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Hey guys!

 

I'd like some thoughts critiques and opinions both positive and negative on my newest piece, Demure.

 

 

 

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Thanks!

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well its fluttershy so it gets bonus marks already ,and the simple background fits well...i like it.


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Was intrigued by the Johari window so... http://kevan.org/jh/alicorn+fluttershy


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Well, first of all, huge kudos on the mane and tail.

*cracks knuckles*

-Her leg placements makes her look unbalanced

-the shading on the wings makes the feathers look like they got more value than they should

-the shading on the front of the necks so

-seems a bit dark

 

Also, what colour do you use for the shading?


 

 

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Well, first of all, huge kudos on the mane and tail.

*cracks knuckles*

-Her leg placements makes her look unbalanced

-the shading on the wings makes the feathers look like they got more value than they should

-the shading on the front of the necks so

-seems a bit dark

 

Also, what colour do you use for the shading?

I used different shades of orange here.
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its a unique art style it doesn't have to look like the show.


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Thanks to Rorrim'eht Retne for my awsome sig!


Was intrigued by the Johari window so... http://kevan.org/jh/alicorn+fluttershy


Be completely humble and gentle; be patient, bearing with one another in love. (Ephesians 4:2)


No using the name of God, your God, in curses or silly banter, God won't put up with irreverent use of his name (Exodus 20:7)


Let no corrupting talk come out of your mouths, but only such as is good for building up, as fits the occasion, that it may give grace to those who hear. (Ephesians 4:29)

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