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"Of course it's possible for peace" he said an a cheerful tone "for one I've been pondering an idea for a peace treaty that mite solve the predicament for both the changelings and equestrians but then again I have no authority to proceed with the act seeing that I don't know how the princess would react to an outsider such as my self middling in the affairs" he look at chrysalis then look back at the camera "now to answer your other question I don't really know how I feel about the changelings number 1 I never met a changeling before I've only heard from others and how I feel about chrysalis...she's the most wonderful person I've ever met, I think you all should think twice before judging a person you should get to know them first before you make accusations I bet half of you don't know why she did what she did in canterlot there is good reason why she did it more will be explain in the future for now let's move on"

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Rarity hugged Fluttershy in a decorative manner... well, at least til Pinkie bounced up and pulled all the ponies into a massive group hug. "I've missed you all so much!" Pinkie said, somehow managing to hug four ponies at once. "But where's Rainbow?"

 

Cicada had made the call as directed, then sat back and waited for the arrival.


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"Oh, Rarity!" Fluttershy returned the hug with gusto. "I missed you too!" Once released from the hug--after some length of time--she took in Rarity's dress--selective of course--and giggled. "I guess this means we skipped a spa trip. I'm ever so sorry about that. Oh, and Rainbow Dash should be coming soon. We'll have everypony here!"


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Jack took the final turn a bit too fast, and ended up plowing his virtual car straight into the wall. He figured he'd had enough "re-familiarization" for one night, and got up.

"Glad to see that we'll have the whole rest of the gang here," Jack said, getting up from his chair. It was a bit embarrassing, as his wrecked (virtual) racecar was clearly shown onscreen. "Figured I had enough practice for one night. I never drive well when tired."


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"Rainbow should be here in the next few minutes," Shawn answered as he put his phone away. "I just got off the phone with Cecy-- she's riding with my brother and Rainbow, along with the kid that went with her to Scotland." "Well, you'd better kiss your ass goodbye, then!" Colette joked. "Rainbow's gonna bury ya when she gets here!" She then turned to Jack as the mares all hugged each other. "You into racing games??" she aslked, clearly showing her knowledge of who Jack was.

 

((What about the princess, Red??))

 

 

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It wasn't long until Stephen had pulled up to the curb of their destination, getting out himself before opening the door for all of his passengers. "Just head on up to the door. I'll grab your things." He said to both Rainbow and Dennis. Shawn had already arranged for an apartment for their party, and Stephen wasn't planning on staying too long…

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"No, you didn't take too long," Stephen said as Dennis got back into the car. "You got everything? I'm not really up for making any return trips..."

 

Stephen then made his way to Colette's house after making another call to his brother, letting him know they were on the way.

 

@@Pripyat Pony, @,

 

((Waiting on you guys!))

 

Applejack tipped her hat as she was invited inside. The second she saw Fluttershy and Pinkie, she ran up to them and hugged them tight. "Long time, no see! I missed ya!" After greeting them, Applejack sat in the living room with the others, waiting for Dash too.

 

 

"Of course it's possible for peace" he said an a cheerful tone "for one I've been pondering an idea for a peace treaty that mite solve the predicament for both the changelings and equestrians but then again I have no authority to proceed with the act seeing that I don't know how the princess would react to an outsider such as my self middling in the affairs" he look at chrysalis then look back at the camera "now to answer your other question I don't really know how I feel about the changelings number 1 I never met a changeling before I've only heard from others and how I feel about chrysalis...she's the most wonderful person I've ever met, I think you all should think twice before judging a person you should get to know them first before you make accusations I bet half of you don't know why she did what she did in canterlot there is good reason why she did it more will be explain in the future for now let's move on"

 

 

Rarity hugged Fluttershy in a decorative manner... well, at least til Pinkie bounced up and pulled all the ponies into a massive group hug. "I've missed you all so much!" Pinkie said, somehow managing to hug four ponies at once. "But where's Rainbow?"

