List of characters in my fanfic. Which one sounds interesting?

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My fanfic is still a work in progress so don't ask any details.

Shadow - male - pegasus

Dawn - female - unicorn

Excaelum - male - dragon

Knight Black Soul - female - pegasus

Seng - male - pegasus

Lancer - male - pegasus

Aero - male - pegasus

Fyn Cour - female - unicorn

Dust - female - earth

Knight Storm - male - pegasus

Dragaitas - male - dragon

Iril - female - unicorn

Again I'm still working on it so there will be more characters.

I might post the prologue in a different topic maybe in a week but, it's actually really hard to write.

Edited August 13, 2013 by Rarity_Luna

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Out of those, I would say Lancer, Dawn, and Knight Storm sound the most interesting..why? Well, I would say it's the names, they all sound so awesome to me.

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Thanks it took me awhile to figure out Storm's name. And I know people are going to be pronouncing things wrong so for the characters with more let's say extraordinary names here's how to say them

Misspelled 3rd name

Excaelum (ex-say-lum)

Fyn Cour (fine core)

Dragaitas (dra-guy-tis

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I made many new characters and yes they all do their part in my story(most of them anyway)the new additions are:

Voyager - male - pegasus

Echo - male - pegasus

Tint - male - pegasus

Bladedancer - male - pegasus

Flood - male - pegasus

Fencer - male - pegasus

Damn I refreshed I page on accident derpy moment

Cloudfire - m = male - p = Pegasus

Razor - m - p

Cannon - m - p

Hail - m - p

Chronin - f = female - d = dragon

Mesadraco - m - d

Pyrodia - m - d

Aquabellina - f - d

Olganna - f - d

Zartez - m - d

Wrench - m - p

Wither - f - e = earth

Gandore - f - u = unicorn

Harvest - f - d

Ula - f - d

Jakal - m - d

Nelo - f - d

Shortsnout - m - d

Karnage - f - d

Luster - f - d

Gulfstream - m - d

TONS of dragons I need to add more earth and unicorn ponies and female characters too. The female characters I have now do play a big roll though.

Check out my prologue in the fan fiction section of pony artwork.

Dawn After War Nexus(prologue)

Tell your friends and Derpy gives you a muffin

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I need to know their personalitys to know if they are interesting or not.

Also, needs more Earth pony!

 

Out of all the names I like Cloudfire the best.

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Haven't found any rolls where I can put an earth pony but, I'm trying to though. The earth ponies will have a roll towards the end as a whole group not a singular individual character.

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I think Dust sounds the most interesting, after all there must be some cool and creative reason why there is only a single earth pony in the entire cast...

 

Well there is also Wither, but she sounds like a tool.

 

Three cheers for judging characters based off of name, gender, and race! Personality and backstory is overrated anyway.

 

Also I didn't know that many dragons could fit in Equestria.

Edited August 31, 2013 by TheSteampunkNinja (TSN)

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Seng. That name is short, simple, to the purpose, while remaining enigmatic - it doesn't give away details about the character. With "Knight Black Soul", it almost guides you through his character, kinda like "Ooh, he's a knight! His soul is dark and black". With Seng, he could be anything

 

Edit: Okay, she. Missed that part. :3

Edited August 31, 2013 by Flipturn Brennenburg

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@Flipturn Brennenburg ha. Black Soul is actually a female and her real personality I haven't revealed yet. And Seng is actually a Chinese name and it's my middle name, Seng is basically my ponysona. Sarcastic and doesn't think.

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Equestria is a country. I placed the dragon area outside of it so it can be divided. I'm also working on a chapter involving dragons having a little battle with each also the dragon country is south and north of Equestria and a little to the east.

@TheSteampunkNinja (TSN), Dust is actually kind of a minor character but, I'm going to add the main one later in my story to complete the characters that have powers if you're curious the characters are Shadow, Dawn, and Excaelum. Haven't come up with a name for the powers yet though.

The next list is going to be a list of antagonist( I don't know when I'm going to post it) but you can also give me a little feedback on which characters sound interesting to you from the previous lists or the antagonist one.

Edited September 3, 2013 by Rarity_Luna

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Correct pronunciation for some of the names, just in case you say it wrong.

Chronin-(crow-nin)

Pyrodia-(pie-row-dia)

Olganna-(ol-gann-a) second "n" is for show.

Ula-(ooo-la)

Jakal-(ja-cal)

Nelo-(knee-low)

Antagonist characters will be on this topic later.

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Fyn Cour, Aero, and Tint sound interesting.

Tint and Aero just sound cool and mysterious.

Fyn Cour, however, sounds foreign and awesome. c:

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Thanks for the feedback guys. I may change up some of the names of the characters such as Shadow because his name is way to common especially for the roll he plays in my story. He's one of the main protagonist.

