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"Oh, it's easy to be assertive. I'll teach you when we get back home." Choco stated. She then gathered some magic and teleported right to Diamond Tiara's house. Filthy Rich was sitting on the porch. "Well, well, if it isn't Choco Delight. How's it going?" He asked. "Just fine but...this little filly on my back was bullied by Diamond Tiara again." Choco stated. "Ugh...how many times have I told her. Looks like she's permanently lost her privilege to go to the park." Filthy stated. "Well...that's great news." Choco said.  

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Scarlet looks at Choco, "M..mummy? you know mr Rich?" she asks timidly, she then looks to Filthy Rich, "H...hello sir" she greets him, even more timidly. "D..Diamond c..called me a pathetic, parentless, blankflank f....f..f....freak" She says to him, still quite scared from what happened.


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"Why hello Scarlet. Wow...you're one beautiful little filly. It's too bad that my daughter treated you this way. As I said before, she's not allowed to go to the park ever again, and if I catch her bullying, she'll be grounded for a month." Filthy stated. "Filthy Rich is a nice stallion." Choco said to Scarlet.  

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 "H..hello." She says, hiding behind her mane, "T..thank you, b..but she is right though...I am a pahetic blank freak..I used to be parentless but C..mummy took me in"

 

Soon later, Diamond Tiara comes running up, "FATHER!" She then sees Choco and Scarlet, "What are they doing here!?"


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 "H..hello." She says, hiding behind her mane, "T..thank you, b..but she is right though...I am a pahetic blank freak..I used to be parentless but C..mummy took me in"

 

Soon later, Diamond Tiara comes running up, "FATHER!" She then sees Choco and Scarlet, "What are they doing here!?"

Choco saw Diamond Tiara come. Filthy looked her angrily. "Get to your room right now. No more park for you...ever." filthy said to Diamond. He then turned back to Scarlet. "And no pony is a pathetic blank freak. Diamonds just a selfish spoiled little brat who thinks she can rule over ponies. Being a blank flank means you have a bright future ahead of you. Look forward to discovering who you really are in Equestria. Oh sure it may be disappointing to not have a cutie mark for the first few years of your life. But when that day comes, it'll be the best day of your life." Filthy explained. "Did you hear that Scarlet? Being a blank means you've got a lot of potential. Your are a social filly!" Choco said with a happy giggle.

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Diamond screams "BUT SHE THREW ME TO THE FLOOR!" she points to Choco, "She's a..a..a...FREAK!"
Scarlet couldn't handle it, "DON'T TALK ABOUT MY MUMMY LIKE THAT! She shouts, extremely angrily at Diamond, "YOU PUSHED ME FIRST! YOU CAN'T BULLY ME ANYMORE!"

Diamond looks to Filthy Rich, "YOU'RE NOT GONNA.."


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"SHUT UP! I don't wanna hear one more bucking word from your mouth! Now get to your room before I have to do something to you!" Filthy barked at Diamond Tiara. Meanwhile Choco was comforting Scarlet. Filthy turned around. "I am terribly sorry about that." Filthy stated.

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Diamond was about to say something but then ran up to her room crying.

Scarlet was crying, "mummy, she called you a freak! I'm sorry I got angry, I..I didn't mean to. Please forgive me!" She cries into Choco's embrace, "mummy, I want to go home. Please, I'm scared and angry"


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"Awww, it's okay sweetie. We all get angry. The only thing that matters is what you do when you're angry. Filthy'll do whatever it takes for her daughter to learn. However, it doesn't give him the right to abuse her." Choco said. "That's right. physicality is not the way to teach a foal. Taking stuff away is a motivational tool that'll prevent them from doing stuff in the future. Unfortunately for Diamond Tiara, she thinks she's a princess. She totally does not have the attitude of one." Filthy stated.  

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Scarlet nods, "O-okay mummy." She then turns to Filthy Rich, "T..thank you Mr Rich" She says still a bit timidly ,and hugging Choco. She turns back to Choco, "Mummy, c...can we go get a fillymeal with a toy and a fizzy drink too, please?" she asks Choco politely.

 

Diamond was throwing a tantrum in her room.


