Derpy lineart!

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This is my derpy line art, please feel free to criticize it as much as much as you like because i really need to work on future drawings. check out my deviantart: http://horseandraisins.deviantart.com/

 

 

Thanks for watching

[Limey 524]

That's really good. I especially like the scruffy look of her coat, nice and fluffy

As for criticism, her front legs are WAY too short, you may want to extend them, and the wing pointing in the air looks a little...off. Other than that, It's really good, keep up the good work!

[Pulcinella 1,016]

OMG DERPY. I like, nice design. The wings look a little... Overdone. Otherwise, it's really good. Keep up the good work, definitely better than mine.

[Zygen 6,066]

Looks pretty good i'd say . The scruffy coat is a bit different then what I'm use to, but its not an error or anything, just a style preference really.

 

I feel like maybe the body or the front hoofs may be a bit out of proportion, something about that area feels a bit strange, but I'm not really sure.

 

Overall it looks pretty good to me though, keep up the good work .

[Drahgoon 152]

Very fluffy! Like previously said, it looks good, but the anatomy of her legs looks a little off. The wings could also use a more organized feather layout. Looking forward to more art from you! Really love the Teemo drawing on your deviantART as well.