writing Never gone

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

On days like this,

With my memory, still intact.

Recollection of thoughts gone by

 

The dead will not forgive your sins,

And so niether shall you die again.

I wish i could believe that.

 

Wake me up in many years time,

Know that the end of beginnings leaves many scars.

A scar on who we are.

 

And so as I let my memory rest,

like the times when dead men roamed,

I find all ends to my interpretation of grace.

 

[Jghx5 33]

 

ok I may but you seem have written something sad and calling out help.

 

Your trying to tell the world how your soul feels

 

Or you needed people to proof read this for school.

 

Never the less the video state my opinion.

[MelancholicMemory 2,025]

The meaning is a little ambiguous, yet at the same time this poem seems to really resonate with me. Like always, this is a beautiful poem.

Edited December 6, 2012 by MelancholicMemory

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

ok I may but you seem have written something sad and calling out help.   Your trying to tell the world how your soul feels   Or you needed people to proof read this for school.   Never the less the video state my opinion.

 

 

Ii don't expect anyone on here to understand the meaning I held when I wrote this, nor shall I reveal it.

 

You don't get it?  What is there to get, or even understand in poetry?

Words arranged in a fashion that reflect the state of mind / emotion of a writer, through which they write for memory's sake.

 

I write purely for the sake of keeping my mind on track. And by such, producing these configuration of words. No, they dont make sense. My poems seldom do, but of course, this is opinionated by bias from different people. As I myself held an idea whilst writing this.

 

And no, my cry for help is not held in these verses, rather, in "Destruction of the Heart" But, I expect that even if you were to read that, much would confuse you so. Still, if you wish, here is the link.

http://mlpforums.com/topic/41207-destruction-of-the-heart/

 

 

 

The meaning is a little ambiguous, yet at the same time this poem seems to really resonate with me. Like always, this is a beautiful poem.

As I was stating to the poster before you, the meaning truly is an obscure one. This poem is a short experience of mind that i am attempting after depression.

 

Thank you for the compliment by the way.