Revolver Bobcat

BU-BUT I HAD THIS AWESOME CARACTER ARC WHERE SHE TURNS EVIL IN A REALLY AWESOME WAY AND-AND-AND... D': okay...

Okay, i think i got it, it's this one right? http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/harpstar-r1781 I will try to get from where the other guy left, and from there i will try to get my own thing going on. DOOD! WHAT THE HELL! I HAD, LIKE, SOME PRETTY AWESOME SIDE QUEST FOR THE CARACTER! :,( You guys CAN start without me, really, i want to play with the caracter a little bit diferent that you, i want her to join us on its own will but at the same time breacking her spirit. Stay away from mah girl discord!

Sombra walk on the dinning room and took a quick glance at the 3 new guest, he didn't looked very surpriced by the choice they made. Very fitting He though to himself Another bunch of boffoons. "You can all start without me, i have other busines to take care of" Sombra turn into a black mist "If someone needs me i'll be at the library" and leave the room.

There's no answer. Harp was talking to the air, sombra seems to lost interest in the young filly, the lack of confidence was not helping either. She was obviuosly lying or just didn't believe the words she said. The door to the outside was still open and it seems like there's no sign of danger, nor inside or outside of the door.

"Uh? who are you again?" By confused look on the brown ones face is painfully obvious that he only listen to half of what she said. "You azura, right? Whatever, im here to colect some very special mushrooms from the deep forest, if you see some weird red mushroom with blue spots, DON'T TOUCH THEM!, call me and i'll take care of them, if you aren't careful they might explode" The brown one let out a small chuckle "I learn it the hard way". "Oh, one more advise kid, don't eat anything from the forest, most of that stuff is poisonous" The odd pony continued in his own search without taking much interest in the rest of the group.

The shadows that were swallowing the room suddenly stop. Sombra looks down on the small foal. "Pathetic" Sombra said disapointed. "Yet another coward that crosses my path, i have no use for you" The shadows that were all over the room start disapearing and a door manifest itself in the middle of the room. The door opens revealing the outside world, more specificaly, what it seems to be the the backyard of her house. "I could have offer you the world, if only you weren't such a pathetic excuse for a pony" Sombra appears in front of the door. "Leave" and right after saying that, sombra turns into a black mist and exit the room through the walls. (OOC: Now you can either stay and see what happens or go "Home", it will have the same efect but the stories are somewhat diferent and in my opinion going "Home" is the more in caracter choise, but it's up to you.PS: Try to quote me so i know when you post your answer.)

Sombra's smile change into a stern look, growing impatient. "I asked you a question, state your name feeble one" Sombra's aura now is more threatening than before, the pressure is almost unbearable as the darkness takes over the room. Sombra's patience is nearly at its end.

A brown pony with an unconcerned look aproches the party. "So... wich one of you is azura?" He immediately dismisses the thought the moment he finish the sentence "You know what, doesn't matter" the odd pony pulls out one of asura's poster, "So, i got a LITTLE late to the reunion but the janitor at town hall told me everything about it. You guys want to solve some mystery, i want some ingredients from the forest, you guys keep me company, i share some of my services and experiece. I say this is a win-win situation, don't you think?" Before any of the ponies could answer the odd brown one added "Yep, win-win indeed, no questions? good" The weird one head on to the forest without even giving his name...

Say, can you give me your caracter sheet? i would like to know what im working with, it would help me a lot, thanks :-D

Really? GREAT! But, if you could, would you give me some kind of introduction to the RP, just some situation to get started and from there i take control, please?

Hi, i was wondering if i could join. Im kinda new at RP, so if anyone can lend me a hand on this i would apretiate a lot, here's my very first OC: http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/cunning-hooves-r2827 Im not good at names... But anyway, hope you guys can help me if i make some painfuly obvious mistake. Also, looks like i have to make some kind of audition? Is that correct? Anyway here it goes: ------------------------------------------------------------------------ A loud explosion could be heard in cunning's basement. "Success!" The brown pony had a thin trail of smoke rising from his mane... and tail... and mouth. The new firework mix is a success, with this i will finally aforth some REAL food, no more hay for me!. A single tear of joy run through cunnings cheek. He took out the protection gloves and googles and proudly exit the large basement. HA!, you know what? this calls for some celebration, on to sugarcube corner and eat whatever is in display! Cunning opened the door and head on to sugarcube corner, "I hope it's open at this hour..." .But he suddenly stops when he hears an odd noise. "Uh? What was that?" As he slowly aproches the source of the noise he notices that is in fact a voice calling for help. Crap! uh... what do i do? Driven by instinct, Cunning ran in search of the helpless pony. A grim scene greets him, a pony heavily wounded from top to bottom, marks of claws and large teeth can be seen followed by long trail of blood leads straight into the everfree forest, whoever, or whatever, did this it was aiming to kill. "DEAR CELESTIA, WHAT HAPPEND TO YOU?" Said cunning still in shock due the violence of the scene. The pony let out a very pittiful cry "Help... me..." Cunning shake his head trying to get a hold of himself "Okay, i'll get you a doctor, just stay with me, okay?" Cunning carry very gently the heavily wounded pony and went as fast as he could to the nearest hospital. Don't worry pal, you're going to make it, i just hope they don't blame me for this one... ----------------------------------------------------------- So... i just used the scenario you put at the beggining, it does't have to start like that.

