Experimental fanfic: The diaries of Cyber Pulse

[~Chaotic Eddie~ 479]

So yeah. I decided to write a fanfic involving 2 OCs, in a kind of diary-style. I don't know if anyone's done this before, and from what I've heard it's not a typical style.

 

The fic is still in progress, but watch this space. When it's finished I'll say so.

All I want to know is: Is it good, Is this a good idea and should I continue writing this?

 

Here's a link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fCBNnIFjPBZecMrPqkEvgsx2TljAdUgsfh-Y__9Ue88/edit?usp=sharing