Kodiak 433 March 4, 2012 Share March 4, 2012 (edited) Hey everypony! Not sure if Octavia's Hall was the better place for this or not, but anyway: A few of you know that I'm writing an editorial article for my school's paper about My Little Pony Friendship is Magic. I've submitted a rough draft to my editors, but I'd like to hear the opinions of actual bronies about it. The article mostly covers the various brony charities as well as a small section explaining why men watch the show in the first place. Any reviews, comments, and suggestions are greatly appreciated. As stated, this is technically a rough draft. So things may end up being longer or shorter by the time we publish (March 27 I think). As soon as I get the final draft done, I'll post it up to the forums. Word count: 645 Friendship is Magic (Editorial 2-28-2012)2.docx Edited March 4, 2012 by Kodiak 2 Storytellers of Equestria (Audiobook Group): http://ponysquare.com/Audiobooks My audiobook series: http://tinyurl.com/cp7mt2g ~ Semper Fidelis. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TomokoKuroki 1,707 March 4, 2012 Share March 4, 2012 (edited) I quite like it. I like how you did some homework on the charity information, however I would of personally added what impact the fans have on each other, and the community as a whole. Such as helping others with depression and bringing them out of suicidal thoughts without knowing each other in the community as an example. Or the amazing content such as music and art the community also produces. That is just me though! I hope you will post the finished product when it is done . Edited March 4, 2012 by Hayze Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kodiak 433 March 4, 2012 Author Share March 4, 2012 I quite like it. I like how you did some homework on the charity information, however I would of personally added what impact the fans have on each other, and the community as a whole. Such as helping others with depression and bringing them out of suicidal thoughts without knowing each other in the community as an example. Or the amazing content such as music and art the community also produces. That is just me though! I hope you will post the finished product when it is done . Ah, I haven't thought about that. I'll see where I can add a section about the whole "family" vibe to the brony community. Thanks for the comment Storytellers of Equestria (Audiobook Group): http://ponysquare.com/Audiobooks My audiobook series: http://tinyurl.com/cp7mt2g ~ Semper Fidelis. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jokuc 8,174 March 4, 2012 Share March 4, 2012 Very well written Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twi Rubix 726 March 4, 2012 Share March 4, 2012 Great Article! It really does describe what the show can do to help others, but what Hayze said is a pretty important thing to add too! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robojot 152 March 5, 2012 Share March 5, 2012 Very good ^^ i also remember a friend of mine interviewed me about ponies and why i joined this amazing community for a school projec where we did botg the writing and design Maby i should post it but it is in norwegian... Maby i could google translate it or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
83awsm 234 March 5, 2012 Share March 5, 2012 Nice writing! I like how you took a very educated stance on the subject Awesomeness = at least 20% Cooler. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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