private A vacation in Paris!

[Nurin Insyirah 12]

 

 

Crystal relaxed a bit. At least he wasn't asking about the colour of her mane. "We're going to... I am not sure yet. I was not thinking about it. I say that I get a haircut and then we go for a stroll in a park. Perhaps see a movie? I think that would be interesting. Of course if you are OK with that..."

"Yeah, I guess that'll be fine." Quill shrugged as he headed for the door, opened it, and walked out of the hotel lobby. He held the door open for Crystal while looking around. The hotel was conveniently near a large mall, probably because tourists were likely to go shopping for souvenirs.

[The Blades Shadow 445]

((I guess my application was accepted, but I haven't got a hundred percent confirmation on that fact. So I apologize if I was too fast))

 

Storm had been bursting with joy when she learned she had won. But had to delay the flight due to work not giving her permission to leave for the first few days.

 

Now, there she was. Wanting to relax from her job and looking at the building that stood at the address she had gotten together with the plain ticket. Sweet... Fiddling out her documents where the reservation info was written down she moved over to the reception where a colt stood.

 

As soon as the colt at the reception had verified the information he gave her the key to her room. Storm found her way to the elevator where two ponies were already standing. She pressed the button to call the elevator, considering how she would find her group once she had left her luggage in her room.

(I would quote Thinkin' as well but I can't find his last post)

"Well I think I'm gonna go off on my own actually... Maybe I'll meet up with you again later." Blazing said, then walked away. He was going to be a lot better off on his own, seeing as it was what he was used to. He went to the hotel he had been going to originally. Once he checked in and dropped off his things, he went back outside to do some exploring.

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Blazing Hoof, on 09 Sept 2013 - 10:14 PM, said:

(I would quote Thinkin' as well but I can't find his last post)

"Well I think I'm gonna go off on my own actually... Maybe I'll meet up with you again later." Blazing said, then walked away. He was going to be a lot better off on his own, seeing as it was what he was used to. He went to the hotel he had been going to originally. Once he checked in and dropped off his things, he went back outside to do some exploring.

Storm check out her room in total awe, she wasn't used to so much luxury and felt overwhelmed. She unpacked her stuff, by simply pulling stuff out of the suitcase and checking nothing had been lost or damaged by the flight.

 

After that she went down to the lobby again. An orange stallion with a red and yellow mane caught her attention. Having no plan for something to do she approached the colt. "Hi! You're a tourist too?"

[Sunbro 4 Lyfe 939]

"Yeah, I guess that'll be fine." Quill shrugged as he headed for the door, opened it, and walked out of the hotel lobby. He held the door open for Crystal while looking around. The hotel was conveniently near a large mall, probably because tourists were likely to go shopping for souvenirs.

Crystal noticed the mall. "I presume that is where we are going?" She nodded lightly. "That sounds like an alright plan. I can get what I need done and then we can do something you want to do. I think that is a better plan than "Go shopping and see a movie" do you agree?"

[Jack Spades 162]

Jack bolted out of the hospital doors "I have to find Charcoal." Yeah you do. "I wonder where she went." Last we saw her, she was with Spades in the hotel. "Right." Jack started trotting at a quick pace to the hotel where Charcoal hopefully was. Jack's mind was so busy. He was thinking about his past, present, future, all at once. Then he noticed how his mind was actually helping him out. "I want to thank you... me..." No problem. I just want to get out of your mind. Jack took offence to that. "Yeah..." Jack found the hotel. He went through the doors, up the stairs, and just like that, he was in front of Charcoal's door. This is it. @@Charcoal Embers Jack knocked thrice and waited.

[The Blades Shadow 445]

Storm check out her room in total awe, she wasn't used to so much luxury and felt overwhelmed. She unpacked her stuff, by simply pulling stuff out of the suitcase and checking nothing had been lost or damaged by the flight.

 

After that she went down to the lobby again. An orange stallion with a red and yellow mane caught her attention. Having no plan for something to do she approached the colt. "Hi! You're a tourist too?"

