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"B-but I" Charcoal was surprised to see Jack getting so upset. "But she started it." Charcoal said, sounding a lot more like a little filly that she had planned on. "She was getting much to close to you Jack, I was just helping you out. Then she starts this whole thing."

"I know." Jack grabbed Charcoal "But if you beat up a pony just because they were misbehaving around me, that means you're gonna get hurt. Especially if you want to come to Appleloosa. And over there, some bar-fights include guns, knives, and Molotov cocktails. We are going to the hotel room. Meet me by the doors while I apologize to Spades." Jack ordered sternly 


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"I know." Jack grabbed Charcoal "But if you beat up a pony just because they were misbehaving around me, that means you're gonna get hurt. Especially if you want to come to Appleloosa. And over there, some bar-fights include guns, knives, and Molotov cocktails. We are going to the hotel room. Meet me by the doors while I apologize to Spades." Jack ordered sternly

"But I- *sigh*, alright." Charcoal begins to walk out of the bar, the whole way there she was glaring at Spades. "Don't do anything funny while I'm gone, you got that." Walking out the bar she waits outside for Jack, still seething at the Spade mare. "I'll get you later." Charcoal mumbles to herself.

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"I know." Jack grabbed Charcoal "But if you beat up a pony just because they were misbehaving around me, that means you're gonna get hurt. Especially if you want to come to Appleloosa. And over there, some bar-fights include guns, knives, and Molotov cocktails. We are going to the hotel room. Meet me by the doors while I apologize to Spades." Jack ordered sternly

"Heheh now I know what my next vacation will be." Spades gets in bar fights quite a bit, mainly when she loses in a game of cards. Bars are the only place she knows how to fight. "I have no business here anymore, I'll be taking my leave now...I need a shower, goodbye" She trots to the door of the bar.

Spades goes out on the opposite sidewalk from Jack and his friend. *ugh why must they go the same direction as me..."

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"Heheh now I know what my next vacation will be." Spades gets in bar fights quite a bit, mainly when she loses in a game of cards. Bars are the only place she knows how to fight. "I have no business here anymore, I'll be taking my leave now...I need a shower, goodbye" She trots to the door of the bar.

Jack saw Spades walk out the door. "Sorry!" Jack apologized. She didn't seem to notice. Jack sighed. She's nice. "Yeah. But she started it." Maybe it was because she wanted to be your friend. "It's always good to have friends. But now that's ruined now." Jack went to the counter and grabbed his Whiskey Sour. He swallowed it all in one chug and slapped 10 bits on the counter. "Sorry about the damage." he apologized to the bartender. Jack walked out the door now stress free. "Let's go, Charcoal."


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Jack saw Spades walk out the door. "Sorry!" Jack apologized. She didn't seem to notice. Jack sighed. She's nice. "Yeah. But she started it." Maybe it was because she wanted to be your friend. "It's always good to have friends. But now that's ruined now." Jack went to the counter and grabbed his Whiskey Sour. He swallowed it all in one chug and slapped 10 bits on the counter. "Sorry about the damage." he apologized to the bartender. Jack walked out the door now stress free. "Let's go, Charcoal."

"Yeah, let's go." Charcoal said, still a little sour at Spades. "I need to calm down a bit, I didn't think going to this bar was going to be so stressful. It has been a while since I got in a fight. But I don't think that I did that bed in it, I also kind of wished you hadn't stopper it either."

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"Yeah, let's go." Charcoal said, still a little sour at Spades. "I need to calm down a bit, I didn't think going to this bar was going to be so stressful. It has been a while since I got in a fight. But I don't think that I did that bed in it, I also kind of wished you hadn't stopper it either."

Jack started walking to the hotel "You wanted to fight her more? Wow. This is a side of you I haven't seen. You kicked flank. I'm impressed." Jack arrived at the hotel "I was going to let you to fight, only if you two kept it with your hooves." Jack walked up the stairs "But when that beer bottle came into contact with your head. I had to intervene." Jack was now in front of the door of Charcoal's room.


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Jack started walking to the hotel "You wanted to fight her more? Wow. This is a side of you I haven't seen. You kicked flank. I'm impressed." Jack arrived at the hotel "I was going to let you to fight, only if you two kept it with your hooves." Jack walked up the stairs "But when that beer bottle came into contact with your head. I had to intervene." Jack was now in front of the door of Charcoal's room.

