It Was Only A Matter Of Time

[YesIAmTori 285]

I've been writing a few fan fics so I thought I'd put a link to my account and my latest story!

It Was Only A Matter Of Time

My FIMFiction acount

One last thing to educate you all in proper music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=endscreen&v=AuU-FIMjHLc&NR=1

[Rainbow Skywalker 642]

I like how grammatically correct you are in your stories. That's my kind of author. I also love the Offspring (favorite song is probably 'Half-Truism')

[CloudFyre 848]

It's a pretty good story!

 

The only thing that I would suggest is expanding a bit or perhaps combining the two chapters, as the individual chapters seem a bit short.

 

Anyhow, it's a thumbs up from me. Very nice work!

[YesIAmTori 285]

I like how grammatically correct you are in your stories. That's my kind of author. I also love the Offspring (favorite song is probably 'Half-Truism')

 

Thank you! It makes me happy when I see things like this! My favourites are Beheaded, (Can't Get My) Head Around You, Pretty Fly (For A White Guy) and The Kids Aren't Alright.

 

It's a pretty good story!

 

The only thing that I would suggest is expanding a bit or perhaps combining the two chapters, as the individual chapters seem a bit short.

 

Anyhow, it's a thumbs up from me. Very nice work!

 

Thanks, I do try although I'm still in my 8th year of School so I'm still learning. I'm glad you liked it, I'm always worried my stories won't go over positively...