"Yeah." Blazing said simply. He wasn't sure why the mare had randomly talked to him, but he didn't care, as long as he was making friends he was happy. "I was just about to go take a walk around the city, want to come with me?" He asked. Well that was a strange first thing to ask. He told himself.

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"Yeah." Blazing said simply. He wasn't sure why the mare had randomly talked to him, but he didn't care, as long as he was making friends he was happy. "I was just about to go take a walk around the city, want to come with me?" He asked. Well that was a strange first thing to ask. He told himself.

"I'd love to. Just got here and the flight was awfully long, so I feel like stretching my legs and having something to eat. You know your way around here? 'Cause I'm pretty lost, I've never been to Paris and had barely no time to check out where to go" she admitted rubbing a hoof against the base of her skull. She was positively surprised about the colt's friendliness and felt like she could talk to him.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack bolted out of the hospital doors "I have to find Charcoal." Yeah you do. "I wonder where she went." Last we saw her, she was with Spades in the hotel. "Right." Jack started trotting at a quick pace to the hotel where Charcoal hopefully was. Jack's mind was so busy. He was thinking about his past, present, future, all at once. Then he noticed how his mind was actually helping him out. "I want to thank you... me..." No problem. I just want to get out of your mind. Jack took offence to that. "Yeah..." Jack found the hotel. He went through the doors, up the stairs, and just like that, he was in front of Charcoal's door. This is it. @@Charcoal Embers Jack knocked thrice and waited.

Charcoal was about to leave with Spades when she heard a knock at the door. Walking over to it she opens it to reveal Jack. "Oh, hey Jack. Did you have a nice trip to wherever you went to?" Charcoal asked him with rapped attention. "Where did you go anyway?" Charcoal asked.

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal was about to leave with Spades when she heard a knock at the door. Walking over to it she opens it to reveal Jack. "Oh, hey Jack. Did you have a nice trip to wherever you went to?" Charcoal asked him with rapped attention. "Where did you go anyway?" Charcoal asked.

Jack was happy to see Charcoal "Oh yes, I had a nice trip. I went to see a shrink or whatever they're called." Jack sighed "I've learned so much about myself. It's been a rollercoaster." Get on with it. "He's found out what's really wrong with me. It's really interesting and it makes sense."

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack was happy to see Charcoal "Oh yes, I had a nice trip. I went to see a shrink or whatever they're called." Jack sighed "I've learned so much about myself. It's been a rollercoaster." Get on with it. "He's found out what's really wrong with me. It's really interesting and it makes sense."

Charcoal found this information to be interesting. "Oh really? That's great! What did they find out about you?" Charcoal asked, wanting to know what they said about her friend and whether she will have to go and beat them for saying something mean to him.

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal found this information to be interesting. "Oh really? That's great! What did they find out about you?" Charcoal asked, wanting to know what they said about her friend and whether she will have to go and beat them for saying something mean to him.

Jack started to shake with excitement, he saw Charcoal a bit interested too "He said that I have Schizophrenia." Jack said as he raised his arms as if he earned a medal "It all makes so much sense, doesn't it?" Jack was able to tell somepony about himself. He felt cared for. 

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack started to shake with excitement, he saw Charcoal a bit interested too "He said that I have Schizophrenia." Jack said as he raised his arms as if he earned a medal "It all makes so much sense, doesn't it?" Jack was able to tell somepony about himself. He felt cared for.

Charcoal waited for a few seconds to see if Jack would tell her what the big word ment. When he didn't she decided to ask him about it. "Hey Jack. Would you mind telling the not smart pony what the big word means?" Charcoal asked him, hoping he would do it for her.

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal waited for a few seconds to see if Jack would tell her what the big word ment. When he didn't she decided to ask him about it. "Hey Jack. Would you mind telling the not smart pony what the big word means?" Charcoal asked him, hoping he would do it for her.

Jack sat down to tell Charcoal about the serious mental disorder "Well, ponies with Schizophrenia get hallucinations: The voice in my head. An addiction: My alcoholic and gambling choices that I learned to shake off when I was younger. Suicidal thoughts: I almost jumped out of your window when the voice was wailing at me and I've had other times too. Delusions and paranoia: My fear of what happened to my parents." Jack bowed his head "I'm not proud. It's actually kinda sad. I want to get rid of it." a tear started forming in Jack's eye "I don't want to be seen as a different pony. I'm tired of being labeled as weird. So I came with a question for you."

