Applejack Digital Art (First Applejack in Digital Form.)

[galaxysquid 2,122]

So hey guys. I worked on this for a while and I wanted some critique. I've been trying to get better and better at digital art. (Especially ponies.) I wanted to know what you think about it!

 

 Thanks guys. Brohoof to you all! /) 

 

[Skeletor Brony 703]

Godly, man. It's quite the marvel. Keep em' coming. It's got that digital art feeling to it with the correct color border and what not. The only thing that I think needs improvement is the muzzle-area. But, hell. It's perfect.

[Guest DJ Hydrolicious]

Godly, man. It's quite the marvel. Keep em' coming. It's got that digital art feeling to it with the correct color border and what not. The only thing that I think needs improvement is the muzzle-area. But, hell. It's perfect.

She's a woman anyways. Great work there you have Bridget. Its alot better then I can do if I try to draw. Keep them coming and I will support you all the way.

[galaxysquid 2,122]

Godly, man. It's quite the marvel. Keep em' coming. It's got that digital art feeling to it with the correct color border and what not. The only thing that I think needs improvement is the muzzle-area. But, hell. It's perfect.

Thanks so very much, Rainbow. I actually kinda like her muzzle like that...I think it looks adorable. But I am not trying to aim too much on the actually pony side, more of my own art style. But I do try to get the right pony anatomy as well with pencil drawings.

[Blue Moon 6,341]

Wow, that's actually a really cute art style you got there. It's unique too, especially with that tiny little bottom lip. Anyway, you wanted critique, so here you go. The colors look nice, and they go with the cartoonish style you used, but the left eye is a bit too big. The chest's lines are a bit rough, and the chest itself sticks out a bit too much. Try studying the proportions of more My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic-styled ponies until you know them by heart. 

 

The right foreleg's proportions are a bit off as well, and the knee is too pointy. Finally, the neck is a bit too thick, and the Cutie Mark is a bit too small, and is placed too high. Try making it a bit bigger, and putting it around the center of that section of the pony's body. Other than these things, this looks pretty good (that muzzle is adorable), and you show a lot of potential. Look forward to seeing future artwork from you. Good luck!

Edited October 4, 2013 by Blue Moon

[galaxysquid 2,122]

Wow, that's actually a really cute art style you got there. It's unique too, especially with that tiny little bottom lip. Anyway, you wanted critique, so here you go. The colors look nice, and they go with the cartoonish style you used, but the left eye is a bit too big. The chest's lines are a bit rough, and the chest itself sticks out a bit too much. Try studying the proportions of more My Little Pony:

Friendship is Magic-styled ponies until you know them by heart. 

 

The right foreleg's proportions are a bit off as well, and the knee is too pointy. Finally, the neck is a bit too thick, and the Cutie Mark is a bit too small, and is placed too high. Try making it a bit bigger, and putting it around the center of that section of the pony's body. Other than these things, this looks pretty good (that muzzle is adorable), and you show a lot of potential. Look forward to seeing future artwork from you. Good luck!

Wow that's really great critique.

 

Thanks a lot Blue Moon. I love your critiques. xD 

I noticed that I really like the way I do the muzzle. It's super adorable in my opinion. And I will be posting future art as well. I just wish that my phone wasn't broken, or I would post more of my hand sketched drawings as well. Soon I will and I'll show them to all of you! 

 

Thanks again. ^-^ /)

[Iudex 1,945]

Very nice! The only thing I'd point out that needs some improvement is the chest area. If you can, make the line going from her muzzle to her hindlegs one smooth stroke. It'll look more uniform, while making the neck a bit thinner. ^^

 

Fantastic work, Princess! It looks great.

You're improving! Quite quickly, I might add.

Edited October 4, 2013 by Windhover

[galaxysquid 2,122]

Very nice! The only thing I'd point out that needs some improvement is the chest area. If you can, make the line going from her muzzle to her hindlegs one smooth stroke. It'll look more uniform, while making the neck a bit thinner. ^^

 

Fantastic work, Princess! It looks great.

You're improving! Quite quickly, I might add.

Thanks a TON Windhover. 

 

Man, if I could show you some of the stuff I can draw with pencil and paper, you'd love it. But I can't sadly.

And I will work on the chest part. I always have trouble on that part of ponies.

Edited October 4, 2013 by PrincessOfWub

[Iudex 1,945]

Thanks a TON Windhover. 

 

Man, if I could show you some of the stuff I can draw with pencil and paper, you'd love it. But I can't sadly.

And I will work on the chest part. I always have trouble on that part of ponies.

Now I really wish your phone wasn't 'broken'.

Here, I drew up a reference real quick for you.

I highlighted the areas I was talking about in red. I overlapped the legs, but you can simply erase the uneeded sections of the strokes after drawing it. (Or can you? I don't use muro, sorry. )

 

Note: Just gotta clarify here. This is how I draw things. I'm not telling Wubs how she should draw... Just giving her some pointers on how I go about things.

Edited October 4, 2013 by Windhover

[galaxysquid 2,122]

Now I really wish your phone wasn't 'broken'.

Here, I drew up a reference real quick for you.

I highlighted the areas I was talking about in red. I overlapped the legs, but you can simply erase the uneeded sections of the strokes after drawing it. (Or can you? I don't use muro, sorry. )

 

Note: Just gotta clarify here. This is how I draw things. I'm not telling Wubs how she should draw... Just giving her some pointers on how I go about things.

Oh wow! That's great help. Thank-you. 

 

Yeah I can do that in muro. I'll try that some time soon...or now. xD And yeah when my phone gets paid off I'll post some more stuff or just send you some links. Thanks for your support Wind. 

[Iudex 1,945]

Oh wow! That's great help. Thank-you. 

 

Yeah I can do that in muro. I'll try that some time soon...or now. xD And yeah when my phone gets paid off I'll post some more stuff or just send you some links. Thanks for your support Wind. 

No problem! ^^

 

I look forward to sharing some art with you. I really do. Maybe I can sift through my P-CLASS OBJ. folder and look for some year old drawings. Or maybe even my first pony drawing o_O

 

Again, no problem! That's what friends are for, right?

[galaxysquid 2,122]

No problem! ^^

 

I look forward to sharing some art with you. I really do. Maybe I can sift through my P-CLASS OBJ. folder and look for some year old drawings. Or maybe even my first pony drawing o_O

 

Again, no problem! That's what friends are for, right?

Totally! Can't wait to see more drawings form you either. Hey if you want to see, here's a drawing of Octavia I have from a pencil sketch I found.