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Yavolin heard Discord, he was in raged."Discord , your rain of evil ends now and forever". Yavolin pulled out the sword but he could fell that the element of loyalty was reacting to him, he didn't notice he was in a blind rage which can only be satisfied with Discord pleading for mercy.


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Discord disappeared, having gone invisible. 

Celestia gasped.  She grabbed Luna and outstretched her wings.  "Luna, come on!  You have to get out of here!" she cried out.

Luna sprung her wings out and flew as fast as she could.  She soared out the door, Celestia trailing her.  Discord appeared in front of Luna.  Luna gasped and crashed right into him.  Discord took her by the wings and held up up.  Luna screamed.

Celestia and Angel Feather shot at him at the side time but Discord dodged and gave a tug at Luna's wings.  Her wings evaporated into bubbles and Luna fell to the tiled floor.

And just that fast, Discord was gone.


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Yavolin couldn't believe what he just saw happen to Luna, he was angry then he was before, "Lu.. Lu... Luna"? Yavolin knew she was in real danger from Discord, he couldn't have her die , he took of his element of Loyalty and threw it against the wall, he began to think maybe if he took Luna far away from here and don't even bother discord then maybe he'll leave her alone."I got to get you out of here Luna , i can't carry loyalty around if Discord is constantly out to get you, i can't see you die".  Yavolin felt powerless he didn't know what to do. 


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Shades mouth hung open...

* did he just? He's really moving fast... And going far... I.. I guess I gotta do the same... Only when the time comes *

 

"Discord?!?! Luna?!?!"

 

"Celestia! We don't have time to figure out who is what element! And I can bet that discord will be going for you next"


 

 

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Yavolin looked at shade then something clicked together he was with Luna last and  then before that Celestia. He pulled out his sword and aimed it at shade he was going to make this traitor talk."I WANT ANSWERS SHADE! YOU WERE WITH LUNA LAST WHEN DISCORD ATTACKED LEAVING YOU UNHARMED WHY IS THAT"?   Yavolin knew he had her but he wanted to see if she would talk her way out of this one.


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Shade backed away from the sword

 

"In case you haven't notesed"

 

Shade turned to her right side showing that her wing was missing

 

"Discord took my wing... And I saved your mare friend from discords grasp. Now I don't know why nopony trusts me, but don't you want to end discord too?"

 

* I'm starting to loose it... Keep it together keep it together*


 

 

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Luna sat up and stared at the bubbles as they floated down to the ground and popped in acid which sunk through the floor.  She gaped.  "I...I...I..." she turned to Yavolin.  "I...I can't leave.  This is my...my duty...as Princess...I," then Luna's eyes rolled back into her head and she fainted.

Princess Celestia stared down at her little sister who used to be such a powerful Alicorn and was now an earth pony.  "I..." she looked at Shade.  "I...I..."

Celestia turned back to Luna.  She fell to her knees and held Luna tightly.  "Oh, Luna...I'm so sorry..." she whispered, trying extremely hard not to cry.  She ignored Shade and Yavolin behind her.


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"Celestia... What say you? Could one of us really be working for discord? Is that even posible? And why would I work with discord? He's just a crazy big stupid lizard"

 

* come on shade... Keep it together... I can't blow my cover just yet... Unless its time... But it can't be just yet, it can't*


 

 

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Celestia turned to them.  She ran her eyes over each of them, counting slowly in her mind.  Ten.  Ten...  Ten!  But...there were only supposed to be nine...

Celestia stood up, towering over them.  "There are nine elements...and ten of you..." she looked around at them all, her eyes narrowed.  "If you are an imposter, speak now.  There will be dire consequences if you don't.  If you speak, and allow me to keep you here until Discord is destroyed...then I will let you go easy.  But if you don't..." Princess Celestia stopped there.

Mystical Flow stared at Princess Celestia, trying to keep eye contact, afraid she would be accused if she didn't.  She was shaking though.  Some pony here wasn't what they seemed to be. 

Angel Feather shook and stared at the ground in horror.  Its not me, its not me, please don't think its me...


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Shade shooked in fear...

 

* she's on to me, she's on to me, she's on to me... What do I do? What do I do? What do I do*

 

"Oh... And I suppose that everypony will be looking at me, for what reason do they not trust me for? But really... Who is the imposter?"

 

Shade asked hopeing that it was in her most convincing tone... She knew that the time was comeing... But how would she do it? She's still wondering if she should work for discord or not...

 

Then she thought up something to back her up


 

 

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"an imposter?" Electro Dash whispered "who do you think it is?"

"im not sure..." bright spark replied

"i mean it surley cant be me i know that much. and i kinda trust you so i dont think its you either."

Bright Spark decided to ask somepony else. "hey, feather, who do you think it is?"


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Angel looked up at Bright Spark, then looked back at the floor.  "I...I'm not...sure..."