 

Cicada had made the call as directed, then sat back and waited for the arrival.

 

 

@@Pripyat Pony,

 

"Oh, Rarity!" Fluttershy returned the hug with gusto. "I missed you too!" Once released from the hug--after some length of time--she took in Rarity's dress--selective of course--and giggled. "I guess this means we skipped a spa trip. I'm ever so sorry about that. Oh, and Rainbow Dash should be coming soon. We'll have everypony here!"

 

 

 
 
 
 
 
 
Jack took the final turn a bit too fast, and ended up plowing his virtual car straight into the wall. He figured he'd had enough "re-familiarization" for one night, and got up.
"Glad to see that we'll have the whole rest of the gang here," Jack said, getting up from his chair. It was a bit embarrassing, as his wrecked (virtual) racecar was clearly shown onscreen. "Figured I had enough practice for one night. I never drive well when tired."

 

 

@@Dawn Stripes, @, @@Pripyat Pony, @, @, @@Fireblaze,

 

"Rainbow should be here in the next few minutes," Shawn answered as he put his phone away. "I just got off the phone with Cecy-- she's riding with my brother and Rainbow, along with the kid that went with her to Scotland." "Well, you'd better kiss your ass goodbye, then!" Colette joked. "Rainbow's gonna bury ya when she gets here!" She then turned to Jack as the mares all hugged each other. "You into racing games??" she aslked, clearly showing her knowledge of who Jack was.

 

((What about the princess, Red??))

 

 

***

 

It wasn't long until Stephen had pulled up to the curb of their destination, getting out himself before opening the door for all of his passengers. "Just head on up to the door. I'll grab your things." He said to both Rainbow and Dennis. Shawn had already arranged for an apartment for their party, and Stephen wasn't planning on staying too long…

(Ok Going add this and con tune the RP)

 

Then Charles Cell Phone rings as Charles took it and looking at the others. "I am going to take this in the other room." Then Charles take his laptop computer into the other room and then began to answer the phone.

 

"Hello?" Charles saying

 

"Charles it me your Boss, We got a Problem and it involved with your pony friends. CIA just order a capture on the Ponies since we NSA didn't think the Ponies you say are a threat but they don't believe us. Since this is a Matter of National Matter I am giving you a mission to protect those ponies at all cost and keep the CIA getting them or they will take them to Area 51 since it reopened." Boss saying

 

"How did the CIA know?" Charles saying. "Our Lines were encrypt and we have the best firewall in the world."

 

"Somehow they listen into our Phones since We found the bugs in our Agency and I am not happy what the CIA did overstep there boundaries." The boss saying

 

"Did the President or Vice President order the CIA to go after the Ponies?" Charles saying

 

"I ask the President and Vice President my self. They say no so it could be a member of the Converge or a Any country like Russia or China or NK or any Country want those ponies." Boss saying.

 

"So someone have to be higher up or a CIA Director to order the strike with out the President knowing but who?" Charles saying

 

"We are trying to find that out, also CIA was in San Diego after you guys left and lucky they didn't see you so we trying keep the CIA gusting were you are and right now your mission Protect those ponies, I will download you a Device that can keep the CIA out of your Laptop, Cellphones and the host Phones lines so they won't be bug and also maintain a Radio silent contact until I contact you again when the CIA let off the search. So this is your boss sining out." Boss saying as the connection went off, then a Download Program came into Charles Computer.

 

Then Charles open it, then began to read it and then he download the program. It went into his computer, His Cellphone, Host Phones and his friends cellphones too. *There CIA won't be bugging us anymore now and now it my Job to protect those ponies with my life.* Then he looking around and hope no one hear that conversation.

 

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"Rainbow should be here in the next few minutes," Shawn answered as he put his phone away. "I just got off the phone with Cecy-- she's riding with my brother and Rainbow, along with the kid that went with her to Scotland." "Well, you'd better kiss your ass goodbye, then!" Colette joked. "Rainbow's gonna bury ya when she gets here!" She then turned to Jack as the mares all hugged each other. "You into racing games??" she aslked, clearly showing her knowledge of who Jack was.

