private A vacation in Paris!

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack walked out of the shower and dried himself with a towel. He stood in front of a mirror and looked at his hair. It was messy as always. He wiped it down to make it look at least decent. He looked at his new look for a second until it turned itself back to its messy self in a second. "Well that's not gonna happen." Jack left the bathroom and saw Charcoal and an empty plate. "Was the sandwich good?"

"Sandwiches, you can't forget the 's' that is what makes it plural." Charcoal said. She grabbed the plate in her mouth and dropped it in the sink to be cleaned later. "So did you decide which of the two you would like to watch. Either would be fine with me, I just want your opinion."

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"Sandwiches, you can't forget the 's' that is what makes it plural." Charcoal said. She grabbed the plate in her mouth and dropped it in the sink to be cleaned later. "So did you decide which of the two you would like to watch. Either would be fine with me, I just want your opinion."

"Well I saw the first Percy Jackson and it wasn't pleasing to me so I think the second will follow the tradition that the first one made. But I've never even heard of The Price of Nine so I don't know how that's going to be so I'm taking a chance. What's life without some risk?" 'A baby foal?' Burn. Ouch. 'Sorry.' No, that one was acceptable.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

"Well I saw the first Percy Jackson and it wasn't pleasing to me so I think the second will follow the tradition that the first one made. But I've never even heard of The Price of Nine so I don't know how that's going to be so I'm taking a chance. What's life without some risk?" 'A baby foal?' Burn. Ouch. 'Sorry.' No, that one was acceptable.

"Well I guess I could give you a little background information so you understand it better. It is basically about nine ponies and their guardians coming to our planet to avoid getting killed by these others aliens. They also have a curse upon the nine ponies. They have to be killed in order, starting with number nine and ending with one."

[Jack Spades 162]

"Well I guess I could give you a little background information so you understand it better. It is basically about nine ponies and their guardians coming to our planet to avoid getting killed by these others aliens. They also have a curse upon the nine ponies. They have to be killed in order, starting with number nine and ending with one."

Jack's eyes widened "That... sounds... AWESOME!" Jack was jumping all around the hotel room. "This is gonna be cool. This is gonna be awesome. I'm acting foalish. I should stop now. Yeah. Okay. I'm done." Jack chanted before stopping and calming down. "It sounds like a good time."

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack's eyes widened "That... sounds... AWESOME!" Jack was jumping all around the hotel room. "This is gonna be cool. This is gonna be awesome. I'm acting foalish. I should stop now. Yeah. Okay. I'm done." Jack chanted before stopping and calming down. "It sounds like a good time."

"Yeah." Charcoal was a little surprised that Jack was so excited for this. "So, if you are ready we could go see when the movie is playing. I know it is playing sometime, I passed by a few times when I had run away." Charcoal walked over to her bags and grabbed them and put them on her back.

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((Seriously I was gonna ask why you weren't responding, lol))

"Oh that..." Blazing said. He never liked explaining his cutie mark. "The day I got it, was the worst day of my life." He started. "I got my heart broken for the first time. Since then, my life has been filled with nothing but failed attempts, over and over." He explained. He stopped talking, not wanting to say anything else.

"Oh! I'm sorry." Storm did actually mean it, she knew how hard it was to mend broken hearts. And the colt seemed pretty depressed about it. "I'm sure you'll find the right one soon!"

 

The waiter came over to their table. "I'd like an Espresso. And you?" she asked motioning towards Blazing.

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Crystal knew thus question would arrive. It had to, there was no way arround it. "Oh umm that?! It... Uhh... It's nothing! Nothing of importance at all." She replied followed shortly by a nervous chuckle. "And it's just my mane right? It cannot be anything too abnormal!"

Quill gave Crystal a stare, but decided to let it go. He trusted her. He didn't know why, but he did. He decided to just ignore it, as he had been doing the whole time now. He turned around. "Okay then... I guess." He started to walk away. "C'mon, let's go get lunch." He started to walk.

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Quill gave Crystal a stare, but decided to let it go. He trusted her. He didn't know why, but he did. He decided to just ignore it, as he had been doing the whole time now. He turned around. "Okay then... I guess." He started to walk away. "C'mon, let's go get lunch." He started to walk.

Crystal sighed. He wasn't going to question her hair any further, which was good because she didn't want to embarres herself when he screamed and ran off. "Yes, that does sound like a good idea. But you are paying though." She joked, tryung to keep the mood as light as possible.

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"Yeah." Charcoal was a little surprised that Jack was so excited for this. "So, if you are ready we could go see when the movie is playing. I know it is playing sometime, I passed by a few times when I had run away." Charcoal walked over to her bags and grabbed them and put them on her back.

"I'll be ready when you are." Jack enthusiastically said as Charcoal got her bags on. "The movie that you just explained sounds really interesting." Jack trotted to the hotel door and sat next to it waiting for Charcoal. A movie about action, adventure, and death. Dis' gon' be good day.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

"I'll be ready when you are." Jack enthusiastically said as Charcoal got her bags on. "The movie that you just explained sounds really interesting." Jack trotted to the hotel door and sat next to it waiting for Charcoal. A movie about action, adventure, and death. Dis' gon' be good day.

