First time drawing Applejack as filly, now with a little more shading!

[Slice0Pie 815]

Its a little hard to see the shadings, sadly

So, what do you all think?

[Sir.Flutter Hooves 2,953]

Its a little hard to see the shadings, sadly

So, what do you all think?

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Wow, another good one there Cadence!

 

I really like the mane and the way of the body! Good job there.

 

Now,  the mouth does look a little bit weird and the snout to looks alittle weird.

 

Besides that great job! Keep trying, you can do it!

[Zygen 6,066]

Quite well done! You are infact improving keep it up!

 

The head is however a bit odd, its closer, but its still shaped a bit oddly, maybe to rounded even,

 

Also where the head connects to the neck you can erase most of that line, i'm pretty sure in that angle or view it won't show really like that.

 

Don't erase it all, just most, its hard to describe, maybe look at some references.

 

Maybe the same with the head shape, its getting closer though!

 

The mouth and muzzle look a bit odd, really all the nose should be is like a line mostly, unless you stylistically want to be like that.

 

The mouth is mostly ok, but something about it seems maybe a bit off idk ;p.

 

The hooves have a couple rough lines, and they also need to have a bit more natural curve to them, and still have them touch the ground in a natural way, they shouldn't really be straight exactly.

 

The lines on the ears shouldn't really go the entire way across, its kinda this half crecent thing inside the ear, without touching either side, relatively small.

 

Overall though the other parts seem to look pretty good! Your body shape is pretty well done! And the mane is very beautiful done!

 

Keep up the good work!

[ShadOBabe 19,011]

I'd shorten the legs more if she's supposed to be a filly.

Filly's in the show have very stubby, rounded legs and hooves.

 

But not a bad first try. X3