 

((What about the princess, Red??))

 

 

***

 

It wasn't long until Stephen had pulled up to the curb of their destination, getting out himself before opening the door for all of his passengers. "Just head on up to the door. I'll grab your things." He said to both Rainbow and Dennis. Shawn had already arranged for an apartment for their party, and Stephen wasn't planning on staying too long…

(Lol, whoops!)

Twilight was enthralled to see Fluttershy made it back in one piece. She knew that she would be able to take care of herself in this world, but she still had her doubts.

"Fluttershy! Pinkie Pie!" Twilight shouted, running to hug her friends. "It's been so long! I was starting to get worried! How have you girls held up so far?"


Gotta learn stuff through denial and error.

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Rainbow unlatched the door to the car, took a deep breath, and opened the door.

 

Though Fluttershy had been reduced to human ears, she seemed to hear the door opening with almost Pinkie-like senses from across the house. Or maybe it was the blinking of headlights through a gauntlet-filter of windows. At all regards, she was out past the porch by the time anypony else had reached the front door.

 

Rainbow Dash barely had time to strike her sorry, simultaneously careless, dashing and rueful pose. She might have waved tiredly if a soft yellow butterfly hadn't crashed into her at several  hundred miles per hour.

Fluttershy had Rainbow wrapped in a hug before she could do so much as protest. She covered the taller girl in kisses, proceeding sloppily from the base of her neck up Rainbow's cheeck, and washing her bruises with desperate, warm tears.

Rainbow Dash inserted a pair of hands between their shoulders and gently, but firmly, pried them apart. While Fluttershy clapped two hands over her mouth to hold back any number of things from coming out, Rainbow wiped her cheeks vigorously with a sleeve and smiled apologetically at the front door crowd, as if she could apologize for the scene just transpired. They had agreed this wouldn't happen, hadn't they?

"Rain--I--I--"

Seeing the front verge of a breakdown, Rainbow Dash's eyes widened in full-on panic. She put her hands back on Fluttershy's shoulders--gently this time. "Fluttershy," she said, then ran out of words. "Just---calm down, okay? It..." she sighed. "I--it's okay..."

Flutterhsy nodded, hummingbird fast, then fled past the others into the house before she could do anything else.

 

Rainbow Dash tried that prodigal-daughter pose again, with a hand behind her neck and feet spread like a cowboy. That wasn't awkward at all.

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@@Dawn Stripes@@Hypn0ticD"Nah it's all cool i'm ready!" he says as he puts his stuff in the trunk and resumes his position in the back seat. ((OOC:You missed a good oportunity by not coming inside Rainbow Dash... *wink-nudge-wink* Sorry i had to make that reaction to Hypnotic))

When they arrived at Colette's house Dennis was a bit nervous. Ironically this might mean the end of his mission, he had done what Dash asked, and he feared that he was no longer needed. He saw a woman who appeared to be Fluttershy hugging Rainbow, and he thought that this might be one of those last moment he was gonna spend with her. He didn't think the moment was akward at all, in fact given the circumstances Rainbow had been through he expected that something like this would be happenning. 

He smiled back at her reaction of this akward situation, but he didn't know that there was a tear at his eyes too. He had mixed feelings about the moment but this was still a happy moment, or at least thats how he was supposed to feel right? But things don't always go the right way... the mind is a crazy thing able to do just that and mess up with your mood. He had to keep appearances though.

"I am very happy for you Rainbow... you must feel relieved to see Fluttershy healthy and all."

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"Thank you for your kind words David. Your continuous support has given me the strength i need. It seems i am lucky to know humans like you. Very lucky indeed... "

She aproached him... but remembering as they were being watched by the camera and couldn't just turn it off she switched the subject blushing a little bit.