On the outside Charcoal seemed fine, but on the inside she was panicing. Oh, why did I mention these movies? These aren't movies to watch on a first date, and he will probably hate them anyway and hate fe for it afterwords. '...really?' Charcoal was about to leave when there was a knock at the door. She walked to the door and opened it up, revealing a package. She looked down both hallways but saw nopony. She looked at the package and it seemed to have her name on it. "Hey Jack, did you order something for me or something like that?" Charcoal asked as she brought in the package on her back. Edited September 19, 2013 by Charcoal Embers

[Jack Spades 162]

On the outside Charcoal seemed fine, but on the inside she was panicking. Oh, why did I mention these movies? These aren't movies to watch on a first date, and he will probably hate them anyway and hate me for it afterwords. '...really?' Charcoal was about to leave when there was a knock at the door. She walked to the door and opened it up, revealing a package. She looked down both hallways but saw nopony. She looked at the package and it seemed to have her name on it. "Hey Jack, did you order something for me or something like that?" Charcoal asked as she brought in the package on her back.

"You do know that I was sitting next to the door. I could have opened it for you." Jack shrugged "Never mind. But no. I didn't order a package. Why?" Jack looked out the door. "Oh wow. That's weird." he could see that it had Charcoal's name on it. "I wonder what's inside." Jack pondered while curiosity was poking him.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

"You do know that I was sitting next to the door. I could have opened it for you." Jack shrugged "Never mind. But no. I didn't order a package. Why?" Jack looked out the door. "Oh wow. That's weird." he could see that it had Charcoal's name on it. "I wonder what's inside." Jack pondered while curiosity was poking him.

Charcoal put the box down on the ground and began rummaging through her bags. She was looking for one of the screwdrivers she always carried around with her. She finally felt the plastic of the handle and pulled it out, and lucky for her it was her flathead. She stabbed the box with it and tore through the tape. Once done she opened the flaps and was blinder by a flash of light in her face and a small tingle. She fell back in surprise, temporarily blinded.

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal put the box down on the ground and began rummaging through her bags. She was looking for one of the screwdrivers she always carried around with her. She finally felt the plastic of the handle and pulled it out, and lucky for her it was her flathead. She stabbed the box with it and tore through the tape. Once done she opened the flaps and was blinder by a flash of light in her face and a small tingle. She fell back in surprise, temporarily blinded.

Jack was so curious about what was inside that he was too close to the box. When it flashed he was blinded. "Argh!" Jack took a few steps back. He rubbed his eyes and blinked rapidly to try and see better. He could see nothing but white, and the pain wasn't helping.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack was so curious about what was inside that he was too close to the box. When it flashed he was blinded. "Argh!" Jack took a few steps back. He rubbed his eyes and blinked rapidly to try and see better. He could see nothing but white, and the pain wasn't helping.

After a few seconds the whiteness went away and Charcoal could see again. She looks inside the box. "Empty." Charcoal says in annoyance. Charcoal stood up and began angrily smashing the box till it was nothing more than a slab of cardboard. "Must have been some unicorn teenager trying to prank us." Charcoal says in annoyance and slight anger. She still felt a small tingle and it was starting to center, but she was angry enough to not notice.

[Jack Spades 162]

After a few seconds the whiteness went away and Charcoal could see again. She looks inside the box. "Empty." Charcoal says in annoyance. Charcoal stood up and began angrily smashing the box till it was nothing more than a slab of cardboard. "Must have been some unicorn teenager trying to prank us." Charcoal says in annoyance and slight anger. She still felt a small tingle and it was starting to center, but she was angry enough to not notice.

Jack was walking into the same wall repeatedly "Charcoal? *thump* Ow! Charcoal? *thump* Ow! Charcoal? *thump* Ow!" Jack stopped "Okay Jack. Turn around." he did "Now walk." Jack walked for a few steps before tripping over himself and landing on his side. "Ow. This isn't going to work." Jack said with his eyes finally starting to get better.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack was walking into the same wall repeatedly "Charcoal? *thump* Ow! Charcoal? *thump* Ow! Charcoal? *thump* Ow!" Jack stopped "Okay Jack. Turn around." he did "Now walk." Jack walked for a few steps before tripping over himself and landing on his side. "Ow. This isn't going to work." Jack said with his eyes finally starting to get better.

Charcoal burst out laughing at Jack running into the wall so many times. She was about to stop until he tripped and made her begin laughing even more. She continued laughing but she could definitely feel a tingle now. And weirdest of all, she swore she could almost feel her stomach stretching.

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal burst out laughing at Jack running into the wall so many times. She was about to stop until he tripped and made her begin laughing even more. She continued laughing but she could definitely feel a tingle now. And weirdest of all, she swore she could almost feel her stomach stretching.