Oh, okay then, i might as well put what i want to make of sombrero since im here. To put it simple: he's the devil. Not the weird, happy devil like discord, he just had enough. He was humiliated one too many times and now he's dead set on "Ending" the planet, and not in a pussy/emo way, the ultimate revenge for him is destroying everything and everyone, conquering is not an option. Of course, he won't tell a word to anyone about this, maybe not even until the end. No smiles here guys, no evil laughs, no sad tears, just hatred and flames. If you are in his path, he's going to end you with hardly a word. PS: Uhh... i noticed that the RP doesn't seem very "Stable", is this RP really going somewere or should i expect more delays + bickering?

So...uhh... guys, i noticed that you don't have a sombra... so...can i... be... him? :-D This would be my very first RP so, its okay if you say no So...yeah...hope you guys have fun, i have some idea on how make sombrero cool...

Sooo, i was roming around in the forum and i came across this thread, i think i have the solution to your problem if the DM agrees. So there's 12 zodiac signs, uh? wrong, there's a 13th, ophiuchus http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ophiuchus_%28astrology%29 wich is kinda of a secret to everyone. So there, you can go with that (unless it already exist and is the villian or something) , you could be the 6th ranger of the group, as for your element, i don't know, honor or sacrifice? Sorry to butt in like this without invitation, it won't happen again, bye.

Have you tried with other shades of blue? like a little darker or lighter blue for the stripes? And as for the colors, these are fine in my opinion, the issue i had with the old desing was in how odd the colors looked, if they were more like in the show (You know, pastel green and violet) it COULD have worked... maybe... You should hear more opinions besides mine.

Huh... that a lot better for the eyes actually, too bad the stripes were sacrificed in the process. I would still go with Calm Wave but here are some others: Relaxing breeze/wind Soothing breeze/wind Something along those lines.

I just said that it is possible for a Non-Alicorn to murder celestia. It seems to be some kind of final battle in the picture, and it probably was just a stand off, but just for the sake of being a jerk i will say that she put some poison that weaked celestia... IN A SOLAR ECLIPSE... PLOTED BY LUNA! 'kay bye...

MY EYES!11!!!!1"1213!!!'???!!!!1 But seriously, the color match is not...good. In my opinion. If you should go with that color scheme i would suggest you to go with the pastel equivalents of green and violet(or is it purple? i always confuse those...), those right know are kinda...off. As for the name... how about calm wave? that kinda sounds like what you want.

Is not as dificult as you think: poison, a sneak attack, some pretty good elaborate trap or a conspiracy. Not all conflicts have to end with a mexican stand off, just saying...

So far so good, the demon parents works well and the main caracter seems accostumed to this kind of behavior. No complains from me, the tense thingies i just don't notice since i kinda suck at writing and the english lenguage in general. If anything you should stablish why the parents are so fucking cruel and why would they want their daughter to become some great wizard. Is not a complan, just something you should stablish later on. GOOD LUCK!

You know, for zecora i would probably go with "some wanabe rapper" personallity. But i think that idea cross everyones minds, so it's no good, instead, why not just make her sane?like "the only sane mare in this crazy crazy world"? Im just saying... not all the caracters have to be wacky.

"An adjective taken from the root words of grim and darkness" Yes yes, i see, uhum, it does sound very helpful. Please, tell me more about this "Google" of yours. [/passive aggression] If wanted a stock answer i would look one on google. As you can see i don't want a stock answer. I know what "Grim" is, i know what "Dark" is, so if i put them together it will be "Grimdark", right? Yeah, that's fine and all but if that's the case then what the hell is the diference between that and just plain "Dark"? That's my main doubt, what is the limit, if there is one, between "Dark" and "Grimdark"? It has to be one, right? They have to be diferent for some reason... right?

I... don't know. I would like ask too, what IS grim dark? What is the line exactly? Is it the same as gore or is there something else? So if someone knows please put it here :¬|

Well... let's see. 1- Okay...why? For what i can tell the monarchy in equestria is not a tyrany, hell is all the opposite, so why would anyone agree to do that? 2- Again, why? i mean i assume even the dragons don't mess with ponies becouse they control the sun and the moon, so even if they win they are fucked, so why? it's just suicide. 3- Okay... so... this happens becouse of magic i suppose, i guess is kinda weak but whatever... my main issue is, again, why? my teory is that the human appears there and completely freaks out when he saw talking ponies and then he get's thrown in the asylum, but, wound be some attempt in communication before all that? and after? and be reguraly inspected since is pretty much the only of his kind the those lands? also "struggles to survive"...you know this is equestria right? the land of cotton candy and chocolate rain, unless of course is some kind of fucked up parallel universe, in wich case you sould put it in the description.