[Drawings/Artwork(s)] My Spitfire artworks

[Geohot 28]

(SpitFire Artwork Thread)

 

I drawed some art of Spitfire and i would like to share them with MLPForums hope you will like it.

If you want to see more say it c: cause i have more of other ponies OC etc.

 

The Whole Paper

 

 

 

 

 

 

The 6 drawings

 

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[RosemaryPetal 112]

Well, they're good overall, but your anatomy it a bit... messy at best. 

In the 1st one, both front legs appear to be on the same side of the body.

2nd one's okay, the wings could be a bit more forward but that's minor.

3rd one, that whole rear end is.. hideous. I'm not sure what went wrong. Also, both wings seem to be on the same side.

4th one, pretty good except the right rear leg is a little messy.

5th one, good, legs are a little wibbly though. Left eye should be a tad smaller.

6th one, great except the back legs seem to be fused together.

 

Overall, I give this a "my grandmother can draw better"

However, you should know her latest painting sold for around 5k.

 

Okay, I'll give you a "good" lol 

 

Have a ponyrific day!

[Geohot 28]

Your whole reply

 

Okay thanksfor judging and thanks to add an answer to the poll

Here i have more:

***Images inside the spoiler***

 

 

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Hope you like these <3

 

~Dextronmatrix

[RosemaryPetal 112]

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Yes, these are all a LOT better. I don't see any major issues with any of those drawings.

I love the vinyl one by the way, she's so cwoot.

[Zygen 6,065]

Looks pretty good overall.

 

Although on the first one the hoove is a little bent weird looking, it needs to be drawn different so it isn't so straight, it should be different, it looks kinda like it extends forward awkwardly, its hard to explain.

 

The 2nd one is pretty good, has some random reference lines or extra lines scattered around, but thats minor, the background hoof in the front also needs to have the outline extent through the body, so it doesn't look disjointed.

The 3rd one has a bit of an akward body position, not sure if its possible for ponies to stretch their legs that way, theres also a reference line or extra line right through the back hoof, and the back hoof also has a bit to sharp of an edge to it.

 

the 4th one one is pretty good, i think the back hoof needs to touch the ground a little more, so maybe have more curve to it, also the bottoms of the hooves need rounding where the hoof's go up, Some of them look to flat to me atleast.

 

5th one is pretty good, except the hooves have some kinda wobbly lines, and are slightly out of proportion due to it, the rest is all pretty good.

 

and finally the last one i'd say is my favorite, my only real complaint is that the other back hoof is a bit small compared to the other.

 

Overall they're pretty good, most of your issues seem to be with the hooves, so i'd watch those the most.

 

But keep up the good work!