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Charcoal was unsure of how to think of what Jack was doing. She had never heard of a pony biting the bottom lip of their spouse. Although it didn't hurt so she didn't have any objections, though after a few seconds her curiosity won out. "Jack, what exactly are you doing?"

Jack let go of Charcoal. "What? You don't like it? I thought you would. Don't couples do it?" Jack said quickly. "I've seen couples do it in the bar when they're having a passionate session. I wanted to know if it was really that good. But if you don't like it I can stop." 


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Jack let go of Charcoal. "What? You don't like it? I thought you would. Don't couples do it?" Jack said quickly. "I've seen couples do it in the bar when they're having a passionate session. I wanted to know if it was really that good. But if you don't like it I can stop."

Charcoal thought for a moment. "I've heard of biting ears and necks but I have never heard of biting lips." Charcoal said. "I'm not saying I didn't like it I just wasn't sure what you were doing. This is the first time I've heard of ponies doing something like that."

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Charcoal thought for a moment. "I've heard of biting ears and necks but I have never heard of biting lips." Charcoal said. "I'm not saying I didn't like it I just wasn't sure what you were doing. This is the first time I've heard of ponies doing something like that."

"Biting the neck? Really? That's a thing?" Jack said with surprise in his eyes "What kind of ponies do that? Batponies? Do you think that feels nice?" Jack was curious. He looked at Charcoal's neck. I wonder. Jack's curiosity got the best of him. He slowly reached with his mouth to Charcoal's neck.


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"Biting the neck? Really? That's a thing?" Jack said with surprise in his eyes "What kind of ponies do that? Batponies? Do you think that feels nice?" Jack was curious. He looked at Charcoal's neck. I wonder. Jack's curiosity got the best of him. He slowly reached with his mouth to Charcoal's neck.

Charcoal felt a small tingle at Jacks bite. "Yeah, I'm feeling something." Charcoal said with a bit of pleasure in her voice. "I think the reason ponies do this is because there are quite a few sensitive nerves in the neck, and with just the right amount of pressure you can really feel it."

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Charcoal felt a small tingle at Jacks bite. "Yeah, I'm feeling something." Charcoal said with a bit of pleasure in her voice. "I think the reason ponies do this is because there are quite a few sensitive nerves in the neck, and with just the right amount of pressure you can really feel it."

Hearing the pleasure in Charcoal's voice made Jack blush. It actually felt good for him too. This feels nice. 'She also seems to like it.' Jack began to bite harder and harder. The feeling of the bite felt really good. I've never felt so good. 'Do you ever feel bad that you weren't feeling emotions when you bedded Charcoal?' A little. But you weren't there. So I'm glad about that. 'Oh, I was there the whole time. You just couldn't hear me.' Dammit!


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Hearing the pleasure in Charcoal's voice made Jack blush. It actually felt good for him too. This feels nice. 'She also seems to like it.' Jack began to bite harder and harder. The feeling of the bite felt really good. I've never felt so good. 'Do you ever feel bad that you weren't feeling emotions when you bedded Charcoal?' A little. But you weren't there. So I'm glad about that. 'Oh, I was there the whole time. You just couldn't hear me.' Dammit!

The bite was starting to feel uncomfortable now, though she didn't have the heart to tell Jack. He seemed to be enjoying himself by doing this with her, and she was happy for him because of that. Though if things got out of hoof she could always use her neck trick.

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The bite was starting to feel uncomfortable now, though she didn't have the heart to tell Jack. He seemed to be enjoying himself by doing this with her, and she was happy for him because of that. Though if things got out of hoof she could always use her neck trick.

Jack was disturbed about what his voice said. He let go of Charcoal and just nuzzled her. "Sorry. It's just that my voice said something that I didn't find too settling." Really? So you saw- 'Everything!' That's sort of weird. Was I good? 'Sort of. You were emotionless so when-'  I think I know enough.


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Jack was disturbed about what his voice said. He let go of Charcoal and just nuzzled her. "Sorry. It's just that my voice said something that I didn't find too settling." Really? So you saw- 'Everything!' That's sort of weird. Was I good? 'Sort of. You were emotionless so when-' I think I know enough.

"Was it really that bad?" Charcoal asked, who is to curious for her own good. She nuzzled Jack back and waited before asking her next question. "What was your voice saying to you? Is it something bad?" She continued to ask Jack while she was comforting him at the same time.

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"Was it really that bad?" Charcoal asked, who is to curious for her own good. She nuzzled Jack back and waited before asking her next question. "What was your voice saying to you? Is it something bad?" She continued to ask Jack while she was comforting him at the same time.

"Well..." Jack sighed "If we're going to be together. We might as well share everything and tell the truth about it." Jack sighed again "It mentioned about when we first bedded. It asked me if I felt bad that I didn't have any emotions then. Then it told me that when we thought it wasn't there. It actually was still in my head the whole time, but I just couldn't hear it."


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"Well..." Jack sighed "If we're going to be together. We might as well share everything and tell the truth about it." Jack sighed again "It mentioned about when we first bedded. It asked me if I felt bad that I didn't have any emotions then. Then it told me that when we thought it wasn't there. It actually was still in my head the whole time, but I just couldn't hear it."

