open sims with ponies

[rainbowpie8904 2]

Lilly spring gets out of the shop into town.Now she was in a new town called Ponyville.She was blind for seven years but she didn't have a good life before.Then she got home.She sighed"This bed is really nice or is it a...AHH it's a pony who are you!

 

 

The pony said"I'm Raven Heart and watch where your going!"He looked at her eyes and saw that she was blind"Oh sorry."

[Mr. Critical 434]

Mr. Critical had exited the Ponyvile theatre. Writing down some final notes for his next review for his boss, Inkwell. He was making his way home so he could rest after sitting through that train wreck of a film. He was going to go directly home when he saw a new face. A mare. Critic didn't talk to other ponies, let alone mares. He was terrible at mingling with the opposite sex. But, something about her seemed to have an attraction to her. Critic didn't know why, But critic didn't see in any harm in talking to her.

[rainbowpie8904 2]

Raven Heart was sorry for the mare."What's your name?'' ''Lilly Spring." ''hi'' ''hi''.Raven was nervous because the mare was blind and he might have made a mistake by saying something like"Did you see that!Oh yeah sorry.''So there was not a word for a bit then he said"We are going to have a room together so just so you know''

[Mr. Critical 434]

Critic made his way closer to the new mare. As he got closer, Critic got a better look at the new mare. She was shorter than he, again everypony was shorter than him. Her coat was a lite grey, and her mane was an orang-ish color. Her eyes were a lite blue, much like Critic's own. He finally got close enough to make vocal contact. She had a shy demeanor to her. With some force, Critic manage to exert a friendly greeting. She saw me approach her.

"Hello."

She spoke first.

"H-hello. I-I've never seen you here before, a-are you new."

She looked like Fluttershy, at least in facial expression. she looked afraid to Critic, and he thought she thought the same of herself.

[Rokkurin 214]

Guardian got dropped of by his battle buddies. It was a long day at the base and he was tired. He did a ton of training and paper work. He tried his best to show that he was ready for a promotion but got denied. Even with the rejection he still went out of his way to do what is right and to prove he is the best. After getting home he made himself something to eat and read a good book.

[Mr. Critical 434]

Critic noticed that the new mare was a Pegasus.

"S-so, whats you're name."

she looked to me with a shy demeanor. She seemed terrified of Critic.

"Look, im sorry if I scared you. I'll just g-"

"Rain Cloud."

That took Critic by surprise.
"Uh, N-Nice to meet you. Are you new here?"

She gave a nod. 

[rainbowpie8904 2]

After a while of no sound,Lilly said''Um... here's your bed'' she said,''Um...That's the floor.Good try though.''Lilly slowly walked away from him.Raven walked to his bed''Are you new here?''She gave a small''yes''and that was it.After a few days they were friends even though she still every so often would bump in to him.''Sorry'' ''It's okay Lilly''.

Edited December 29, 2013 by rainbowpie8904

[Mr. Critical 434]

Critic looked to this new pony. She seemed nice, but Critic knew better than to judge with the physical appearance.

"So, do you have somewhere to stay?

She shook her head slowly in a slow manner. Replying with an unspoken 'no'.

"Well, what brings you to town then. Visiting family?

She shook her head again. But she looked, some how, sadder.

"I-I don't have any family. That I know of, at least."

This was saddening. No family. Hell, even Critic had family. Sure they were abusive, along with the whole town. But he still had family. With this new knowledge, Critic did what he considered impossible for him.

"Would you like to stay with me, I have plenty of room."

Critic brought a hoof to his mouth, stunned at what he had just said. Rain Cloud looked confused at his sudden out burst.

"I-i'm sorry, I don't know what came over me. I'll just, uh... I'll just leave you be."
Critic began walking before he heard a timid, yet lively...

"Yes."

[MustLoveCats 10]

Indigo Sky was new to Ponyville, he had just moved there. He hoped to meet some new friends in the new town. After furnishing the home he just bought, he got bored so he decided to go outside and meet some new ponies...

 

(OOC: This is to clarify Indigo Sky is a pegasus, and raise the character count so I will be allowed to post this.)

[Mr. Critical 434]

Critic turned to the Pegasus. She said yes.

"Yes? You mean you want to stay with me."

