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[The Time Pony 31]

Crimson sat silently. Ever and dropped off again. He hugged her once more then stood. He watched Lost and Dam. They seem happy together. Crimson walked out the door, and into the hall. He didn't really know what he felt like doing, something stupid maybe. He went downstairs to the restraunt and began to drink.

[Anon In Equestria 57]

Hmmm where's captain a******* of to then I'll go check on him so I followed downstairs to the restaurant and hid he seems to be drinking hmm I wonder why I stand up and walk into his view "hey friend aren't you meant to be on watch you really should not be drinking right now its not smart now is it are you upset or something oh is this about evergreen what's wrong ol buddy of mine" I say leaning against a wall

Edited January 1, 2014 by lonewolf1735

[The Time Pony 31]

Crimson rapidly stood and punched him in the face before walking off. He went back upstairs and sitting outside the hotel room. He continued to drink from the bottle he had taken.

 

((Conner don't bleep out words, just say asshole.))

 

((Also sorry Everypony I was gone cause of New Years

[Anon In Equestria 57]

(Sorry didn't know if that was okay

Also I love the peace crimson is emanating right now bro)

 

I hit the floor with a very painful *thump* "ow dick what was that for jeez your a nice guy huh wow was only asking if your all right I'll take that as a no then hey where are you going now" I say holding my nose as crimson walks off so I follow him again "hey crimson what's wrong did I say something or maybe do something that might have upset"

Edited January 1, 2014 by lonewolf1735

[The Time Pony 31]

(He wants to be left alone, plus Conner keeps taunting him)

 

Crimson turned "buck off" he said to him. Why couldn't he be left alone for once. He sat down and had his weapons ready incase of more undead. "There is nothing between me and evergreen. It's called having friends"

[Anon In Equestria 57]

I'm was just asking no need to get physical its not like I was being rude what's your problem with me any way what have I done to you or evergreen for that matter all I've done is buzz about doing shit hell I haven't even been near evergreen so yeah what's wrong with me then friend"

[sunne 659]

@@The Time Pony, @,
(Yeah, Ever's getting up.)
Evergreen had fallen asleep fairly quickly, but she didn't stay like that. She opened her eyes and looked around. She couldn't see Crimson, but she heard voices from outside the room. Getting up and trying not to make noise or step on any pony, she made her way to the foo, just in time to hear Crimson say that there was nothing between them. Her heart hurt and her ears flattened when she registered the words. 
Save your thoughts for later. He sounds like he wants whoever's bugging him to leave.
She stepped out and saw it was one of the stallions in the group, though she wasn't sure what she expected. She hadn't gotten his name, though.
"Leave Crimson alone," she said, stepping a little closer. "He obviously doesn't want to talk to you."

Edited January 1, 2014 by Mint Drop

[The Time Pony 31]

Crimson looked up and smiled at her. "Thank you Ever, that is exactly what I was going to say." He stood and looked at her, his wings fluttered slightly. "Conner just leave me alone please" he said. He took another small sip of the rum he had brought up. He looked back at Ever "you sleep well?"

[sunne 659]

@@The Time Pony, 
Ever saw the rum in his hooves and was instantly concerned. 
"I... slept okay. Couldn't stop tossing and turning, though..." she said, pawing the floor with a hoof.. She didn't want to bring up either of the two topics bothering her. She wasn't usually very shy or reserved, but she didn't want to bother him.

[The Time Pony 31]

"Are you okay?" He asked her. She seemed upset about something. Yet he didn't want to push her. He set down the bottle of rum, he shouldn't be running and keeping watch. "Here sit down" he said patting the carpet next to him. Crimson looked at her again wondering how such a mare could be involved in his life.

((A message to everyone is this rp.

 

Firstly most Rp are written in third person. Not first. Secondly you don't use stars to symbolize actions *picks up gun*. No no no, it's Crimson picked up the gun. Just please read Mint Drop, or dreamless to see how most rp are written . Sorry for being annoyed about something small, but it is starting to get to me.))

[sunne 659]

"Yeah, I'm okay... Uh, are you?" Ever asked as she sat down next to him. She was worried about him. The Crimson Star she knew wasn't a drinker. She didn't know how to approach him like that.

((Thank you, Time Pony. To add on to what he said: 

Don't just describe what your character is doing. Add some emotion, make them actually react to whatever happened.
Wintergreen beamed at Crimson. She'd always known he and her sister liked each other, and it made her ecstatic to hear Crimson admit it. "You have to tell her! Trust me, she'll be so happy," she said, continuing to grin at him.
Is better than:
Wintergreen smiled at Crimson. It made her happy to hear that he liked her sister. "You should tell her. She'll be happy," she said.
Because it shows the emotions and thoughts that the character is experiencing. You don't need to use super big or descriptive words, but do at least try to make your character show some emotion.
I apologize if I seem rude, but a few of the characters here seem emotionless because their RPers don't say anything about that, and it genuinely bothers me, as do the things Time Pony mentioned.))
 