"Well that's... something." Charcoal said. This was a little strange, but then Charcoal had an idea and smiled. "Say Jack, would you mind telling your voice that it is a bit rude to watch when other ponies are bedding together." She asked Jack. 'Bwahahaha... good one.' Thank you.

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"Well that's... something." Charcoal said. This was a little strange, but then Charcoal had an idea and smiled. "Say Jack, would you mind telling your voice that it is a bit rude to watch when other ponies are bedding together." She asked Jack. 'Bwahahaha... good one.' Thank you.

"Here, let me try asking it." Yeah, what she said. 'I'm you. You're me. I have just as much of a right to this mind as you do. So suck it up and deal with it.' "Darn! It has a very good point. It said that it is me so it has as much of a right to... our mind as I do." Jack looked annoyed. "Why do I have to be so smart?"


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"Here, let me try asking it." Yeah, what she said. 'I'm you. You're me. I have just as much of a right to this mind as you do. So suck it up and deal with it.' "Darn! It has a very good point. It said that it is me so it has as much of a right to... our mind as I do." Jack looked annoyed. "Why do I have to be so smart?"

"But this is in mind, not body. You weren't you when we did it, and your voice isn't emotionless is it? Thus it wasn't you at the time." Charcoal said on the spot. "Come on Jack, and you are supposed to be the smart one. Though I guess logic and intelligence aren't the same thing."

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"What does what stand for?" Blazing asked. The question was somewhat random, so he didn't really know how to answer. Maybe she's talking about... He couldn't finish his thought, because he really had no idea what she could have been talking about. After that he fell silent, just waiting for an answer.

((OMG OMG OMG! I wanted to just ask you why it was taking you so long to answer and you already had!!))

 

"I mean your cutie mark" she said while taking place outside the cafe. She waved over to a waiter so the pony knew they wanted to order something. "I mean, every cutie mark has a reason. What does yours stand for?"


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"But this is in mind, not body. You weren't you when we did it, and your voice isn't emotionless is it? Thus it wasn't you at the time." Charcoal said on the spot. "Come on Jack, and you are supposed to be the smart one. Though I guess logic and intelligence aren't the same thing."

"When was body brought up in this conversation? My voice emotionless? It wasn't me at the time?" Jack repeated confused. "I really don't understand." Jack thought it over. "I was me, but I didn't have emotions. My voice gets mad at me many times so it's not emotionless. I don't know what you're trying to prove here."


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((OMG OMG OMG! I wanted to just ask you why it was taking you so long to answer and you already had!!))

 

"I mean your cutie mark" she said while taking place outside the cafe. She waved over to a waiter so the pony knew they wanted to order something. "I mean, every cutie mark has a reason. What does yours stand for?"

((Seriously I was gonna ask why you weren't responding, lol))

"Oh that..." Blazing said. He never liked explaining his cutie mark. "The day I got it, was the worst day of my life." He started. "I got my heart broken for the first time. Since then, my life has been filled with nothing but failed attempts, over and over." He explained. He stopped talking, not wanting to say anything else.


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"When was body brought up in this conversation? My voice emotionless? It wasn't me at the time?" Jack repeated confused. "I really don't understand." Jack thought it over. "I was me, but I didn't have emotions. My voice gets mad at me many times so it's not emotionless. I don't know what you're trying to prove here."

Charcoal thought for a moment on how she could explain this. "Well, you said that your voice said it was you and had just as much right to your mind as you, correct? While that may be true now it couldn't have been when you were emotionless, since you said that the voice was still there it just couldn't be heard. If your voice is just basically you than if it was to be you during the time when we bedded it would have to have been emotionless as well but that isn't the case. So in conclusion I can say that your voice is a perv." Charcoal finished.

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Charcoal thought for a moment on how she could explain this. "Well, you said that your voice said it was you and had just as much right to your mind as you, correct? While that may be true now it couldn't have been when you were emotionless, since you said that the voice was still there it just couldn't be heard. If your voice is just basically you than if it was to be you during the time when we bedded it would have to have been emotionless as well but that isn't the case. So in conclusion I can say that your voice is a perv." Charcoal finished.

"I know that my voice is a perv. It's me..." Jack's face grew with shock. He crawled out from under Charcoal and jumped on the bed where he curled up in a ball and covered himself with a blanket. "A-am I a perv? I don't want to be a perv. Pervs aren't nice. Pervs are sick son of bi- RRRGH!"


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"I know that my voice is a perv. It's me..." Jack's face grew with shock. He crawled out from under Charcoal and jumped on the bed where he curled up in a ball and covered himself with a blanket. "A-am I a perv? I don't want to be a perv. Pervs aren't nice. Pervs are sick son of bi- RRRGH!"

Charcoal giggled at Jack and walked over to him. She lifted the covers over his head and kissed him on the cheek. "No, you aren't perv Jack. If you were I would have been gone a long time ago." She was about to crawl I to bed with Jack when she smelled something funky, then she remember she had been cooking. "Oh shiza." She ran into the kitchen and began stirring the sauce to keep it from burning, she also turned down the heat a bit.

