visual art Party Time!

[SuperFlapjack 32]

I have Created a non - pony related drawing and I want to share it with the bronies, it is of a girl, I guess a bit like me, who is partying I am 12 years old so don't be all like thats awful, but I would like some "constructive" criticism to make me better.

here is the pencil coloured version:

 

 

 

here is the graphically coloured one so far, I'm in the middle of colouring it on paint:

 

 

 

I will post the finshed product, when it is a finished product!

REMEMBER: I am 12 years old so don't be all like thats awful, but I would like some "constructive" criticism to make me better.

 

If Photos didn't work here are links:

Sketched: http://s1294.photobucket.com/user/SuperFlapjack1/media/PartyTimeDrawingScannedintoComputer_zpsf2eddec3.png.html?sort=3&o=1

 

 

 

Coloured (sorta) :http://s1294.photobucket.com/user/SuperFlapjack1/media/PartyTimeDrawingScannedintoComputerGraphicallycoloured_zpsb36afbb7.png.html?sort=3&o=0

 

 

Sorry Pics Didn't work just click on link! Hope Ya like it, criticism is needed so go ahead with it 100 chars needed so byeeee

At the moment I just need to fill in the hair, I know for those bronies who hate paint it's not a very good programme to use but I know it well + stuff!

[~SadisticFluttershy~ 779]

When i saw the topic name Party Time. I thought i was gonna see Pinkie Pie  .

 

Oh well. Still decent though. I'm not gonna be rude and be all corrective.

 

Here's a link to a piece of my art: http://mlpforums.com/topic/56910-bad-little-girl/

Edited May 6, 2013 by ~Chaotic Fluttershy~

[Jokuc 8,174]

It's not bad, not bad at all actually. Of course it could use some improvements, cause well, everything can.

 

I would like to see the hands next time! I know that my little sister draws a lot, but whenever she tries to draw a person she makes that person have his/her hands behind their back, like in this drawing. Practice at drawing hands.

 

It's hard to tell how you can improve the other things, but just draw, draw and draw again. Try look at some 3D objects in real life and then draw them.

 

By the way, you're handwriting looks better than mine

[Darkshift 85]

Not being an art master but still having enough knowledge to deem a simple review of your art.I admit they are not perfect however I can see potential in your work therefore I believe if you worked hard on your art you could one day be a successful artist.

[dash360 102]

Thats alot better than what i could do at your age. Remember practice makes (somewhat) perfect. Keep up with the art and watch as many tutorial videos as you can. You will get alot better in time.

[SuperFlapjack 32]

Thanks for all the support guys, I knew this forum would have kind people in it and thanks for the criticism too!   Sorry to dissapoint you Chaotic Fluttershy but this isn't pinkie, It could be if you BELIEVE narly done colouring it, I will post the coloured version once it's finsihed and Jokuc Every time I try drawing Hands it just goes wrong although it turned out okay on my human RainbowDash drawing hehe

[Jokuc 8,174]

 

 

and Jokuc Every time I try drawing Hands it just goes wrong

 

Yeah I knew that. That's why you gotta draw hands more you know! To get better. It won't take a day to learn it plus you have to start somewhere

[Jokuc 8,174]

Protip: Don't do what you just did. It's against the forums rules to put a bunch of random stuff in your comments just to fill out the 100 char minimum limit.

 

But again, practice and you'll see you get better

Edited May 11, 2013 by akita-ken

[SuperFlapjack 32]

heres the finished and coloured digitally great amazing masterpiece only joking but it'spretty cool hahahahahahahaha

 

Link: http://s1294.photobucket.com/user/SuperFlapjack1/media/PartyTimeDrawingScannedintoComputerGraphicallycoloured_zps0a1b30a1.png.html

 

Urm tell me what ya think about this version - The Good, Bad, Ugly?

Tell me what you want!

 

This is not supposed to be on this section of the forum so I'm sorry but I might start taking requests, humans only so tell me what you might want, maybe human ponies, I've done mane 6, vinyl scratch, applebloom, scootaloo, not sweetie belle yet! so yeah cya later!

 

Oh I'm sorry Jokuc it's just that if I'm doing a post and not starting a forum page, I usually can't use the 100 char min so I'm really sorry!

Edited May 7, 2013 by SuperFlapjack