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Lightning Dancer climbed out of the hole she made wearily. She had absolutely no energy, as she hasn't eaten yet. 'Has anypony here eaten?', she thought to herself.

 


 

Metal ran into the main room. He was startled by the tense situation, so he took his time and analyzed the current predicament.

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Yavolin teamed up with Celestia and spoke to Discord."Discord you have one choice, surrender and leave Equestria". Yavolin picked up a near by spear and prepared to attack Discord on celestia's command but he knew this could only end in one way. But he didn't care any more.


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Discord rolled his eyes.  He pretended to look at his non-existing watch.  "Oh, geez.  Look at the time.  I'm getting awfully tired.  I'll just go get Luna and we'll go to my extra cave place where I can torture her like in those weird gore stories," he said.

Princess Celestia almost threw up.

Discord disappeared.  He appeared again next to Luna, sweating from using so much power.  He needed rest.  Luna looked up at him, more weak then he was.

"Hi, Luna.  Lets go."

Luna didn't even react as she was picked up off the ground.  She was being treated like a doll.  A single doll in a room with two fillies.  Being pulled back and forth to the point of starting to tear.

Princess Celestia looked at Yavolin.  "Kill him," she said.


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Yavolin nod and flew out after Discord he saw her near Luna so he pointed the spear right for Discords head and flew very fast at him. Yavolin didn't close his eyes because he wanted to see Discord to die right before his eyes. He hated Discord for everything that has happen to him.


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Discord looked up and immediately lifted Luna in between them, like a shield.  Dis gon be gud.

Luna looked up at Yavolin, weakly.  She didn't even react.  She sighed inwardly.

Princess Celestia hurried to the window.  "Oh...no..."

Angel Feather looked up.  Mystical Flow watched from the window.  She covered her eyes.


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Shade woke up from being knocked out... (I was on the slopes today... Man I missed a lot)

 

Celestia said "kill him"

 

Shade quickly surrounded a green sheald around her self and changed into her pony self...

 

Shade poped up infront of Celestia

"I don't think that will happen"

 

Another shade? Poped up infront of yavolin

"I'd like to see you try"

 

There were about 20 shades surrounding them


 

 

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(Occ:dang it!) Yavolin stopped just in time."Discord! let her go, face me now or are you scared"? Yavolin didn't smile  because he nearly killed Luna because of Discord, he hoped that this time he saw shade right in front of him and spoke."Shade , why worked with this snake he has lost and so have you if you help us you will be forgiven if not then punishment is up to celestia and Luna". 


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"Me?  Scared?  Bahaha," he laughed.  "You...you kill me," he said.  Then he laughed some more.  "Oh...I'm clever.  Hey, CELESTIA!  I'm clever aren't I?!"  He grinned.

Princess Celestia stared at Shade.  She glared.  She didn't move from her position.

Luna was still dangling in the air.  She sighed.

Angel Feather looked around at all the Shades.  Which is real?


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Yavolin looked at Discord dead in the eye."Then put Luna down and fight me or have you used to much power to even fight"? Yavolin gave shade one last chance to change sides or he will just have to cut down every clone of shade till gets to the real one. Yavolin waited for discord to show a spot that was exposed to attack. 


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"Oh, I've used a bit too much," Discord said with ease, inspecting his claws.  "Yes, I'd like to go and rest."

Angel Feather closed her eyes.  She imagined the real Shade glowing.  She imagined the silver glow.  She imagined the mutters of the others as they see it.  She imagines it all.

When she opens her eyes, the real Shade is glowing a soft silver.  Angel's eyes flutter.  I...I can't hold it for much longer.


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(Occ:Are we all out doors?)  Yavolin smiled."I knew it you are scared Discord, you weak when the mane 6 deafeated you and you are still weak now"! Yavolin quickly aimed for Discords foot throwing the spear at it hoping to get Discord to let Luna go. Yavolin knew the spear was faster then Discord but he hoped Discord didn't have time to react.


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Discord winced, tightening his grip on Luna.  Luna winced as well.  Not out of pain, but out of disgust.  Discord pulled out the spear and threw it away from him.  (OOC: ew ew ew ew ew)  Discord cocked his head.  "Uhm...oowwh," he said.  "I thought I told you I don't like blood."

He covered his wound with his paw.  "Absolutely disgusting.  Not even sure if I can teleport now," he said in annoyance.  But he knew he could. 

(OOC: Yes.)