"I'll admit it... wasn't kind to them, but there is a reason for that too. If i acted too much "in character" i was bound to be the victim of "immersion". "Immersion is a physocological phenomenon where are experiences "things" too vividly that he is "lost" to that experience. I will not deny that there are insecurities in some changelings about how they look like... having holes doesn't always compliment your body. The point is that if a changeling stays too long in the form of someone... he/she dies. Not litterally of course but mentaly, it also depends on the mental capacity of the shapeshifter. If someone stays too long in one form they start to actually believe they are the one they are impersonating, or the persona they created for themselves and transformed into. Grabbing this chance i would like to say that there might be some changelings in pony society still under this effect, but they are no longer under my command."

Again she shifted her hands, a little un-comfortable because of what she was about to say.

"I am not without mistakes, i too have dissapointed my own people. The fact that i got carried away by the haze of power is something i don't know if i can forgive myself doing. But let me ask you something... If you had one chance, one oportunity to seize everything you ever wanted... Would you capture it? Or just let it slip?" 

((OOC:You see what i did there?))

 

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"Yeah," Rainbow drawled out of the side of her mouth..."You know, it is. Woulda' been nice if she could say hi to me in a normal way. I'll go find her again later, make sure she doesn't give herself a heart attack..."

 

At that Rainbow grimaced, her face painted over with a breif shot of guilt and misery before composing itself into lacakdaisical mischeif, carefully, once more. "So uh...meet the gang."


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Applejack walked over to Rainbow and Fluttershy, deciding to go easy on Dash after Fluttershy's dramatic little scene. She laughed, putting a hand on Fluttershy's shoulder. "Calm down, Fluttershy. I can't blame ya though. I'm glad the gang's back together." She walked over to Rainbow Dash, "It's nice to have ya back, RD."

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Pinkie rushed at Rainbow and hugged her. Somehow, streamers shot out of nowhere as she did so. "Oh my Celestia, I've missed you so much and I was all alone and I got on a train and got here and beat Colette on a computer game and now we're all back together!" she yelled all in one breath.

 

Cicada stood to one side, unsmiling. It was difficult for her, being a changeling by herself. She wished that her Queen was there.


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Colette caught full sight of Fluttershy's show of affection towards Rainbow Dash, losing the nerve to yell at the brash Pegasus for the moment. Without a second thought, she. approached Rainbow, giving her a hug as soon as the other mares were finished greeting her. "Are ya done flying around the world, or were you planning to go to China to find Twilight next??" Colette asked as she released Rainbow from the hug. She caught sight of Fluttershy round the corner into her room-- she'd have to go and see how she was holding up in a moment!

 

"Now that you're here, the gang's all assembled!" She then put an arm around Rainbow's shoulders, leading her into the living room. She then introduced her to the men, pointing to each in turn. "This is Jack, the guy who found AJ*, this is Charles, the guy who found Rarity--" "--and I'm the man who signed his death warrant!" Stephen's doppelganger interjected. "I kissed Fluttershy, but I brought her here safe and sound!" Colette smirked at him before finishing. "No killing 'im!" she said, flashing Rainbow a stern look. "Pinkie here found me, and she's our new roommate."

 

It was then Colette caught sight of Shawn's mirror image standing with a black haired woman, along with Dennis. "You're TWINS??" Colette said as she looked back and forth between them. "Yep. I'm Stephen, and this is Cecy. Dennis, you already know, I take it??"

 

"Yeah, we go to the same school," Colette said as she looked at him. "So you're the guy who went to Scotland with Brash??"

 

((*Congrats, Red! Jack has been promoted to Pony Finder!))

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@@Hypn0ticD,@@Dawn Stripes,  Dennis raised his eyebrow ironically "Yea... that's me... You needn't tease her now, what's done is done afterall. Beating ourselves about it is no use... What she did might have been a little bit rough, but the fact that she would cross half the world to reach someone important for her says a lot about her. It's not just that she lives up to her element, its the lack for the fear of the unknown that i see right there. And before you start saying that she was a burden to me and all... know that this is not true."