"It's not like I normally want to fight everypony I meet. But that mare was really pissing me off." Charcoal said. Once she was in front her room she looks at Jack. "Well I guess we could go out and do something else that would be fine, but I would kind of like a shower to wash off the beer."

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"It's not like I normally want to fight everypony I meet. But that mare was really pissing me off." Charcoal said. Once she was in front her room she looks at Jack. "Well I guess we could go out and do something else that would be fine, but I would kind of like a shower to wash off the beer."

"You look terrible." Jack said "Beer, glass, bruise. Actually that bruise is smaller than I thought. Anyways, yeah. Get ready. And be careful. I'll wait for you here." Jack saw something in Charcoal's hair. He grabbed it. It was a shard of glass. "That's sorta scary. So yeah. Clean yourself good." 


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Spades goes up the elevator to her floor, once the door opens...you've gotta be kidding me, they were on the same floor as her, and where next door. *Why...* "suddenly I feel as if the universe hates me..." She says with her head down.

Spades grabs her key to unlock the door. *yuck I'm all sticky now.* Spades tried to keep a low profile so no pony looks at her.

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"You look terrible." Jack said "Beer, glass, bruise. Actually that bruise is smaller than I thought. Anyways, yeah. Get ready. And be careful. I'll wait for you here." Jack saw something in Charcoal's hair. He grabbed it. It was a shard of glass. "That's sorta scary. So yeah. Clean yourself good."

 

"Alright, see you in a minute." Using her key Charcoal goes into her room. Placing her bags down she walks into the bathroom and takes her second shower. After finishing, and finding a few more glass shards she does her mane. She might have done it a little more than she usually does but afterwords she gets her bags she walks out of her room to meet Jack.

((OOC: I'm going to be gone for a few hours riding rolercoasters.))

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"Alright, see you in a minute." Using her key Charcoal goes into her room. Placing her bags down she walks into the bathroom and takes her second shower. After finishing, and finding a few more glass shards she does her mane. She might have done it a little more than she usually does but afterwords she gets her bags she walks out of her room to meet Jack.

((OOC: I'm going to be gone for a few hours riding rolercoasters.))

((OOC: Lucky.))

"Ah great you're back. Are you ready? You look clean now. That's for sure. So lets go." Jack headed to the stairs. 'Did you find anything else you had to fix other than glass, beer, and guiness? You do have that small bruise on your head. I hope you're okay."


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Spades trots into her room and steps into the bathroom. And takes a shower. Spades was still having troubles seeing, and her eyes felt a bit sticky. Even after showering twice. Spades walks for the sink and washes her face and looks in the mirror, her eyes were still red. She flops into bed exhausted. Spades looks at her bags, she still never unpacked, tomorrow I'll unpack, she lies there for a while blank.

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"Ah great you're back. Are you ready? You look clean now. That's for sure. So lets go." Jack headed to the stairs. 'Did you find anything else you had to fix other than glass, beer, and guiness? You do have that small bruise on your head. I hope you're okay."

Charcoal gives a little laugh at Jacks worrying. "Your worried about the masochistic being hurt? That's kind of funny if you ask me you know." Charcoal says as she follows Jack. "So what do you want to do now Jack? It doesn't matter to me all that much." Charcoal said.

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Charcoal gives a little laugh at Jacks worrying. "Your worried about the masochistic being hurt? That's kind of funny if you ask me you know." Charcoal says as she follows Jack. "So what do you want to do now Jack? It doesn't matter to me all that much." Charcoal said.

Jack looked to Charcoal. "To tell you the truth, I want to protect you. I hate seeing you getting hurt. Let's do something calm and something that you can't get hurt. Let's just have a stroll down the streets of Paris." That was corny. "How does that sound to you?"


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Jack looked to Charcoal. "To tell you the truth, I want to protect you. I hate seeing you getting hurt. Let's do something calm and something that you can't get hurt. Let's just have a stroll down the streets of Paris." That was corny. "How does that sound to you?"

"That.. is.. very sweet of you Jack." Charcoal said, blushing slightly. "And a stroll sounds nice. It sounds nice and calming, just as long as we don't run into that mare." Charcoals finished, sounding a little bitter. I will get her next time I see her. Charcoal thought to herself.

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"That.. is.. very sweet of you Jack." Charcoal said, blushing slightly. "And a stroll sounds nice. It sounds nice and calming, just as long as we don't run into that mare." Charcoals finished, sounding a little bitter. I will get her next time I see her. Charcoal thought to herself.

