My First Attempt at the drawing of Ponies

[NocturnalRainbow 248]

So I felt like drawing some ponies so I decided to draw one of my OC's. I hope its not to bad.

This is a very rough sketch, I erased a lot. Give me some advice if you have any!  

[GrooveBroove 681]

Pretty good for a first attempt.

Definitely like what you got going on there with the eye. If you want any sort of critique i'd say the horn needs to be a bit more pronounced.

[~Silver Essence~ 2,625]

Well, the fact that you tried is good in my opinion.

The overall structure of the head looks good.

The only thing advice I can give is to smooth some of the edges to make it well rounded.

Hope it helps!

[Super Derpy 535]

It looks pretty good. Except I think the horn needs to be a bit longer and add some length to the mane but besides that its really good

[SwiftMotion 130]

I really like this picture especially the fire element to the eye bit more work and practice and I will be perfect keep it up /)

[~PrincessLuna~ 53]

As said above Smooth it and the horn needs to be a little bit... bigger? But I kinda have no room to talk.. Im new to drawing and my first pony was SOOOOO much worse xD good job (: