Vector for SilverStar

[galaxysquid 2,122]

Hey guys. I just finished up making a vector for a random person on the forums. 

 

Tell me what you guys think of it, please. This is my FIRST vector.

 

[Guest]

For a first vector do i tip my hat. You shoulda seen my first vector. Lets just say it was also my last and leave it there.

However do i have a bit of criticism.

One being, that some parts of the outline are done rough ( his left hoof and the area over his buttmark being prime examples)

also does the back-leg seem a bit weird  ( could be style tho. If it is i apologise )

Sorry if this seems a bit harsh, but i think its only constructive.

 

What i love is, how you did the eye, headmane and mouth.

 

Keep it up. If this is your first vector, i cannot wait for the second or third (...) to turn up.

Edited October 9, 2013 by Guest

[galaxysquid 2,122]

For a first vector do i tip my hat. You shoulda seen my first vector. Lets just say it was also my last and leave it there.

However do i have a bit of criticism.

One being, that some parts of the outline are done rough ( his left hoof and the area over his buttmark being prime examples)

also does the back-leg seem a bit weird  ( could be style tho. If it is i apologise )

Sorry if this seems a bit harsh, but i think its only constructive.

 

What i love is, how you did the eye, headmane and mouth.

 

Keep it up. If this is your first vector, i cannot wait for the second or third (...) to turn up.

Thanks so much! And yes, he leg is a bit funny but that's how it was drawn to begin with. Somebody wanted something to be vectored, so I did it. And I am currently working on a vector for someone else at the moment.

 

I love this type of critique so it is not harsh at all.