She nodded her head, she was willing to stay with him. This was new. An accidental outburst that meant nothing, now has Critical play host to this new face.

"O-Okay then. My name's Mr. Critical

He said with a sincere smile. They both began to walk to who knows where. She then spoke up.

"So, what kind of a name is Mr. Critical."

Wow, kinda personal that question. But she didn't know so might as well tell her.

"It's uh... Its an adopted name."

She looked to Critic confused.

"Well, what's your real name?"

"Don't remember."

This answer confused her. hell it would confuse anypony who gave that response.

"How can you not remember? I mean, its your name."
"I've been called Mr. Critical since I was six. After a while, it just replaced it."

They just continued to walk, Critic carried what little she had, just a small hand bag and a suit case. But with the walk, something dawned on him. The his home itself.

[**Appleshy** 19]

Appleshy flew out of the Art Hall, sighing in relief. She hated the drama that went on in there. Quickly, she used her memory and flew straight to her home, where she could smell that she had left the oven burning. She quickly dashed in and turned off her oven. She looked outside, but all she could see was fog. That's really all she ever saw. She smiled to herself. Being blind wasn't that bad.

 

 

EDIT: (Could I please not Frankenstein a Boy Friend for Appleshy? I mean, are there any stallions open?)

Edited December 31, 2013 by **Appleshy**

[Mr. Critical 434]

(Hey, Im going to retcon my character for Appleshy. So don't get confused if things get familiar.)

 

@@**Appleshy**,

Atrocious. That was a word Mr. Critical would describe that movie. A mess of impossible proportions. Well, it was over now. With a few brain cells now dedicated to that memory. Now, Critic was going to go home and retrieve those brain cell with a spoon. The walk home from the ponyville theatre was an all to familiar one. He saw the same houses, saw the same ponies, and the same animals. For once, he thought, He would like to see some variety from this town. Or maybe at the very least meet somepony.

[**Appleshy** 19]

Appleshy could smell the burnt fragrance of her pasta as she started cleaning up. She plopped onto the floor, suddenly remembering her friends would be waiting for her at the theatre. "Crap, crap, crap!" She repeated to herself as she flew along. She liked movies. Although she couldn't see the, she loved to hear them and use her imagination.

[Mr. Critical 434]

@@**Appleshy**,

Critical was walking through the streets of ponyville. He would almost be home until something ran into him. He was on the full with a bit of a headache. He thought that Ditzy had ran into him during her route again. But what he saw was somepony else. On the ground a crossed from him was a mare unfamiliar to him. He stood up and went over to the mare to assist her to her hooves.

"Are you okay?"

[**Appleshy** 19]

Appleshy yelped as she crashed into the pony. "I-I'm sorry! I didn't see you there!" She looked down and grumbled to herself, "Then again, I can't really see anything, for that matter." Not seeing Critic's hoof, she stood up and introduced herself. "I'm Appleshy, or Apple."

[Mr. Critical 434]

@@**Appleshy**,

Appleshy? Could she be related to-... nah.

"Pleasure to meet you Appleshy. Name's Mr. Critical. But everypony calls me Critic."

Critic got a good look at her eyes and noticed she was blind. That statement of not seeing anything at all makes sense now.

"And again, apologies for running into you."

[**Appleshy** 19]

OOC: Related to whom?

 

IC: Before she could protest, her friends came dashing up to her. "Appleshy! Crystal just left for your place! She was going to pick you up!" Everlasting. Appleshy knew this scent from anywhere. She whipped around to face them as Crystal came dashing up. "I DON'T NEED TO BE BABIED!" She screamed before nodding to Critic and storming back to her home.

[Mr. Critical 434]

OOC: The apple family

 

'That was... strange. Huh, oh well.' After his run in with the mare, Critic couldn't help but play through the events over and over. 'Appleshy was really pretty. That outburst came out of left field though. But, still...' Critic continued his walk back to his home. Regretting the fact he didn't get the chance to get to know her better. Critic smiled and spoke...

"Ah how life plays such cruel tricks on me. Revieling a beautiful mare to cross my path, only to have her taken away. BUt, maybe our paths will cross again in the future."

With that, Critic made it back to his home. His tardis. Or Time And Relative Dimension In Space. 'Home sweet home.' Critic made his way to the door of the house.