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Charcoal giggled at Jack and walked over to him. She lifted the covers over his head and kissed him on the cheek. "No, you aren't perv Jack. If you were I would have been gone a long time ago." She was about to crawl I to bed with Jack when she smelled something funky, then she remember she had been cooking. "Oh shiza." She ran into the kitchen and began stirring the sauce to keep it from burning, she also turned down the heat a bit.

Jack began to laugh "Shiza? What in the name of Celestia is shiza?" Jack laid on his back and laughed more "If you're trying to speak German. Then it's "Scheiße" not shiza." Jack began to calm down as he smelt the sauce. That smells good. 'Tee hee. You're a perv.' Says the perv. 'Darn it!' Burn!


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Jack began to laugh "Shiza? What in the name of Celestia is shiza?" Jack laid on his back and laughed more "If you're trying to speak German. Then it's "Scheiße" not shiza." Jack began to calm down as he smelt the sauce. That smells good. 'Tee hee. You're a perv.' Says the perv. 'Darn it!' Burn!

"Charcoal answered back with the spoon still in her mouth. "It is just something I say. I heard it a while back and it kind of stuck with me. I do that sometimes. I also say knife differently and confused differently. And it isn't German, I have never been good at learning other languages."

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"Charcoal answered back with the spoon still in her mouth. "It is just something I say. I heard it a while back and it kind of stuck with me. I do that sometimes. I also say knife differently and confused differently. And it isn't German, I have never been good at learning other languages."

"Really? Oh das bad Frauline." Jack said almost mockingly. "I'm still having trouble learning Spanish. Darn Mexicolt taco language." Jack hopped off the bed and went to see how Charcoal's soup was doing. Jack looked at the sauce "Looks good. I can't wait to have a bowl of pasta." Jack said enthusiastically forgetting that Charcoal's taste in food drastically changed.


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"Really? Oh das bad Frauline." Jack said almost mockingly. "I'm still having trouble learning Spanish. Darn Mexicolt taco language." Jack hopped off the bed and went to see how Charcoal's soup was doing. Jack looked at the sauce "Looks good. I can't wait to have a bowl of pasta." Jack said enthusiastically forgetting that Charcoal's taste in food drastically changed.

Charcoal took the spoon and gave the sauce a taste. She was satisfied with how it tasted and put the spoon back. "Well grab yourself a plate because it is done." Charcoal went to the cabinet and got a plate. She got one and put some noodles on it. She then put some sauce on top of it. Then she remembered something she forgot. She put her plate down and took the spaghetti strainer and put the noodles in a bowl. She then took some sauce and mixed it in with the noodles. "There, now you can get some." She grabbed herself a fork as well and went over to the table, balancing the plate on a wing.

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Charcoal took the spoon and gave the sauce a taste. She was satisfied with how it tasted and put the spoon back. "Well grab yourself a plate because it is done." Charcoal went to the cabinet and got a plate. She got one and put some noodles on it. She then put some sauce on top of it. Then she remembered something she forgot. She put her plate down and took the spaghetti strainer and put the noodles in a bowl. She then took some sauce and mixed it in with the noodles. "There, now you can get some." She grabbed herself a fork as well and went over to the table, balancing the plate on a wing.

Charcoal saw her balancing her plate on her wing. He almost applauded. He took a plate for himself and served up a medium sized portion. He grabbed it with his mouth and put it on the table. He forgot a fork so he quickly grabbed one. He sat at the table and waited for Charcoal to take the first bite.


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Charcoal saw her balancing her plate on her wing. He almost applauded. He took a plate for himself and served up a medium sized portion. He grabbed it with his mouth and put it on the table. He forgot a fork so he quickly grabbed one. He sat at the table and waited for Charcoal to take the first bite.

Charcoal grabbed her fork and twirled it to get some pasta. Once she had gotten a decent amount, and by decent she means half her plate, she shoves it all in her mouth and begins chewing. It was amazing, she had never liked spicy foods before but she could eat this forever. Though she could live without her eyes watering.

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Charcoal grabbed her fork and twirled it to get some pasta. Once she had gotten a decent amount, and by decent she means half her plate, she shoves it all in her mouth and begins chewing. It was amazing, she had never liked spicy foods before but she could eat this forever. Though she could live without her eyes watering.

Jack saw Charcoal eat almost the whole plate right in front of him. It looked like she was enjoying it, except her eyes were watering. Jack suddenly remembered that Charcoal was pregnant. What have I done?! I served my plate with the food only a maniac makes. Jack looked down at the pasta. He twirled his fork into the pasta bringing out a small forkful. As he stared at it, it was almost like it was staring back. Jack didn't want to hurt Charcoal's feelings, so he took the bite. It wasn't as bad as he thought. Until he swallowed. Instantly his throat burned. He ran to the fridge and opened it. He frantically looked for something to help the pain. He saw a few beers. He took one and popped the cap off. He chugged the whole thing in one swallow. "Not enough!" he grabbed another beer which he also swallowed. Once done he was no longer burning, but he fell over, intoxicated.


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