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I think Aero, Cloudfire, Echo and Dust sound the most interesting. Like everyone is saying, I can't really judge based on just name, gender and race, but those names sound very interesting.

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I'm going to add some personalities of the characters with 2 words, the rest ill do with 1 word and if they're main,secondary,supporting, and antagonist as a little info since this is the first forum I have ever signed up for in maybe an hour.

Shadow- brave,stubborn- main character

Dawn- caring,smart- main

Excaelum- strong,patient - main

Black Soul- strict,kind- main

Seng- sarcastic,humorous- secondary character

Lancer- optimistic-secondary

Aero- negative- secondary

Fyn Cour- loving- secondary

Dust- obedient- secondary

Storm- douche- secondary

Dragaitas- wise- secondary character

Iril- gullible- supporting

Voyager- serious- secondary

Echo- curious- secondary

Tint- nervous- secondary

Bladedancer- happy- supporting

Flood- stubborn- secondary

Fencer- outgoing- supporting

Cloudfire- brave- secondary

The rest I'll post later.

Also, half the characters in all my posts will be 6 feet under by the end. Don't worry I won't spoil it.

Edited September 8, 2013 by Rarity_Luna

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Razor- childish - supporting

Cannon - hardheaded - supporting

Hail - short-tempered - supporting

Chronin - wise - secondary

Mesadraco - stubborn - secondary

Pyrodia - aggressive - secondary

Aquabellina - two-faced - secondary

Olganna - kind- secondary

Zartez - immature(as in he acts before thinks)- secondary

Wrench - greasemonkey - secondary

Wither - shy - supporting

Gandore - knowledgeable - secondary

Harvest - polite - secondary

Ula, Jakal, Nelo, Shortsnout, Karnage, Luster, Gulfstream all kind of act alike. they act like teenagers but, at times they can be mature.

FIRST ANTAGONIST 

Garren (gare-in)- cruel -  primary

I'm going to add the relationships between the characters next.

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Lancer and Aero sound very interesting. Let me guess. Lancer is tough and Aero is carefree. Am I right? /)? Also Iril sounds interesting too.

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Shadow is Dawn's father.

Excaelum's dad is Dragaitas.

Black Soul was once saved by one of these characters(Hint: it's one of the primary characters) also, she went out with Storm once.

Chronin was best friends with Dragaitas.

Wrench took care of Wither when he found her wandering in the Everfree when she was a filly

Garren was once Shadow's teacher

ALSO, Luna and Celestia are also in it they both play secondary characters.

ANOTHER, NEW CHARACTER BELOW

Starflare - loving, strong - supporting. Shadow's deceased wife and Dawn's mother

Anypony who is reading and is wondering,"How can Starflare play a roll when she's dead?" Well, half of her magic ability was given to Dawn when she was born and the rest Starflare gave her before she died in an accident. She also encourages Shadow not to give up in the form of a spirit when he's about to die. She is also related to a unicorn who's title is "The Bearded" hence the name Starflare guess who it is, it shouldn't be so hard. She's an unicorn as well. As powerful as Celestia and Luna combined.

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I am seeking a name replacement for my character Shadow because his name sounds WAY too generic and common for his roll. If you need help making a name I'll describe him to assist you in your mind boggling task. 

Wife died.

One of the 8 beings in the pony world to have the most powerful known magic called Lumen Fulsi(light beam) magic. The 8 components of the magic are:

Life-Death

Love-Hate

Peace-Pain

Merciful-Merciless

Yin-Yang type of deal. Shadow withholds the power of life.

He's also a pegasus. I know, I know, by this time you're probably wondering "why does a pegasus have magical abilities?" Well, because the magic was spread upon the world of ponies. Earth, Unicorn, Pegasi, and dragons. No alicorns cuz they're already OP(not as OP as Lumen Fulsi users  ) and I don't care much for griffons. My bad Gilda lovers.

SO, any suggestions would be appreciated but, I would like to ask if it can be uncommon and with a first and a last name.

HAPPY THINKING!!!

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/131201/day-after-war-nexus first chapter and prologue posted now go and read. since this is my first forum i'll keep you guys updated on my fanfic. HAPPY READING!!

NEW CHAPTER NEW CHAPTER NEW CHAPTER NEW CHAPTER NEW CHAPTER NEW CHAPTER NEW CHAPTER NEW CHAPTER NEW CHAPTER NEW CHAPTER above lol 100 characters

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Need antagonist names. Eehhhhhhh. So hard to think about the enemies name because you don't want it to be like cheesey or anything like that

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Orcusin(or-kiss-in) male - dragon - antagonist

Lacoden(la-co-din) female - unicorn - antagonist

I may post the meanings of some of the unique names for example

Fyn Cour, I forgot but it basically means good heart or something like that.