dark Fluttershy's Cottage

[River 59]

This was a fanfiction I made a while back. It has to deal with Fluttershy and Derpy Hooves.

 

 

Read it if you must. XD It's okay, but I am a lot better at writing now, so I'll probably re-write it later.

 

 

http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/book.asp?book_ID=29509

[breezy00 30]

its good and all but i wasn't really that into it so I didn't even finish part never the less the fist four paragraphs i think it would be a better story if you added some action in the beginning and more description on everything

[River 59]

its good and all but i wasn't really that into it so I didn't even finish part never the less the fist four paragraphs i think it would be a better story if you added some action in the beginning and more description on everything

Meh.

 

Like I said this is not really how I write anymore.

 

A lot of other people liked it. :/

But um, I'm probably rewriting it soon. Thanks for your feedback though. 

[breezy00 30]

Meh.

 

Like I said this is not really how I write anymore.

 

A lot of other people liked it. :/

But um, I'm probably rewriting it soon. Thanks for your feedback though. 

np and ok good luck on trying to write your new version if you need help just ask me any time and I'll answer with honesty ok ok