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack sat down to tell Charcoal about the serious mental disorder "Well, ponies with Schizophrenia get hallucinations: The voice in my head. An addiction: My alcoholic and gambling choices that I learned to shake off when I was younger. Suicidal thoughts: I almost jumped out of your window when the voice was wailing at me and I've had other times too. Delusions and paranoia: My fear of what happened to my parents." Jack bowed his head "I'm not proud. It's actually kinda sad. I want to get rid of it." a tear started forming in Jack's eye "I don't want to be seen as a different pony. I'm tired of being labeled as weird. So I came with a question for you."

Charcoal hugged Jack when she saw him about to cry. "There there, you aren't weird, you are just different. But I think that is just fine, don't you? Don't you think that it is great to be different?" Charcoal asked. "But anyway, what is the question you wanted to ask.

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal hugged Jack when she saw him about to cry. "There there, you aren't weird, you are just different. But I think that is just fine, don't you? Don't you think that it is great to be different?" Charcoal asked. "But anyway, what is the question you wanted to ask.

Charcoal's hug felt great. It felt better than the other ones she has given him. Jack rubbed his eyes to get rid of the tears. He had to stay strong. "Well. The doctor said he can get rid of my schizophrenia. And I wanted to know of you thought if it's a good idea or not."

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Charcoal's hug felt great. It felt better than the other ones she has given him. Jack rubbed his eyes to get rid of the tears. He had to stay strong. "Well. The doctor said he can get rid of my schizophrenia. And I wanted to know of you thought if it's a good idea or not."

"Why wouldn't it be a good idea?" Charcoal asked as she continued to hug him. He felt so soft, and warm. Charcoal wouldn't mind if she stayed like this for a while. "I mean, if this shizo-whatever is a problem to you I would get it removed. Unless it does something bad of course."

[Jack Spades 162]

"Why wouldn't it be a good idea?" Charcoal asked as she continued to hug him. He felt so soft, and warm. Charcoal wouldn't mind if she stayed like this for a while. "I mean, if this shizo-whatever is a problem to you I would get it removed. Unless it does something bad of course."

Charcoal's scent was finding its way into Jacks nose. Why do mares smell so good? Jack snapped out of his softness and slipped out of Charcoal's arms. He giggled nervously. "Thanks for that hug." he blushed a bit but pretended to fix his hair to try to hide it "I think I've made up my mind." Jack put his hooves back down on the ground "I'm gonna do it." Jack took two steps to the exit and away from Charcoal before stopping. "Charcoal." Jack said while looking behind him to her slowly "I'm sorta scared. Can you come with me?"

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Charcoal's scent was finding its way into Jacks nose. Why do mares smell so good? Jack snapped out of his softness and slipped out of Charcoal's arms. He giggled nervously. "Thanks for that hug." he blushed a bit but pretended to fix his hair to try to hide it "I think I've made up my mind." Jack put his hooves back down on the ground "I'm gonna do it." Jack took two steps to the exit and away from Charcoal before stopping. "Charcoal." Jack said while looking behind him to her slowly "I'm sorta scared. Can you come with me?"

"Of course." Charcoal said. She began to leave but then remembered Spades. @ "Sorry, but I might have to reschedule with you. I'll see you later." Then she turns and exited with Jack. "You know what I wish? I wish there was a way to transfer someones problems into somepony else. I had a friend before, she used to have, and maybe still does, consistent nightmares. And I was always telling her that I wished I could have the nightmares for her."

[Jack Spades 162]

"Of course." Charcoal said. She began to leave but then remembered Spades. @ "Sorry, but I might have to reschedule with you. I'll see you later." Then she turns and exited with Jack. "You know what I wish? I wish there was a way to transfer someones problems into somepony else. I had a friend before, she used to have, and maybe still does, consistent nightmares. And I was always telling her that I wished I could have the nightmares for her."