[SharpWit 2,614]

SharpWit landed safely right outside of the liquor store. He swore at himself realizing that he would have to clear out the hardware store if he needed anything which he was positive he would. Inside the liquor store it was dark. "Damn it, no light. Guess I'll have to find Dams stuff in the dark". He waited till his eyes adjusted to the dark, then hovered above the ground silently making his way to the back where things would be in storage. "If I can just find a box or crate full I won't have to waist my time grabbing individual bottles. If I'm lucky they'll my brand of whiskey". Sharpwit eventually found what he was looking for, plus some whiskey, a flask, and champagne. He'd give that last one as a gift to Dam and Lost. "Funny how people find time for romance even now. But hey if we can find even more time to drink then it makes sense I guess". He made sure everything was secure before heading back towards the hotel. He wasn't going to do much after carrying such a heavy load and his bruised leg. "At least Crimson can get some rest when I take watch".

[The Time Pony 31]

He saw Ever glance at the bottle of Rum, he smiled "I haven't had very much, don't worry am not like that" he said "and yes am doing pretty well considering. Am just happy your okay" he rolled the bottle away. "Sorry" he said guiltily. He was never a huge drinker but he had some every now and then. "Conner, he, I don't know, he thinks were tighter or something" he said. Aain his wings fluttered. He would have to have a talk with Winter.

[sunne 659]

@@The Time Pony, 
"I know you're not," Evergreen whispered, looking off into the distance. She looked at him just in time to see him roll the bottle away from them, a guilty look on his face. 
"It's okay, I can't control what you do," she said.
Her already flattened ears drooped further when she heard the last thing he said.
"Well... It's, um, pretty obvious he's an idiot, right?" she said, chucking nervously. "Best to just ignore him."

[The Time Pony 31]

"I don't know, your a..." He stopped seeing her ears go lower "are you okay?" He asked her concerned. "Did I do something wrong?" He asked her "I-I give me a sec" he said disappearing into the room. He found Winter, "hey, um can we talk for a second?" He aske her blushing deeply.

[sunne 659]

@@The Time Pony, 
Winter, who was still awake, unable to sleep despite being exhausted, looked up at Crimson. She was too sleep-deprived to remember she was wary about him, and nodded, not noticing his blush.

Evergreen watched Crimson go back into the room and sighed.
Great. I've gone and hurt him. I need to keep my emotions in check, she thought. She looked around to see if anypony could see her.
Right now I guess I can let it out... Just as long as he doesn't see.... she conceded, letting a few tears trail down her cheeks and allowing her mane to fall over her face.

[The Time Pony 31]

"It's about Evergreen. Um, we've been friends and everything for a long time, and now" his voice dropped "I see her as, um, a little more then a friend, if I'm you know" he said blushing again. He glanced back at the door nervously making sure she wasn't there. "Sorry I just, um you know had to tell some pony"

[SharpWit 2,614]

SharpWit hovered in the air and waited outside the window after knocking three times. "What's taking him so long? What do they expect of me, to carry this all night? After five hours of hard work, hell no. C'mon! Hurry up and open this damn window!" He grew very impatient as his wings began to seize up. He really didn't feel like pulling a muscle and knocked three times again

[sunne 659]

@@SharpWit, 
Evergreen heard the rapping on the window and looked up, fearing it was one of the turned. It was the stallion who had left earlier. Quickly wiping her tears, she stood and trotted to the window, opening it for him.

@@The Time Pony,
Winter perked up a bit upon hearing Dusk's words, and, despite everything that had happened, and despite her exhaustion, Winter couldn't help but let out a fillyish giggle.
"I know," she said, weakly smiling. "In fact, I've known for years. You're one of my best friends, it's not hard to figure somepony out when you've known them for as long as I've known you. You should tell her."

[The Time Pony 31]

"But but, she doesn't like me, I don't want to lose her. Then it will be awkward, and... I don't want something to happen" he said. Crimson blushed again. "She doesn't like me, so I don't want to tell her and embarrass myself" crimson said. "You won't say anything right?" He asked

[sunne 659]

@@The Time Pony, 
Winter just shook her head.
"I probably shouldn't be telling you anything, but I will tell you that you won't lose her if you tell her," she said. "I know my twin better than anypony else, if I thought she'd be disappointed or anything I wouldn't have told you to tell her."

[The Time Pony 31]

"Okay, am going to tell her" he stood and trotted out. He saw her "ever I want to..." He trailed off seeing her tears. He pulled her into a hug "you said you were okay?" Crimson sat down with her again. "What happened?" He asked her, all thoughts of love for her forgotten.

[SharpWit 2,614]

"Thanks" He quickly said. Sharpwit quickly flew in and dropped off the stuff. "I can't believe I already have to give somebody a lesson on duty, and of all ponies crimson." He growled. He stretched his wings before looking over at Evergreen."Uh oh, did I miss something while I was gone ?" He said noticing her sad expression. She had obviously been crying. "Hey, is everything okay?

[sunne 659]

@@SharpWit, 
Ever nodded. "I'm fine," she deadpanned, trotting back to her spot. She didn't want to talk to somepony she didn't even know the name of about how she felt about Crimson. She'd never even fully admitted it to her sister.
@@The Time Pony, 
She was surprised when she heard Crimson's voice from behind her, and turned to look at him, not realizing that he would see her tears. Before she knew it, he was hugging her and sitting down with her.
She looked down at her hooves, letting her mane fall over her face again.
"I-I am fine," she replied, her voice quivering slightly. 
 

[The Time Pony 31]

Crimson carefully brushed her mane away "no your not, please tell me, I want to help you" crimson said. He sighed, he didn't want to force her. This hurt him, more then anything not being able to save her from the danger. This time she was the danger, and he couldn't do anything