(Visual) TheLivingTombstone Remix: Pinkie's brew

[PipsqueakThePirate 51]

Hey guys! I just recently heard that new LT remix of pinkie's brew, and just HAD to make a visual for it!


Here ya go, and tell me what you think! 

 

[Mlpfan185 1,763]

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Edited October 10, 2018 by NONAME

[PipsqueakThePirate 51]

That is a nice little lightshow, and as you can see from my videos. I do very little in the way of visuals, however, I do have a few suggestions.

 

1.)  I would do some original art for Pinkie, Apple Bloom, and Tombstone. Even if it was just a vectorization of what is there.

2.) I would do something with the wavelines, like circle them around the portal.

3.) The laser-show is nice, but it feels premature, I would have saved that for around 1:50.

4.) Perhaps the scene could have been dark except for an emitter from the location of the portal. With only Pinkie and Apple Bloom's faces illuminated. Then after each blank out, you could have the scene come back a bit brighter.

 

Either-way, a nice little lightshow. Just my 2 cents on it.

LOL more like 4 cents, but ok! I really do appreciate the constructive criticism, it does indeed help with how I make my videos!   

[Mlpfan185 1,763]

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Edited October 10, 2018 by NONAME

[PipsqueakThePirate 51]

Again, I really do appreciate the feedback, I really find it useful. Say. . . You're not working on any projects that require . . . VISUAL EFFECTS. . . are you?

[Mlpfan185 1,763]

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Edited October 10, 2018 by NONAME

[PipsqueakThePirate 51]

Sounds GOOD! I always love making things for other people. Just let me know what you want specifically. That way I can fulfill your guys' dream! :D