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"Yeah," Rainbow drawled out of the side of her mouth..."You know, it is. Woulda' been nice if she could say hi to me in a normal way. I'll go find her again later, make sure she doesn't give herself a heart attack..."

 

At that Rainbow grimaced, her face painted over with a breif shot of guilt and misery before composing itself into lacakdaisical mischeif, carefully, once more. "So uh...meet the gang."

 

Applejack walked over to Rainbow and Fluttershy, deciding to go easy on Dash after Fluttershy's dramatic little scene. She laughed, putting a hand on Fluttershy's shoulder. "Calm down, Fluttershy. I can't blame ya though. I'm glad the gang's back together." She walked over to Rainbow Dash, "It's nice to have ya back, RD."

 

Pinkie rushed at Rainbow and hugged her. Somehow, streamers shot out of nowhere as she did so. "Oh my Celestia, I've missed you so much and I was all alone and I got on a train and got here and beat Colette on a computer game and now we're all back together!" she yelled all in one breath.

 

Cicada stood to one side, unsmiling. It was difficult for her, being a changeling by herself. She wished that her Queen was there.

 

@@Dawn Stripes, @, @@Pripyat Pony, @, @, @@Fireblaze,

 

Colette caught full sight of Fluttershy's show of affection towards Rainbow Dash, losing the nerve to yell at the brash Pegasus for the moment. Without a second thought, she. approached Rainbow, giving her a hug as soon as the other mares were finished greeting her. "Are ya done flying around the world, or were you planning to go to China to find Twilight next??" Colette asked as she released Rainbow from the hug. She caught sight of Fluttershy round the corner into her room-- she'd have to go and see how she was holding up in a moment!

 

"Now that you're here, the gang's all assembled!" She then put an arm around Rainbow's shoulders, leading her into the living room. She then introduced her to the men, pointing to each in turn. "This is Jack, the guy who found AJ*, this is Charles, the guy who found Rarity--" "--and I'm the man who signed his death warrant!" Stephen's doppelganger interjected. "I kissed Fluttershy, but I brought her here safe and sound!" Colette smirked at him before finishing. "No killing 'im!" she said, flashing Rainbow a stern look. "Pinkie here found me, and she's our new roommate."

 

It was then Colette caught sight of Shawn's mirror image standing with a black haired woman, along with Dennis. "You're TWINS??" Colette said as she looked back and forth between them. "Yep. I'm Stephen, and this is Cecy. Dennis, you already know, I take it??"

 

"Yeah, we go to the same school," Colette said as she looked at him. "So you're the guy who went to Scotland with Brash??"

 

((*Congrats, Red! Jack has been promoted to Pony Finder!))

 

@@Hypn0ticD,@@Dawn Stripes,  Dennis raised his eyebrow ironically "Yea... that's me... You needn't tease her now, what's done is done afterall. Beating ourselves about it is no use... What she did might have been a little bit rough, but the fact that she would cross half the world to reach someone important for her says a lot about her. It's not just that she lives up to her element, its the lack for the fear of the unknown that i see right there. And before you start saying that she was a burden to me and all... know that this is not true."

Charles waving to Rainbow, then he should tell them But he was thinking on something while standing next to the wall. Then he looking at Colette driveway and then to Colette. "Hay Colette did you have a car in the driveway?" Charles was saying while looking at others and then thinking some more too.

 

(I wounded if Pinky or Twilight can Read Charles Mind?)

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Colette caught full sight of Fluttershy's show of affection towards Rainbow Dash, losing the nerve to yell at the brash Pegasus for the moment. Without a second thought, she. approached Rainbow, giving her a hug as soon as the other mares were finished greeting her. "Are ya done flying around the world, or were you planning to go to China to find Twilight next??" Colette asked as she released Rainbow from the hug. She caught sight of Fluttershy round the corner into her room-- she'd have to go and see how she was holding up in a moment!

