I really liked the middle and concluding parts.  Great job! 

Makusu is one of my best friends and I love him more than Ghostie.

Makusu is one of my best friends and I love him more than Ghostie.

I'd be inclined to agree

Clearly i need to take my pills because all i see is on word.

Or..Perhaps Rarity already confiscated the contents of this blog due to it including top-secret plans pertaining to her secret ability to indoctrinate a mass of male fans willing to fight to the death at her whim.

Or Perhaps ive lost it.

*raises hand*

Who's Makusu?

Oh my... As my career of writing books, this is the most detailed and most touching story I have ever read in my entire life! Please send this to a publisher right away. My favourite part was when the story started with "Makusu"! I rate this book 8.8/8.8!!

Interesting blog but sorry I disagree.

*raises hand*

Who's Makusu?

HA

I smurf this.