Jack continued walking with Charcoal while listening to her conversation "I don't know about that. It seems mean. Can you imagine if I passed on my annoying voice and alcoholism to you? That'd be horrible, but it is nice of you to want to help your friend." Jack thought for a second "Maybe you could give the problems to ponies who are about to die anyways."

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack continued walking with Charcoal while listening to her conversation "I don't know about that. It seems mean. Can you imagine if I passed on my annoying voice and alcoholism to you? That'd be horrible, but it is nice of you to want to help your friend." Jack thought for a second "Maybe you could give the problems to ponies who are about to die anyways."

"I can't really imagine it, but I would still do it in a heartbeat if only to make you suffer less. My motto is, as long as I am suffering one less pony is given a break." Charcoal said in a serious tone. "As long as others I care about are alright, I don't care how much I suffer to make it happen."

[Jack Spades 162]

"I can't really imagine it, but I would still do it in a heartbeat if only to make you suffer less. My motto is, as long as I am suffering one less pony is given a break." Charcoal said in a serious tone. "As long as others I care about are alright, I don't care how much I suffer to make it happen."

Jack was speechless. He's never seen anypony act so selfless. This mare was a treasure. "I've never thought of it that way. I guess you're right." Aw. I'm almost sad that I'm leaving. She's so kind. "Yeah... yeah... She is." Jack stared at Charcoal. He couldn't take his eyes off her.  

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack was speechless. He's never seen anypony act so selfless. This mare was a treasure. "I've never thought of it that way. I guess you're right." Aw. I'm almost sad that I'm leaving. She's so kind. "Yeah... yeah... She is." Jack stared at Charcoal. He couldn't take his eyes off her.

"Though I can't say that I have never found having a voice in my head interesting. In fact, I actually would kind of like to know what it is like." Charcoal said. "Though it might be a mistake if I could make it happen I'm not sure if I would care, I'm very patient and it is hard to insult me in any way."

[Jack Spades 162]

"Though I can't say that I have never found having a voice in my head interesting. In fact, I actually would kind of like to know what it is like." Charcoal said. "Though it might be a mistake if I could make it happen I'm not sure if I would care, I'm very patient and it is hard to insult me in any way."

Jack snapped out of his stare. "Voice?" Jack almost shouted "Yeah it'd be a mistake. I hate mine." And I hate you back. Jack almost expected it to say that. "I don't think you'd enjoy one. Since it's you, it knows your weaknesses. It knows where that [racism 3] in that armor is. Apparently, I have to many." Jack saw the hospital. "There it is." Jack informed his friend. He quickened his pace "Let's go!"

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack snapped out of his stare. "Voice?" Jack almost shouted "Yeah it'd be a mistake. I hate mine." And I hate you back. Jack almost expected it to say that. "I don't think you'd enjoy one. Since it's you, it knows your weaknesses. It knows where that [racism 3] in that armor is. Apparently, I have to many." Jack saw the hospital. "There it is." Jack informed his friend. He quickened his pace "Let's go!"

"But it would also know what makes you stronger to. Why is it you hate your voice or whatever it is?" Charcoal asked as she quickened her pace as well to keep up. "I mean, probably one of my biggest weaknesses is how much I hate that rumor about the *ahem* rainbow factory." Charcoal said the last part in a whisper so ponies around wouldn't hear. "And you don't see me being all bitter, and no voice or anything could convince me to be otherwise." Charcoal said as they reached the hospital.

[Jack Spades 162]

"But it would also know what makes you stronger to. Why is it you hate your voice or whatever it is?" Charcoal asked as she quickened her pace as well to keep up. "I mean, probably one of my biggest weaknesses is how much I hate that rumor about the *ahem* rainbow factory." Charcoal said the last part in a whisper so ponies around wouldn't hear. "And you don't see me being all bitter, and no voice or anything could convince me to be otherwise." Charcoal said as they reached the hospital.

"My voice hates me because it says that I have a messed up mind and he hates living there. Well... that's what he said anyways. I'm starting to doubt what it says. I don't know if it's lying or not. But whatever, if he wants out, I'll let him out. And if he decides to stay, well too bad, it's leaving."