 

"Now that you're here, the gang's all assembled!" She then put an arm around Rainbow's shoulders, leading her into the living room. She then introduced her to the men, pointing to each in turn. "This is Jack, the guy who found AJ*, this is Charles, the guy who found Rarity--" "--and I'm the man who signed his death warrant!" Stephen's doppelganger interjected. "I kissed Fluttershy, but I brought her here safe and sound!" Colette smirked at him before finishing. "No killing 'im!" she said, flashing Rainbow a stern look. "Pinkie here found me, and she's our new roommate."

 

It was then Colette caught sight of Shawn's mirror image standing with a black haired woman, along with Dennis. "You're TWINS??" Colette said as she looked back and forth between them. "Yep. I'm Stephen, and this is Cecy. Dennis, you already know, I take it??"

 

"Yeah, we go to the same school," Colette said as she looked at him. "So you're the guy who went to Scotland with Brash??"

 

((*Congrats, Red! Jack has been promoted to Pony Finder!))

Twilight saw Rainbow Dash walk in, and, while relieved to see her alive, was upset ny her antics. She stormed over to her with an angered look on her face.

"Rainbow Dash," she nearly shouted, "Just what did you think you were doing?! I told you to stay in Wisconsin and let go of this guy who kissed Fluttershy. Why did you not listen to me? Are you really that jealous or protective? I could turn around for half a second, and you'd find a way to burn this house down!!"

"Twilight," Jack softly said, "chill the hell out. All of you are united again. Why is there need for bicke-"

"No," she interrupts, "She needs to hear this. She's out of control, she's irresponsible, impulsive, and a terrible listener. Now that she's back with me, I can make sure she doesn't do anything stupid. The last thing we need is her endangering you guys, and ourselves."

Jack, after Twilight's tirade, sighed, and put his hand on Rainbow Dash's shoulder.

"Don't worry about her," he said to Dash, "She's just been beside herself with worry for uderstandable reasons. But now you're back together with each other. That's what matters the most. Plus, because of that, I'm sure she'll calm down and find peace in the six of you reunited again."


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"Okay...Um..."

Rainbow Dash was treated to a (see above) whirlwind of introductions, threats, reassurances, and accusations. She managed to give that 'Shawn' character the universal 'I'm watching you' sign before he was whisked on, but other that, didn't find much chance to respond, until she ended the  merry-go-round with Twilight's face, half-royal-purple and half-beet-red in her imagination, also in her imagination nickering down her mane.
She winced. And did something that probably wasn't very expected for her. "I'm really sorry," she said softly, hanging her head. "You were right, Twilight. I fu--I'm...I'm really really sorry. I'll try not to get in trouble, I'll try not do anything until we're home again. I swear to God I'll try."


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"Okay...Um..."[/size]

Rainbow Dash was treated to a (see above) whirlwind of introductions, threats, reassurances, and accusations. She managed to give that 'Shawn' character the universal 'I'm watching you' sign before he was whisked on, but other that, didn't find much chance to respond, until she ended the merry-go-round with Twilight's face, half-royal-purple and half-beet-red in her imagination, also in her imagination nickering down her mane.

She winced. And did something that probably wasn't very expected for her. "I'm really sorry," she said softly, hanging her head. "You were right, Twilight. I fu--I'm...I'm really really sorry. I'll try not to get in trouble, I'll try not do anything until we're home again. I swear to God I'll try."

(Swear to God? Ponies aren't Catholic! :P)

 

After scolding Rainbow Dash, Twilight knew that she deeply affected her friend.

"It's going to be alright," Twilight said to Rainbow Dash, "If you can stick to your promise, everything is going to be fine."

"See?" Jack then said to her, "I told ya she'd come around sooner or later!"

Jack then turned to Colette.

"So, now that the rest of the group is here," he said to Colette, "What are we supposed to do now?"

