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Very good job! Now I would like to give you some constructive criticism, but if you don't want to see it, just don't read the following text. ;)

 

Okay, first off, her shadow. You did a fantastic job on her shadow I must say, however, the shadows in the distance are points down the landscape. For example, look at the flag; it's shadow reflects downward towards the bottom of the photo. So Applejack's shadow should have been the same way as the other shadows relative to the lighting. To conclude, the shading. It looks good, but one thing I would recommend is going in and shading each body part (Leg, hair, body, etc.) separately. That way you get it to come off as different parts are shaded accordingly to the lighting. It still is a great job and I hope to see more of your work.


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I think the shadow is great personally, maybe it's not in the right stance but hey, I didn't notice that untill it was mentioned. I love how you put her in the right spot. She is lookjing directly at the pole and she looking from a distance too and I like that.

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Very good job! Now I would like to give you some constructive criticism, but if you don't want to see it, just don't read the following text. ;)

 

Okay, first off, her shadow. You did a fantastic job on her shadow I must say, however, the shadows in the distance are points down the landscape. For example, look at the flag; it's shadow reflects downward towards the bottom of the photo. So Applejack's shadow should have been the same way as the other shadows relative to the lighting. To conclude, the shading. It looks good, but one thing I would recommend is going in and shading each body part (Leg, hair, body, etc.) separately. That way you get it to come off as different parts are shaded accordingly to the lighting. It still is a great job and I hope to see more of your work.

 

You are correct. I always try to make the shading look as realistic as possible. GIMP was being retarded and didn't let me put the shadow the way I wanted to. Thank you though.

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Well i gave you a brohoof... Does that count as giving AJ a hoof :)?

Great job though dude, I finally get to see some shadowing in an IRL picture, which I really like. And its nicely done other then that! I can't see anything else to comment on.

 

Great job dude!


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