Jump to content

writing One to shine


Ferret Girl

Recommended Posts

End of the line

A beginning, in new world times

Of all despise, hate and greed

To one which shines above the rest

All alone with its shining, and by such, forgotten

Left to be what it should have been, but never more useful now in its run

 

Being itself, now in ruin

By all means of shining stars that shown just as bright

Among all hate, in words and in bodies

Unto such days, the forgotten meaning

No longer alone

Rather, accompanied by all

 

On this day

Others which may as well rectify

Pacify all hopes of need

The want need not return.

 

 

-David favret

  • Brohoof 3

pb.png

Link to comment
Share on other sites

 

End of the line

The cycle is nearly complete.

A beginning, in new world times

I arise, at the start of another cycle.

Of all despise, hate and greed

I suffered the needless pain

To one which shines above the rest

My heart stayed true.

All alone with its shining, and by such, forgotten

and no pony knew, how special I am.

Left to be what it should have been, but never more useful now in its run

The time for my knowledge is now.

Being itself, now in ruin

I'm at my lowest once again.

By all means of shining stars that shown just as bright

I have nothing left but love to give

Among all hate, in words and in bodies

outside the chaos for the herd.

Unto such days, the forgotten meaning

Love is free to give.

No longer alone

None of us are ever alone

Rather, accompanied by all

because all are one.

 

On this day

When first it plays

Others which may as well rectify

what shall become of thy wrong doings

Pacify all hopes of need

For what I have to share is needed by all

The want need not return.

For what you think you want is wrong.

 

 

-David favret

 

 

I seriously don't really know what came over me but for some crazy insane reason I felt a really deep need to translate it or something.

  • Brohoof 1

For I have saved your soul in the heavens, and now save it on the ground. - TwilighCelunaCircuits

 

Link to comment
Share on other sites

I seriously don't really know what came over me but for some crazy insane reason I felt a really deep need to translate it or something.

I absolutely loved that.

 

Almost want to implement that to my poem/

 

All except for the word pony though.

I keep all poetry pony free.


pb.png

Link to comment
Share on other sites

I absolutely loved that.

 

Almost want to implement that to my poem/

 

All except for the word pony though.

I keep all poetry pony free.

 

I can understand that but I see it differently. Sometimes when you are about to do something and there's that part you inside that begins to think; why even bother. So you ask the universe to guide you. So your poem guided me, and I left my guide behind in return.

  • Brohoof 1

For I have saved your soul in the heavens, and now save it on the ground. - TwilighCelunaCircuits

 

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Create an account or sign in to comment

You need to be a member in order to leave a comment

Create an account

Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!

Join the herd!

Sign in

Already have an account? Sign in here.

Sign In Now
×
×
  • Create New...