-FlutterSnipe- 215 February 1, 2014 Share February 1, 2014 I have drawn 5 so far today I will post applejack as a comment soon since I am southern I want to put a lot of attention to detail into her lol!. I just want to know what everyone thinks if they would take a look at them please and let me know seriously. I think the proportions are slightly off on fluttershy which is too bad since she is just sooooo cute ! 11 De Oppresso Liber. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ghostfacekiller39 23,862 February 1, 2014 Share February 1, 2014 Naturally, I like the Rarity one the best Gotta say, though, this is much better than the doodles I make Oh, and Southern Brohoof! /) 1 He who is Positively Obsessed With All Things Rarity!!! Check out the Rarity Fan Club! "Not everyone who is pretty is necessarily beautiful. For those two to come together is truly a Rarity" -Jacob G. Rosenberg Signature by @FadedSkies Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-FlutterSnipe- 215 February 1, 2014 Author Share February 1, 2014 Naturally, I like the Rarity one the best Gotta say, though, this is much better than the doodles I make Oh, and Southern Brohoof! /) Naturally darling! lol and southern brohoof back! I gotta say I am loving the community everone is so friendly! 1 De Oppresso Liber. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horsy 193 February 1, 2014 Share February 1, 2014 (edited) All of these are awesome! Maybe their bodies are slightly long but it might be me. Edited February 1, 2014 by TheWiseHippo 1 KEEP CALM AND EAT CUPCAKES. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-FlutterSnipe- 215 February 2, 2014 Author Share February 2, 2014 All of these are awesome! Maybe their bodies are slightly long but it might be me. it might be off a little bit lol! all feedback is appreciated! I will continue to adjust my style as per other peoples input so that everypony will like them more! All of these are awesome! Maybe their bodies are slightly long but it might be me. applejack. body shortened slightly. is this better in terms of proportion? 2 De Oppresso Liber. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sky Cutter 294 February 2, 2014 Share February 2, 2014 that's incerdibul! i love them 1 Avatar by Jokuc ~ Signature by me ~ (Try it) War Thunder ID: ColonelWaffle studying to be a pilot! ~ I like planes (B-17 FTW) ~ What's-its-face window "Never accept the sky as the limit, we got to the moon and beyond." - some guy with an unhealthy obsession of planes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horsy 193 February 2, 2014 Share February 2, 2014 it might be off a little bit lol! all feedback is appreciated! I will continue to adjust my style as per other peoples input so that everypony will like them more! applejack. body shortened slightly. is this better in terms of proportion? I think she should have longer legs and her body should be just aaaabittt more shortened. Take a look at the forum banner for example. However I am really bad at judging stuff so sorry if I was wrong KEEP CALM AND EAT CUPCAKES. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-FlutterSnipe- 215 February 2, 2014 Author Share February 2, 2014 I think she should have longer legs and her body should be just aaaabittt more shortened. Take a look at the forum banner for example. However I am really bad at judging stuff so sorry if I was wrong I'll work on it lol! cross my heart and hope to fly! stick a cupcake in my eye! 1 De Oppresso Liber. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sarge Sixteenbit 287 February 2, 2014 Share February 2, 2014 Not bad, but Twilight and Pinkie's necks seen a little elongated and the pointyness of Rarity's elbo clashes with the rest of the art style. Other than that, you did pretty well. DevianArt Youtube Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-FlutterSnipe- 215 February 2, 2014 Author Share February 2, 2014 last one of the day/learning experience figured I would post it on this thread as well. De Oppresso Liber. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Onylex 2,837 February 2, 2014 Share February 2, 2014 (edited) Looks pretty good man. The only advice I have to say is try to avoid chicken scratch line work and study proportions a bit more. Edited February 2, 2014 by Onylex Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Messershmitt 289 February 2, 2014 Share February 2, 2014 YOU NEED TO DRAW SOME SPOONS MAN, THEY ARE ALL THE RAGE RIGHT NOW. 1 http://dascottishbrony.deviantart.com/ My DeviantArt Page. Why Only Tuesdays, I'm Not even in this fandom, i've just been sent here to spy on all of you. You guys are defenseless without your tin-foil hats! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-FlutterSnipe- 215 February 2, 2014 Author Share February 2, 2014 YOU NEED TO DRAW SOME SPOONS MAN, THEY ARE ALL THE RAGE RIGHT NOW. lol? ok I will start work immediately on the spoons. De Oppresso Liber. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jokuc 8,174 February 2, 2014 Share February 2, 2014 They are pretty good =) The manes became quite good and I like how you shaded them. Three things; 1. Try make the heads a tiny bit bigger. 2. Make the bodies a bit shorter 3. Make the legs thicker and be sure that they have the bent shape. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-FlutterSnipe- 215 February 2, 2014 Author Share February 2, 2014 They are pretty good =) The manes became quite good and I like how you shaded them. Three things; 1. Try make the heads a tiny bit bigger. 2. Make the bodies a bit shorter 3. Make the legs thicker and be sure that they have the bent shape. I will definitely take that into consideration! thank you! having other people look at the pictures is very helpful. I think in terms of proportion throughout the day the have made progress in the right direction I will continue to move forward. Haven't held a pencil in a minute. They are pretty good =) The manes became quite good and I like how you shaded them. Three things; 1. Try make the heads a tiny bit bigger. 2. Make the bodies a bit shorter 3. Make the legs thicker and be sure that they have the bent shape. Advice taken I believe this should be a cleaner picture let me know if this is better. 1 De Oppresso Liber. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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