet.

[khaine21x3 789]

DO you remember things in a good way?

 

Im happy at least that they make you think... have you seen my sixth compilation? I personally think it has been my most meaningful set yet.

 

The US backed dictator murdered almost everyone I know but I managed to help a few escape and they were all given american green cards, I stayed behind because I want everyone here to have more freedom and improve their living standard.I'm not about to let some democratically elected terrorists win.The roman catholic church and secret jewish brotherhood are the only other 2 groups that have managed to give their followers a high living standard but I distrust the catholics and I think that they might have ulterior motives since they follow a foreign pope who already have a very controversial past and suspected to organize 5 failed coups in asian/african countries.

 

Living standards are high in the roman catholic controlled areas due to a complex welfare system as well as community involvement to ensure every catholic is employed but there is no transparency on the amount of money received and how much goes to each activity.It creeps me out whenever I go to their area since you can't walk 5 steps without some catholic asking for donation wherever you are, even all catholic ran shops and restaurants ask for donations.I also have an eye for detecting spies and the roman catholic has more spies than the old dictator in areas under their control.

 

Jews tend to be very organized wherever they might be and I've never seen poor jews anywhere in the world.