Jack laughed nervously "That's me." Jack said "I don't like seeing mares getting hurt. Call it a weak spot. No, a soft spot. That's better." Jack started walking out the hotel. "Paris is actually pretty pretty. I didn't think it'd be this good. And I love the homey architecture." Jack turned around to Charcoal "What do you think?"


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Dog Ears looked around. "I um...don't know... Wanna find a place to stay? That'd probably be a good thing to do. DO you know if there's any hotels around here?" The brown pony looked around, unsure what to do. He hadn't had many friends despite bring very friendly, so he didn't really know what to do with Blazing. 

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"That's probably a good idea." Blazing said. "Although, I don't really know much about this place, so we're kind of going to have to search for a hotel."  He said. "Sorry if that didn't make sense." He added. Well... I don't think this can get any worse now can it? He wondered.


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Dog Ears raised an eyebrow. "Uh.. That made plenty of sense. You gotta stop doubting yourself. I don't even see why that wouldn't make sense. It's probably similar to what I would have said. Anyway let's go then. Afterward we should find someplace to eat. I'm starving." 

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Jack laughed nervously "That's me." Jack said "I don't like seeing mares getting hurt. Call it a weak spot. No, a soft spot. That's better." Jack started walking out the hotel. "Paris is actually pretty pretty. I didn't think it'd be this good. And I love the homey architecture." Jack turned around to Charcoal "What do you think?"

Charcoal looked around at all of the architecture and buildings around her. "It is incredible." Charcoal said with a little sparkle in her eyes. "All the detail in each and everyone of the statues is just astonishing. And all of the building are crafted with such beautiful stone, it is enough to make anypony practically droll."

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Jack's stomach rumbled. "Wow. I'm starting to gut the munchies. I wonder if there's a hot dog stand somewhere."  Jack said licking his lips. "Maybe even a croissant with a piece of cheese, ham, and a nice small glass of wine." Jack, you drunkard. Stop mentioning alcohol. You're gonna make her worry about you. "Why wouldn't she trust me?"

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Jack's stomach rumbled. "Wow. I'm starting to gut the munchies. I wonder if there's a hot dog stand somewhere." Jack said licking his lips. "Maybe even a croissant with a piece of cheese, ham, and a nice small glass of wine." Jack, you drunkard. Stop mentioning alcohol. You're gonna make her worry about you. "Why wouldn't she trust me?"

"What do you mean "why wouldn't I trust you?"" Charcoal asked, curious at why Jack suddenly asked a question like that. "Of course I trust you Jack, I wouldn't have told you all I did if I didn't trust you. You really need to stop doubting me." Charcoal said with a smile.

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Dog Ears raised an eyebrow. "Uh.. That made plenty of sense. You gotta stop doubting yourself. I don't even see why that wouldn't make sense. It's probably similar to what I would have said. Anyway let's go then. Afterward we should find someplace to eat. I'm starving." 

"I'm sorry, I'm just naturally hard on myself... I try to control it, but it still tends to happen sometimes." Blazing said. "Let's go then." He said, trying to change the subject. He's right... I do have to stop being so hard on myself... He thought. Great... Now that's gonna bug me for the rest of the vacation isn't it? He wondered.


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"What do you mean "why wouldn't I trust you?"" Charcoal asked, curious at why Jack suddenly asked a question like that. "Of course I trust you Jack, I wouldn't have told you all I did if I didn't trust you. You really need to stop doubting me." Charcoal said with a smile.

"Hm?" Charcoal's question confused him "I don't doubt you. I just worry about you. I mean... look at you. You were just in a barfight. where you took mare pulling your hair and smashing your head with a bottle in the face. And you look as good as new just by taking a shower. I haven't seen anypony do that."


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"Hm?" Charcoal's question confused him "I don't doubt you. I just worry about you. I mean... look at you. You were just in a barfight. where you took mare pulling your hair and smashing your head with a bottle in the face. And you look as good as new just by taking a shower. I haven't seen anypony do that."

"It isn't that hard." Charcoal said. "It isn't like I was burned or cut. Blunt objects only leave wounds on the skin that don't stay for long and aren't very noticeable. If she had used knives or other sharp tools I would be in bad shape. All I really needed a shower for was to wash of the beer that was spilled on me and to make it easier to find more glass shards."

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