Princess Celestia looked around the room with a stern expression.  She pushed Yavolin behind her, towards Luna.  "I know it isn't you Yavolin.  It'd be hard to fake...the...relationship you have with Luna."

She looked around the room.  She stared at them all.  "Okay, everyone line up.  Tell me your excuse.  Come on, line up!"

Mystical hurried to stand in front of Celestia.  Angel slunk over, slowly to stand somewhere near the back of the line.


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Bright Spark lined up. He didnt exactly know what celestia ment by "excuse" since none of them said anything. then he realised something.

"hey celestia? well if you sent a letter to each element, then just check to see who has a letter on them. or couldnt you use i dunno, magic or something?"


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Celestia nodded at him.  "We can check for letters, but I would also like your excuses.  And I must save my energy."  Celestia looked down at Mystical Flow.  Mystical Flow looked back at her, staring straight at her.  "Excuse?" Celestia asked.

"Well, for one thing, I calmed down your sister.  And Discord is a jerk.  Uhm...so...I'm not the imposter?" she said.  "Uhm...that is what I'm supposed to say right?"

Celestia stared at her.  Mystical stared right back, unblinking.  Celestia sighed.  "Okay."

Mystical gave a short bow and walked over to Yavolin.  Celestia looked at Bright Spark.


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"i was in this very castle for the first couple of hours today installing those cameras remember? and besides, i though of the letters." he handed the letters back to electo, rose and mystic. "so, im not an imposter i guess?" Electro Dash watched, not knowing what to say.


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Celestia nodded at him.  "Okay," she sighed.  She then nodded at Electro Dash and Rose Petal to say it was okay.  She noticed Angel Feather behind her, cowering at the floor.  I'm doing this wrong.  But for Luna.  I must.  I have to make sure she is protected at all costs.  No matter what, I can't lose her again.  She looked over at North Arrow.

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"well umm," Electro Dash didn't know what to say "well, im. im not grey and im not questioning your power as our leader and." she looked around the room franticly, "im, honest perhaps?" Electro Dash's heart rate increased. the nerves of bieng called an imposter. she rememberd what celestia had said if they didnt admit it. what if celestia thinks that she's the imposter?


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Princess Celestia stared at her for a moment.  Then she waved Electro to stand behind her.  "Okay," she said gently.

Angel Feather looked up in surprise when she realized it was her turn.  Angel stepped forward shakily and bowed.  Princess Celestia raised an eyebrow as Angel stuttered.  "i..I'm...I'm not...working...uhm...he...locked me...uhm...in my room..."

Princess Celestia stared at her.  "Look me in the eye, my little pony."

Angel Feather stared at the floor for a moment and then gave a quick glance upwards.  Celestia nodded at her.  "Okay, go ahead."

Princess Celestia turned to North Arrow as Angel scurried past her.


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Yavolin suspected shade for working with Discord, but he couldn't risk shade going after Luna , so he said nothing but found it kinda strange that when shade is around discord is always there after Luna. he walked over to Luna , and placed a wing around her to reassure her that he was going to be with her.


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Shade walk up to Celestia, she may not get past this point... But I was worth the shot

 

"Celestia, may I start by saying that, back when the six became elements... There were only 5 known elements. And it said that the 6 would appear after a spark...

But my excuse... I helped you up when you were struck down by discord... I saved most of Luna... And I'm pritty sure that I hate discord"

 

She was hopeing that would work


 

 

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Yavolin looked over at shade."But lets not forget that when Celestia was around you Discord attacked Celestia leaving you unharmed then the same thing happen to Luna, i will come clean if i were you shade  i hear the canterlot jail cells are mostly warm this time of year". Yavolin hoped that shade will come clean.


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"Sigh* my wing. It's gone... Remember? He took it once I helped Luna escape... And when he attacked Celestia, before leaving he said you ponies are fun to mess with... I don't know but..."

 

Then another idea poped

 

"Wait... The elements of harmony are supost to be friends... What if discords trying to pervent that?"

 


 

 

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North Arrow didn't seem to realise he was being addressed right away (On account of me sleeping). He shuffled his hooves, and mumbled, "I haven't really done anything, other than ask Rose Petal to release this one-" He flicked at Shade with his tail "-during Discord's attack in Everfree Forest."

 

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Rose flushed. She knew who the impostor was, all right. And she hoped Celestia wouldn't just let her go.


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Yavolin growled."Yes indeed but we have nine elements and ten ponies here and one of us is a traitor and you my dear friend are a extra which as me wondering why you are even here? I think you are the most suspicious  pony here any pony here can clearly see that".


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Lightning Dancer was blowing up a pink balloon, and was just about to tie it closed when it rushed out of her hand. It flew wildly around the room, doing 180's and 360's until finally crashing at high speed... into Metal.

 

It hit him right on his cheek, and if you didn't think that would hurt, you are mistaken. "Ah! What was that?", Metal said annoyed.

 

"My balloon. Sorry.", replied Lightning.

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