music Halloween special drum and bass

[Simcity11100 770]

So today I've been working on this Halloween special drum and bass song and I would like to know what you guys think of it and put all complaints down below, thanks!

 

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,809]

Variance is the biggest gap here. You need to vary up those percussion patterns my friend. Plus, on the intro the percussion was a little off sync. Add more fill-ins and transitions to other patterns. Plus vary the patterns on your synths. Almost all of them follow the same pattern. This is one reason why I don't listen to electronic music, simply because it lacks variance, not to be so hard on you.

 

This is all from a 14 year experienced musician (not to brag)