At the sound of Charcoal's laughing he started to chuckle a bit "Heh heh, I know. That was a bit funny." Jack's eyesight came back to normal as he stood up. But what followed was a little headache that was located at the back of his head. He just rubbed his head slightly. "That was mean. Who would've done that? And how'd they know your name?" he asked.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

At the sound of Charcoal's laughing he started to chuckle a bit "Heh heh, I know. That was a bit funny." Jack's eyesight came back to normal as he stood up. But what followed was a little headache that was located at the back of his head. He just rubbed his head slightly. "That was mean. Who would've done that? And how'd they know your name?" he asked.

Charcoal stopped laughing and then took on an angry face. "I don't know, but whoever it was is going to be getting a real beating from yours truly." Charcoal turned and walked to the fridge and punched it, leaving a big dent in it to prove her point that she was not happy. The tingly feeling seemed to be getting stronger and she could almost feel herself getting bigger, though she just figured it was ber imagination.

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal stopped laughing and then took on an angry face. "I don't know, but whoever it was is going to be getting a real beating from yours truly." Charcoal turned and walked to the fridge and punched it, leaving a big dent in it to prove her point that she was not happy. The tingly feeling seemed to be getting stronger and she could almost feel herself getting bigger, though she just figured it was ber imagination.

Jack jumped when Charcoal punched the fridge. Jack ran to her. "Hey, hey, hey. It's all good. It was just a little prank. Nothing happened, right? I mean it's no reason to break anything. We don't want our foal to get hurt." Jack rubbed Charcoal's stomach. His eyes grew at the feeling of her stomach growing. "Charcoal, I think something's happening to you."

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack jumped when Charcoal punched the fridge. Jack ran to her. "Hey, hey, hey. It's all good. It was just a little prank. Nothing happened, right? I mean it's no reason to break anything. We don't want our foal to get hurt." Jack rubbed Charcoal's stomach. His eyes grew at the feeling of her stomach growing. "Charcoal, I think something's happening to you."

Charcoal gave Jack a questioning look, she still hadn't noticed the growing her stomach seemed to be doing. "Really, did it change my mane style? Did it make my eyes black?" Charcoal was about to ask another when a horrible though struck her. "Oh please don't tell me it is turning me pink."

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal gave Jack a questioning look, she still hadn't noticed the growing her stomach seemed to be doing. "Really, did it change my mane style? Did it make my eyes black?" Charcoal was about to ask another when a horrible though struck her. "Oh please don't tell me it is turning me pink."

Jack had a poker face. He rubbed her stomach more. "I-I think that... that..." Jack looked down to her stomach "I think our baby foal grew. Like... a lot." Jack said sounding a bit scared. She grew. It was weird. He started hyperventilating. "Oh... my... Celestia... is... this... happening?" Jack said between breaths.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack had a poker face. He rubbed her stomach more. "I-I think that... that..." Jack looked down to her stomach "I think our baby foal grew. Like... a lot." Jack said sounding a bit scared. She grew. It was weird. He started hyperventilating. "Oh... my... Celestia... is... this... happening?" Jack said between breaths.

Charcoal looked down at her stomach. What was once an only slightly larger than normal stomach had now suddenly grown to where she now could have been seen as about half way through pregnancy. She clutched her stomach as she felt another strange feeling in her stomach, this one hurting a little. Now she actually felt the foal have another growth spurt.

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal looked down at her stomach. What was once an only slightly larger than normal stomach had now suddenly grown to where she now could have been seen as about half way through pregnancy. She clutched her stomach as she felt another strange feeling in her stomach, this one hurting a little. Now she actually felt the foal have another growth spurt.

Jack lied down on his side. He felt scarred. He was scared. At least he stopped hyperventilating "I really don't hate magic, but it now officially scares me." Jack rolled up in a ball. "There's so much fear. I don't know what to do! I'm just freaking out here!" Jack wished he secretly kept a beer to calm his nerves. "I-I-I don't know what to d-do!"

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack lied down on his side. He felt scarred. He was scared. At least he stopped hyperventilating "I really don't hate magic, but it now officially scares me." Jack rolled up in a ball. "There's so much fear. I don't know what to do! I'm just freaking out here!" Jack wished he secretly kept a beer to calm his nerves. "I-I-I don't know what to d-do!"

Charcoal had been given a break from the growing. She now looked like she wouldn't be pregnant for much longer. She heard Jack somewhere where she couldn't see him from where she was. She needed to comfort him. She tried to get up but she seemed to be stuck. "Hey Jack, I would come over there to comfort you, but do you think you could help me? I think I'm stuck."

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal had been given a break from the growing. She now looked like she wouldn't be pregnant for much longer. She heard Jack somewhere where she couldn't see him from where she was. She needed to comfort him. She tried to get up but she seemed to be stuck. "Hey Jack, I would come over there to comfort you, but do you think you could help me? I think I'm stuck."

Jack looked up "I'm down here. And stuck how?" Jack stood up so he was in front of Charcoal. He looked at her stomach. He no longer knew how to think, act or feel. This was so new to him. "You know. We've been together for five days... five. And due to our little adventures. I will never be surprised again." Jack joked but with no joking voice.