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  1. "Adopt? She asked, as the water and various other things were poured into the bath. "What does adopt mean?" Star was curious, they soon filled up the tub. She tapped the water with her hoof, it was warm. She hopped into it, it was small, but big enough for a pony of her size.
  2. Star grinned at Arcania, she was genuinely happy for the first time in a while, it felt nice. Star walked over to where the two ponies Arcania gestured at were. "Hi, my name is Star Gazer, can you help me?" Star Gazer asked the two with a smile. "We absolutely can." The two said, almost in unison. "Follow us, please." Star turned to Arcania, all these ponise were starting to make her a little anxious. "C-can you come with me, p-please?" She asked.
  3. Sound of Silence: Disturbed https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u9Dg-g7t2l4 Forgot how to Embed. : S
  4. "O-okay." She mumbled before going back to nibbling on the end of the scarf that Arcania had given her. She hopped out of Arcania's grasp, "All of these ponies are so tall." Star thought to herself. "Not to be rude or anything, but I think the little filly needs a bath..." Rarity winced.
  5. Star giggled as Twilight tickled her. "I tried to hide. I did some bad things." Star said. Remembering the things she had taken from other ponies, desperate to get food and to survive. "My mum told me it was wrong to take things that don't belong to me." She She added, a little disheartened.
  6. Star looked up at Arcania and over at the new ponies. She felt a little uncomfortable but she didn't want to insult this pony's kindness by being rude. "H-hi, everypo, uh... everypony." Star said. "Wow, that was awkward, I hope nopony noticed that." She thought to herself.
  7. Being carried like this made her remember being carried by her parents, it made her feel happy and sad at the same time. She wondered if this is what it was like to see Ponyville from the persepective of a big pony. It was a really quaint-looking village.
  8. Star Gazer's horn lit up, grabbing one end of the scarf and she started nibbling on it, she kept staring into Arcania's eyes, there was something about them that seemed kind, like with one look you'd be able to trust her. "I like your eyes, miss Arcania." Star said, giggling again.
  9. Star looked into Arcania's eyes. "Arcania.... you're from Canterlot... I like that place, it looks pretty and shiny." She giggled. "I look at it every night before I go to sleep. I dreamed of living there, they wouldn't let somepony like me in to there though." She pouted.
  10. She stepped back a little. She didn't seem unfriendly, but it's always good to be cautious. "My name is... Star Gazer... I don't know where my mum and dad went." She said. "I came here from Manehatten, they abandoned me." A small tear formed at her eye, she closed her eyes and her head drooped to the ground.
  11. She yelped and hid under her blanket. Looking up at the mare, she tip-toed over to the cake and sniffed it. "Wh- who are you?" Star asked cautiously, this was the most conversation she'd had in the past month. She nibbled the cake slice, it was good... she tried to resist the urge to eat the thing whole.
  12. The sound of a nearby train passing by startled Star Gazer, so much so that she fell in the river. Thankfully it was a warm day so she wasn't too cold when she got out. She shook herself off. Her stomach grumbled, it'd been a day or so since she'd last eaten anything. She was starting to get a little desperate.
  13. Star Gazer woke up as she usually did, staring up at the brickwork on the underside of the bridge that she liked to call home, with only a stolen blanket to keep her warm during the cold nights. she stretched her legs and got up onto her hooves, she headed down to the river to have a drink. She let out a sigh.
  14. That tune at the beginning of Eddsworld episodes.
  15. Souls of the Innocent Last flavor of cake eaten?
  16. Literally anything else. What's the drag coefficient on a pegasus' feathers in earth-like conditions?
  17. I don't. How much wood could a woodchuck chuck if a woodchuck could chuck wood?
  18. Wow. I've not logged in here in a long time...

    1. Moved to Elsewhere

      Moved to Elsewhere

      Whoa dude, thought you were dead.

    2. 碇 シンジン
    3. The Ponyville Critic

      The Ponyville Critic

      Nope. Not yet anyway... though this is basically where I started in the fandom, I kinda left it alone for a while after the Trotting Dead RP. After it died, I kinda lost interest in the forums.

  19. A reviewer from the humble origins of the MLP Forums has just taken his awesome steps into the reviewing world, I just interviewed an awesome guy, the AnY Pony, the video'll be up on Thursday, go watch that when it's up.

  20. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vf0r3jEhmgc
  21. Missy looked at Aero with a slightly confused expression, then turned back to Drawn and she realises it. "Oh, I didn't notice, I'm usually not so social with ponies but something about you just... excuse the pun... draws me to you." Missy said. "Maybe it's because we're both socially inept, that could be it."
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