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(Swear to God? Ponies aren't Catholic! )
 ((OOC:No... she might be Orthodox... she might even be a protestant... those people believe in god too. Yea i know this is a joke... lol btw i am orthodox))

@Dawn Stripes@Pripyat Pony@Mellon Collie@Ragin' Red Talon@Fireblaze"Well for starters why don't we celebrating this re-union with a glass of wine? I got in my bags two bottle of fine family-made greek wine! You will not be dissapointed!!! No seriously... i helped make it so i would know." 
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"I wish I had an idea!" Colette said, sweating bullets suddenly. Entertaining two Ponies was somewhat easy enough, but add to that, four more, on top of that four men, another woman, and her classmate?? "Pinkie Pie Party tomorrow! To celebrate all of the Ponies coming together!" She blurted out suddenly. "It's getting late now, and I'm sure everyone's tired!" She added.

 

Dennis then spoke up. Maybe they could have a glass before hitting the road, but… "Do you have enough for everyone here?? I'm not even sure that I even have that many wine glasses!" Colette then went to check, and sure enough, there were a total of eight glasses… One for each of the Ponies, one for Dennis, for bringing the wine, and the last can go to Cecy, because she seemed sad… Colette then came back out and explained the situation, handing out the glasses, telling Rainbow not to drop hers, then went to go coax Fluttershy into rejoining the others.

 

It was then Colette heard Charles mention something about a car in her driveway. "What...??" She stopped knocking on her own bedroom door and made her way out to the front door, opening it and stepping outside, her face blanching at she saw.

 

There in the driveway was a midnight blue Chrysler 300c, which appeared to be nearly black in the nighttime. The driver's side door opened, and a man stepped out, looking around at all the other cars before turning his gaze to Colette. His dark eyes were stern and his mouth was set in a deep frown as he approached the house. Gulping, she managed to find her voice and speak to the man.

 

"…Dad… You're back early…"

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Pinkie bounced with glee. A Pinkie Party! Just the thing. "I'll help arrange everything!" she said, when Colette spoke. There was something else nagging at her mind, but she ignored it for the moment; the party was more important.

 

Cicada took the opportunity to tap into the Hive mind channel that her Queen had opened and updated Chrysalis on everything. At the end, she added, "I'm feeling a bit lonely. None of the ponies here know my true nature, tho I doubt the secret can be kept forever. I would also like to see you again, my Queen."

 

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"Shit..." Jack cursed under his breath, "What do we do now? Hide? Find a hotel? Spew it all out to dad?"

Jack wasn't really scared right now, rather, he was fearing the awkward moment when Colette's dad walks in, chastising her for having all these people over and about the car at the bottom of Lake Michigan.


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 ((OOC:No... she might be Orthodox... she might even be a protestant... those people believe in god too. Yea i know this is a joke... lol btw i am orthodox))

 

@Dawn Stripes@Pripyat Pony@Mellon Collie@Ragin' Red Talon@Fireblaze"Well for starters why don't we celebrating this re-union with a glass of wine? I got in my bags two bottle of fine family-made greek wine! You will not be dissapointed!!! No seriously... i helped make it so i would know." 

 

@@Dawn Stripes,@, @, @@Fireblaze, @@Pripyat Pony, @

 

"I wish I had an idea!" Colette said, sweating bullets suddenly. Entertaining two Ponies was somewhat easy enough, but add to that, four more, on top of that four men, another woman, and her classmate?? "Pinkie Pie Party tomorrow! To celebrate all of the Ponies coming together!" She blurted out suddenly. "It's getting late now, and I'm sure everyone's tired!" She added.

 

Dennis then spoke up. Maybe they could have a glass before hitting the road, but… "Do you have enough for everyone here?? I'm not even sure that I even have that many wine glasses!" Colette then went to check, and sure enough, there were a total of eight glasses… One for each of the Ponies, one for Dennis, for bringing the wine, and the last can go to Cecy, because she seemed sad… Colette then came back out and explained the situation, handing out the glasses, telling Rainbow not to drop hers, then went to go coax Fluttershy into rejoining the others.

 

It was then Colette heard Charles mention something about a car in her driveway. "What...??" She stopped knocking on her own bedroom door and made her way out to the front door, opening it and stepping outside, her face blanching at she saw.