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Filthy could hear Diamond throwing a fit in her room. "Ugh, she always does this when I punish her...she's just so spoiled. I don't spoil her one bit but her friends do because she gets to by supposedly showing off, and you're very welcome." Filthy said kindly to Scarlet. "Sure we can!" Choco said with a giggle. "I'll see you later Filthy Rich." Choco stated. "Bye Choco. Come back and visit anytime." Filthy stated as he waved and then went back inside to take care of Diamond Tiara.  

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Scarlet nods and hugs Choco, "s..see you mr Rich" she says, hopping back onto Choco's back. She then curls up again, and snoozes, pretending to purr again. Choco had done so much for her, and she knew Choco liked cute things, so she wanted to be cute for her by pretending to be a kitten again.


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Choco turned around and saw Scarlet snuggled on her back. "Awww!" She said with a giggle as she continued to head to the Hayburger Shack. There, they served hayburgers with fries and a drink. They even had foal's meals that came with a special toy exclusive to that meal.  

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Scarlet kept on purring, then wakes up, "I love you mummy, thank you so much" she leans over and licks her on the nose with a cute giggle, "for taking me in, being my mummy and taking good care of me. I love you so much" She says, hugging her tightly, then gets really excited when she sees Hayburger Shack.


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Choco giggled. "I love you too, for being a great daughter and being able to overcome your advisities." Choco said with another giggle as they reached the hayburger shack. Choco went inside and went to the ordering desk. "Hi, what would you like today?" The waiter asked. "I'll take a double hayburger with some fries please." Choco siad. "What would you like Scarlet?" Choco asked.  

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Scarlet hugs onto Choco, "I wouldn't have overcome them if you hadn't helped me to" she looks up at the ordering desk, "I...I'd like a princess fillymeal please." She asks very politely. She licks Choco on the cheek, "May I please have a desert too please mummy?" she asks.


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"Sure!" Choco said with a giggle. "Alright, it'll be ready in five minutes." The waiter stated. "The waiter will bring it to us, so let's find a seat." Choco stated as she licked Scarlet back lovingly. Choco found a booth near the window, where she could see all of the ponies walking outside.  

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Scarlet smiled and sat down with Choco, She starts to fiddle with her mane. 

Meanwhile Diamond Tiara was still chucking a massive tantrum in her room, "WHY! I SHOULD BE ABLE TO PUSH SCARLET AROUND! THAT FREAK! I HATE HER SO MUCH!" She starts to kick and scream.


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"NO YOU WOULD NOT! SHE"S NOT A FREAK!" Filthy screamed. "NO PARK! NO SILVER SPOON! YOU"RE GROUNDED FOR THE NEXT TWO MONTHS!" Filthy added added as he looked at his screaming daughter.

 

Choco looked out the window and then back to Scarlet. "So...what would you like to do after this?" Choco asked. 

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"I HATE YOU!" Diamond Tiara screams, "WHY ARE YOU SO MEAN TO ME!"

 

Scarlet smiles at Choco, "Could you please take me to where you work? I'd like to meet the Cakes and I hear Pinkie Pie is a very nice and friendly mare..." She nuzzles Choco, "just like you mummy" she asks


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(OOC: Knew that was coming.)

 

"Why are you so mean to them? Hate me all you want but I'm not taking anything back. This should teach you about how bullying can destroy somepony." Filthy stated. 

 

Choco giggled at this. "Definitely!" Choco said with another happy giggle.   

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"Because they're different and not rich! I'm better than them, and I always will be!" She demands, she kicks and screams

 

Scarlet giggles and hugs Choco, "yay! ooh I wonder what toy I will get, I..I haven't got any toys before"


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"No you're not. You're just like them. A foal. You are not better than them. You're worse than them. You're prideful, you're selfish and most of all...you don't even know what friendship means. You devote your time to just belittling others. Therefore, you are not allowed to see Silver Spoon ever again nor go to the park...ever again." Filthy stated.

 

"They've got some good ones here." Choco stated. The waiter then came out with their meals. "There you go. Enjoy." He said.  

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"B...but...MUMMY!" She screams and cries

 

Scarlet licks her lips as the order clerk walks over with their meals and places them in front of them. "thank you miss" she says sweetly, and starts to salivate. She blushes and wipes the drool away, then sniffs her meal


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"Sorry, your mom knows about it too. She can't help. It's already set. You can't take it back. Try to sneak out and your grounded...forever." Filthy stated.

 

"Such a polite little filly..." Choco said to herself as she started to eat her double burger. 

 

(OOC: I one time ate a triple burger.)

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