Thoughts on my OC? [Number Cruncher]

[DukeofCanterlot 158]

Here he is, Number Cruncher.

Number Cruncher lives in Manehattan and works as an auditor for a public accounting firm recognized by all of Equestria. Number Cruncher is good with numbers and has a photographic memory. He dreams of becoming rich. Number Cruncher dreams of becoming a CEO for a high-level corporation and probably spends too much time working to achieve his goals. Number Cruncher is good-natured and witty. However, he can be a tad intense and obsessive - likes checklists Twilight-style. He is very self-conscious of that aspect of his personality and he resents that he can't "chill out" like other ponies can.

Number Cruncher likes to play basketball but he isn't the most physically coordinated pony. The life of the mind is his forte. He is a puzzle fanatic and a gamer. He also enjoys a good party and likes to drink. Number Cruncher is also somewhat of a chameleon. He likes to adapt himself to whoever he is trying to impress. He will do what it takes to make it to the top. However, Number Cruncher lacks the mean-spiritedness to do anything that will directly harm others. He is more expecting that his competence and pony skills will move him up alone.  

 

See below for what he is like.

 

Number Cruncher has a lot less pizazz to him than Sapphire but Number Cruncher is essentially me Ponified (except my hair isn't that color IRL, I just thought it would look cool on my OC).

Any opinions, suggestions, or thoughts on Number Cruncher?

I don't really have a back story for him except I guess he's a CPA pony.

Edited January 13, 2014 by DukeofCanterlot