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The real shade was still her changeling forum...

 

"Now! How do all of you like my minions? There just regular changeling that I called here... And there not as fun as I am... And they have there goo shot... So... Yavolin back off from discord if you don't want to be attacked by my minions...

 

As for the rest of you... Don't do anything stupid and I won't give the word to bind all of you in there goo"


 

 

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(Occ:please don't leave me behind in the rp, i got to bed soon.) Yavolin looked at shade."Look, shade you don't want to do this, and wear was Discord when you were knocked out shade? he abandoned you like you were nothing to him"! Yavolin hoped to get shade to understand that discord was not to be trusted but seeing how shade was a changeling and needed to feed of love he figure she  should at least run out of power by now. 

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Shade wasn't an ordinary changeling... She dosnt need to feed on love, but she gets more power if she dose... After listening to yavolin...

 

"Wow.... I didn't think of it like that... Discord abandoned me... I... I..."

 

Shade flew closer to yavolin

 

"Your right... Chaos isn't the way to handle things... But he abandon me because..."

 

Shade claped her hoves... The 5 other shades around him shot goo and warped yavolin in the sticky goo... Then shade bucked him in the face

 

" he didn't abandon me... It's my fault that I faild to discord you... So I just laid on the floor... Plus, he had his eye on me"


 

 

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Discord watched, still holding his paw to his bleeding wound.  He made a note to himself to be more careful with Shade.  Personally, he thought she was fine on the ground.  Luna crossed her arms.

Princess Celestia raced downstairs and went outside.  She ran straight for Shade.  Mystical Flow was running beside her.  They prepared to push her over.


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Yavolin was half blind now."Shade, get real, he doesn't care about you much less Nightmare Moon, if he gets the chance he will kill you"! Yavolin hoped that the other elements would come in soon becasue he doesn't know how long he can buy time for a harmonization.


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Shade looked at her minions

"You all look tird... Go back home and rest up"

 

The 20 changeling flew away

 

Shade didn't notes Celestia charging to her

 

"Oh discord! Shall we part? Or stick around and flip canterlot castle upsides down?"

 

"I was going to save my minions for manehatten... But I guess I had to use them here...


 

 

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Yavolin using all of his strength broke free of the goo and sucker punched shade in  the face without even thinking he looked at Discord with one good eye and prepared to attack him , he looked at Luna he would at least put off the wedding for at least a few weeks.


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"Uhm...Shade..." Discord started, about to point a talon at Celestia and Mystical.  A blindfold appeared and wrapped itself around Discord's mouth.  Discord blinked and looked at Angel Feather.

Celestia and Mystical lowered their heads as they ran, they were already about to slam right into her.  This is going to hurt so bad!  Mystical Flow thought.

Discord looked at Yavolin and mumbled something through the blindfold.  He placed his sharp talon against Luna's neck and simply glared at Yavolin.  Luna sighed again.


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(Occ:curse you discord but anyway fixing to go to bed in awhile.) Yavolin looked at Discord waiting for the moment to attack him he couldn't be rash or Discord will kill Luna  It had to be the right moment of weakness that Discord might show or when his claw is away from Luna. he knew this could only end in one way but he hoped that it wasn't true.

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"Oh, I forgot," Discord said.  "You made me bleed, didn't you?"  Discord lowered his talon to Luna's hind leg.  Before she could react, he was craving a heart into her skin.  He then craved in L + Y.  Discord smiled.  Putting his talon back at her neck as Luna winced in pain.  "Cute, isn't it?" he smiled as Luna bleed.

 

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Yavolin looked at Discord he could do nothing to discord just as long he had her yavolin looked down at shade and placed a hoof on her head and looked at Discord."If you don't let go Luna i will kill shade"! he hoped shade was hearing this because he wanted her to know how discord viewed her.


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Discord narrowed his eyes.  "Oh, really, Yavolin?  Lets see who can make a move first shall we?  If you kill her, I kill Luna.  But if I kill Luna, you kill her.  Its seems we're at a bit of a stalemate aren't we, then?"  Discord smiled.  Celestia looked over.  Discord kept his eyes firmly on Yavolin.


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(occ: time to go, please don't go on without me.)   Yavolin looked at Discord."I'll trade you , Luna for shade that's if you you even care for her it would be such as shame to see a face executed at day break for treason against the rulers of Equestria now would it discord"?  Yavolin hoped to get Discord to come to his terms.

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