 

There in the driveway was a midnight blue Chrysler 300c, which appeared to be nearly black in the nighttime. The driver's side door opened, and a man stepped out, looking around at all the other cars before turning his gaze to Colette. His dark eyes were stern and his mouth was set in a deep frown as he approached the house. Gulping, she managed to find her voice and speak to the man.

 

"…Dad… You're back early…"

 

@@Hypn0ticD,

@,

 

Pinkie bounced with glee. A Pinkie Party! Just the thing. "I'll help arrange everything!" she said, when Colette spoke. There was something else nagging at her mind, but she ignored it for the moment; the party was more important.

 

Cicada took the opportunity to tap into the Hive mind channel that her Queen had opened and updated Chrysalis on everything. At the end, she added, "I'm feeling a bit lonely. None of the ponies here know my true nature, tho I doubt the secret can be kept forever. I would also like to see you again, my Queen."

 

@@Fireblaze,

Rarity spoke to Charles about getting the dressmaking stuff; her head buzzed with ideas for clothes for humans and she ached to get started.

 

 

 
 
 
 
 
 
"Shit..." Jack cursed under his breath, "What do we do now? Hide? Find a hotel? Spew it all out to dad?"
Jack wasn't really scared right now, rather, he was fearing the awkward moment when Colette's dad walks in, chastising her for having all these people over and about the car at the bottom of Lake Michigan.

 

"Well Rarity love Right now it Nighttime , Stores are Close but I will take you to the Fabric Stores tomorrow in the morning if you want to go there." Charles saying and then he looking at Colette Dad. Then going to take care of everything. "Let me take care of this one." Then he went up to Colette Dad and began to talk. "Hello sir I am Charles Roberts of the NSA, I understand that you going to be quite angry on your daughter for did something to the car but Hear me out I can get you another Car and Pay for the damage too." Charles saying as he plan to clam down her dad.

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(...You're all wrong. It's just a swear she picked up from humans.)


 


Rainbow Dash was busy feeling not-awkward-or-overwhelmed-at-all when she heard the car in the driveway--and more importantly, Colette losing it--and that went well out the window.


She blanched, a new feeling for the pony-cum-human. "Eyah..." she coughed. "Denny? Might wanna'....ide-hay the ine-way. uh...shiiiit.."


She stared at her friends. Could they hide all of them somehow? Not Pinkie, never. Then there was the whole car thing...which suddenly seemed even more disastrous than it had before.


 


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Fluttershy was not going to cry. She refused to cry. It was entirely her fault what had happened, and Rainbow Dash had only done what she should have expected...what they'd agreed to...


She stifled her sobs in Colette's blanket--she promised herself she'd wash it later to make up for being such an awful guest--until she could calm down again. A tiny voice in the back of her mind, still puttering along on a few cylinders of reason, chided, You really should have stopped to think before you ran out there. She knew it was true.


Footsteps came over her ears like a falling shadow, and Fluttershy tensed. But when she looked towards the door, whoever had been there was gone---distracted by the headlights shining through a pair of windows?



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((Ditto to what Dawn said!))

 

The man caught sight of the other men as they came to the door, his frown deepening into a scowl. What Charles had said did nothing to quell the man's anger -- It only seemed to deepen it. "What happened to the car??" he asked, his voice low, and dripping with anger. "Dad..dad, I--" There  was no way he'd believe the truth, due to the nature of how fantastical the driver was, and her father was a man deeply rooted in logic. Add to that, she knew her father wouldn't take money from a stranger for something she did. "I went for a little joyride and -- drowned the car. I'm sorry." She finally answered in a soft voice.

 

Her father's face went beet red, he grabbed Colette by the shoulder and practically dragging her to the back yard, where he shouted ferociously at her. "COLETTE MARIE IRVING! What the fuck! I just bought that car for you three months ago! I thought you were more responsible than that! What the fuck were you thinking?!"

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