Sailing

[Aaappleooza 41]

So a certain somepony (not naming any names...) wanted me to stick some links up to some shipping fanart I'd done recently to get some feedback soooooo yeah. I used a tablet and a program called autodesk sketchbook. 

 

"Something in the Air" (Mane 6 ships, including an OC of me and my brother. I realized that using black outlines on the characters and then doing backgrounds that don't use black outlines don't work too well recently...): http://potoperson.deviantart.com/art/Something-in-the-Air-379282937

 

"Surprise Visit" (Fluttershy and Braeburn ship. Cos it works in my head, dadgum it.....): http://potoperson.deviantart.com/art/Surprise-Visit-384376972

[LittleRawr 679]

It's adorable!

 

But, you should touch up a bit on your pony proportions. Browse through pictures of different poses to get a better feel of how to draw them. Your lines are not very clean either.(Meaning smooth, like in the show.) Look up guides and stuff so you can improve your art.

 

Good luck! :3

[Aaappleooza 41]

It's adorable!

 

But, you should touch up a bit on your pony proportions. Browse through pictures of different poses to get a better feel of how to draw them. Your lines are not very clean either.(Meaning smooth, like in the show.) Look up guides and stuff so you can improve your art.

 

Good luck! :3

Thanks a bunch! I drew a different drawing (this one's Rarity/Fancypants) and I tried to keep the proportions thing in mind. Did I get them any better? 

http://potoperson.deviantart.com/art/They-Just-Don-t-See-you-the-Way-I-Do-385429429

[Zygen 6,066]

I think your doing pretty good, you do have a few proportion issues, but with time and looking at other pony art that shall improve.

 

Might wanna touch up on making the hooves flat on the bottom, it has a curve, but then its basically flat at the bottom.

 

I can't think of any other specifics really right now, but overall you did pretty good . They're adorable pieces of art, and i'm sure you'll improve over time!

 

Keep it up!

[LittleRawr 679]

Thanks a bunch! I drew a different drawing (this one's Rarity/Fancypants) and I tried to keep the proportions thing in mind. Did I get them any better? 

http://potoperson.deviantart.com/art/They-Just-Don-t-See-you-the-Way-I-Do-385429429

 

Yes! Much better now! But I have to ask, do you use the circle thingies to draw? Meaning these ones

If you don't, I really suggest that you use them. And as Zygen said, you need work for the bottom of the hooves. 

 

 

 

Like for example, this is a drawing of my OC. See how her hooves curve slightly at the bottom? The reason for this is because pony hooves are round, not square.

[Aaappleooza 41]

Makes sense. Thanks very much to both of you. I shall have to keep it in mind next time   (By the way LittleRawr, your OC is absolutely adorable! Digging the socks)