visual art First Doodle on my new tablet

[OpticZoom 21]

So i got my first personal tablet, it is a small over priced Wacom Intuos but im happy with it. 

If you think it is horribly wrong, amazingly good, or just average let me know with some feedback! 

 

 

[Frith is Magick 1,471]

The face is horrible, what were you even thinking?

 

It looks good for what it is. What is the angle? the torso looks like the "camera" is facing it straight on, but the legs look as if the "camera" is looking at the person from slightly above. There's not much to talk about with a simple outline other than maybe proportions, but if you're happy with how the tablet works, that's really what counts.

[SkyBound 829]

You cannot go wrong with a Wacom, so good choice there.  So long as you are happy with it though, that is what counts.

 

As far as the drawing, it is not bad for a first attempt with a tablet.  Aside from proporations and a few things that need touched up anatomy-wise (as well as what Frith mentioned), it is a good start and will only get better with practice.  The most obvious adjustment I see are in the hips, as the widest part of the hips should be lined up with about the crotch.

 

Regardless, have fun with your new tablet and hopefully we will see what wonders you can do with it.  Take care!

[OpticZoom 21]

Thanks for the tips! In response to Frith thanks for pointed out the perspective thing, and you were right in the fact that i drew the legs with an added perspective and the body with out one. I took a 10 minutes off and when i came back i drew in perspective, so that explains the funny looking legs. Once again thanks and i will take those into note. 

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It's way better than what I could do when I first got a tablet.

 

As for the drawing, the hips seem kind of slanted to the left, and the right arm doesn't have proper foreshortening. It should be turned towards the camera more.

Edited June 1, 2014 by SpaceOnion