Story Board Thing For A Comic

[Feather Gem 967]

 

I know it looks horrible.

Thats because I usually draw by hand.

Not with a mouse xD

 

Maybe if I got encouragement I'd bother to do it instead of lazing around.

 

Its two of my OCs.  Angel Feather and Mystical Flow.

 

First Panel:

Angel Feather sobs

 

Second Panel:

She feels a hoof on her shoulder.

 

Third Panel:

She looks up with tears in her eyes.

 

Fourth Panel:

Mystical Flow smiles down at her, tears in her eyes as well.

 

Fifth Panel:

They sob into each others shoulders, hugging each other tight.

 

Should I do it?

[Hazardus_Havard. 480]

Why exactly are they crying?  There's no context as to a reasoning for them to be crying.  Without that, it's not a very good feels comic.  Give us a reason to empathize with your characters, cause otherwise we, as viewers, only see two OC's crying.  And we're going to question why the entire time.

 

Unless you're just wanting to draw a comic of two OC's crying and hugging one another for no other reason than just to see it happen.  And if that's all you really want, just do that on a single image for your drawing.  That way, you can have more attention to that one image over the actual comic.

[Night Shine 769]

Agree w/ Hazardus here. If you want to make something feelzy just for the sake of making something feelzy, go ahead! Do it! but nopony else is going to get it

 

So yeah, unfortunately some explanation would be required in order for others to appreciate it :\ I'm sorry.

It looks like a great start tho! :3

[Feather Gem 967]

Why exactly are they crying?  There's no context as to a reasoning for them to be crying.  Without that, it's not a very good feels comic.  Give us a reason to empathize with your characters, cause otherwise we, as viewers, only see two OC's crying.  And we're going to question why the entire time.

 

Unless you're just wanting to draw a comic of two OC's crying and hugging one another for no other reason than just to see it happen.  And if that's all you really want, just do that on a single image for your drawing.  That way, you can have more attention to that one image over the actual comic.

 

 

Agree w/ Hazardus here. If you want to make something feelzy just for the sake of making something feelzy, go ahead! Do it! but nopony else is going to get it

 

So yeah, unfortunately some explanation would be required in order for others to appreciate it :\ I'm sorry.

It looks like a great start tho! :3

 

 

But that's the point. xD

You're not supposed to know.

You're supposed to wonder.

You're supposed to question it.

 

The title of it will probably be: You're Not Alone