visual art Some Artistical feedback Please?

[MeanBlackHawk 147]

Give me your valued feedback fellow bronies and pegasisters!    (but please be gentle  )

 

Though I have one request, please remember these are artworks that I found digging through my messy room.  These are not current so I will not be making any changes to them, I just thought it would be nice to share this rare find (at least for me), of some pieces of crap which I called art back around when I was 12-14. 

 

The first piece was being draw out of sheer anger, but somehow it got turned around into being my actual school project for one of my classes and I wanted your feedback. The background says "unforgivable" over and over......... It took forever to write it and I had a serious hand cramp afterwards.  I found it and I was ever so proud of it when I finished it, so I want your feedback fellow ponies. 

 

 

The second piece was me bored and I decided to draw some random shape, and it started to work out and I just continued off of that shape.  Can you guess what it says?

It reads:

"I
Am
Elite"

 

 

 

Last but not least is the most recent one (being that it was made in the 9th grade).  I was really proud of this piece of work for a while because I had incorporated so many different things I saw (and liked) from others into this drawing; the brick wall, the goo, the shading and the crappy lightning. 

 

 

Well that's all I hath found.  So enjoyeth this artwork from thy fellow brony.

[crazitaco 596]

woah, i was just looking at the first one, and i thought those were supposed to be bullets in the background, but then i read its actually handwriting! cool!

[MeanBlackHawk 147]

woah, i was just looking at the first one, and i thought those were supposed to be bullets in the background, but then i read its actually handwriting! cool!

You have no idea what this comment meant sir.  Your artwork is amazing. I appreciate it a lot. 

 

So how did you even get that good with an iphone? I can't even draw yet ur doing circles around me!