So then I drew this

[tylerdavasel 32]

Drew the Celestia picture earlier this week, then I drew this one. 

 

http://sugnamustart.deviantart.com/art/DJ-PON-3-Funk-Deluxe-Dance-It-Off-remix-353029789

 

I've drawn a Luna/Nightmare Moon picture also, but it's very unimpressive.

[Rainbow Dash 1,472]

do not sell yourself short my friend all three of your mlp drawings are superb. keep up the good work! I look forward to seeing more art from you.

[MiStErUnMeRry 328]

Looking good buddy. You got some shadowing going on there buts it not overly complex, you an attempt at some posture. It pretty close to the shows style and that some study at times if your not used to cartoony stuff-like me- and theres even a nice simple black background to contrast against the white character. I like what you have done with the glasses, simple reflection but nice little changes in tone. It doesn't really pop out though.

 

A little bit more flash with those lenses might spark it up a little but I wouldn't say its really needed. What could help it though is changing the color of the middle of the record disc, just slap some brown or red. Something to make her own body stand out, right now its all sort of blend most of torso and absorbs some of her focus, a little shine on the rims of that  too of that black record won't go amiss, I don't think it will over shadow her in the foreground. The only other thing I could Maaaybe...say about her is...

 

her head comes off as a little big...weighted even when compared to her legs. That could just be me though, not totally sure on that one. I can't tell if its me or the way her neck is bent. So...that opinion isn't very useful really.

[tylerdavasel 32]

Looking good buddy. You got some shadowing going on there buts it not overly complex, you an attempt at some posture. It pretty close to the shows style and that some study at times if your not used to cartoony stuff-like me- and theres even a nice simple black background to contrast against the white character. I like what you have done with the glasses, simple reflection but nice little changes in tone. It doesn't really pop out though.

 

A little bit more flash with those lenses might spark it up a little but I wouldn't say its really needed. What could help it though is changing the color of the middle of the record disc, just slap some brown or red. Something to make her own body stand out, right now its all sort of blend most of torso and absorbs some of her focus, a little shine on the rims of that  too of that black record won't go amiss, I don't think it will over shadow her in the foreground. The only other thing I could Maaaybe...say about her is...

 

her head comes off as a little big...weighted even when compared to her legs. That could just be me though, not totally sure on that one. I can't tell if its me or the way her neck is bent. So...that opinion isn't very useful really.

 

Well, I'm still getting used to the design, close to the cartoon or not. And wow, I don't know how I didn't think to not use a white vinyl label XD I guess I was too focused on what vinyl to use that I didn't think "hey, it's light!" I'll change that part real quick. The head size, though, harder to change; I'll just attempt to fix that proportion on my next picture.

 

[edit] I fixed it! (i hope XD)

Edited February 8, 2013 by tylerdavasel