GameytheGeemer

I'd say that it's somewhat rushed (I'm not faulting it for that, the pacing just seems wonky to me) and a good deal of the dialogue is really stiff.

All and all, I'd give it an 7/10. Could be better, but it's not terrible.

@@Ampharos,

"Fair enough." He said, 'from somepony who doesn't know about me anyway, not worth the effort it would take to explain' the thought to himself. "Still, if they were all dead than it would have to be a poison. The fact that some of you are alive is proof that there wasn't enough to kill all of them. Lack of blunt trauma and puncture wounds not present. They are all alive." He said, scanning over the room.

'Uh, guys...I think I found the victim.'

(Wow, one of the ten died before they got a chance. JK, though do check the murder scene again, it's in a locked study)

@@Ampharos

"Yeah, it would seem that way." He said, picking himself up. Again, it felt like his mind was trying to claw its way out of his skull.

"As for injuries, I can only attest that I've got the worst hangover in my life, and since I haven't had one in years, drugs are almost certainly in play." He added, using what reasoning powers he still had.

"I say we stick together, keep an eye out for the would be assailant that was out to get us." He added, "I'll take point."

@@Super Mario Brony,

"Could you all keep it down." Chain Mail said, still laying face down. "Apparently, I can still get hammered." He said, 'stupid injections, not working as well as they said' he muttered under his breath. "Also, no one seems to be able to remember anything from the last couple of hours at the least. Since none of us know why, we're a bit stuck until we can get our bearings." He said, only half aware of what all was going on around him.

Traveller dug out his notebook and flipped it open.

'The best I know is that we are at a novelist's party. Why we don't have any idea what's going on, I can't tell. I'm Traveller. It's nice to meet the...conscious ones at least.'

He finished as he slipped the book back into his saddle bags.

Masquerade awoke on the cold, unforgiving floor. He rose from the floor. "W-What has happened?" He questioned, looking around. He really couldn't remember much. He remembered who he was, and not many other details beside such. He was pleased, however, to find his cloak and mask were still with him. "Hmm, where am I?" He asked himself.

With a sharp intake of breath, the earth pony known as Royroger stood up in a single fluid motion and looked around frantically. "Don't panic! Nobody panic! Stay under... Oh dear. I haven't the faintest idea where I am... Why was I yelling? No matter..." Royroger looked around the room slowly, glancing at the unconscious ponies but gazing fully at the upright ones. "Can someone give me any clue as to where I am?"

One good one to get that out of my system before the real idiotic one, read at your own risk, but bear in mind this is one of my dumber torture routines already

Now for the real one

rubbed with a pillow until they are unable to feel their shirts anymore.

  Though I would have preferred a complete set of 10 suspects 

While I say we have the perfect amount (7 since that was the number of people in the original game of Clue). 

I'm AppleBelle

No, no you're not. You're Sweetie Belle, otherwise known as the best crusader.

As for this, I would LOVE a movie, or an episode where Sweetie Belle gets her cutie mark (since she's always the closest to getting the message when they do stuff) and it shakes up the social dynamic that they have going. I think that would be a REALLY good episode 

Honestly, this is really good for a first attempt.

The only thing that's really wrong with it is that the face is WAY too far out, and the eye is stretched too far long ways.

Just fix that and you're good to go.

-edit-

on further analysis, I'd make the neck shading a somewhat more yellow tone while keeping the black the same (if you're working in CMYK) so that it blends a bit better.

Pony wise, I don't even have to answer (as my sig does it for me)

Normal wise, Helsing, followed by DBZ, followed by Tauberpa's Twilight Princess and Xana's OOT/MM

One day, I wanted to troll a bunch of people with a several year long prank.

I realized I'd need a catchier name than "Fuyohaki Natsuyuki" that I had been going by on the internet up till then.

I thought about it.

Gamey the Geemer was the first thing that popped in my head.

I will put it the way I best can for me.

I have no middle ground except for apathy

I either REALLY hate or REALLY love something.

I motioned for genocide of the bronies at the begging

And now I'm obsessed with ponies.

Can I used a depowered (still with the powers, but toned down to a normal level since there are no drugs to do that to him) Chain Mail for this?

I tend to post frequently when others are around.

I'm down with being the traitor. After all, that was the part I was going to go for if it wasn't taken before me.

Oh god, I'm going to b be the type of traitor that has to stick the knife in your back and then twist it for extra agony.

@@Stancet,

If I could (but I can't) convince my friend to join than he would almost have to be guilty. He's literally the god of death or something. (So I doubt he would be accepted in the first place.) 

@@Doc. Volt,

"No, I'm afraid that there isn't any adhesive in the facility for this very purpose. As for what it is, demonic magic. I've gotten a hell of a lot better with that." He said, turning into a shadow and flying down the throat of a guard, then stabbed 'himself' in the stomach. "Makes for some fun means of death." He added, leaving the dying guard's body.

Oh, forgot my gaming related opinions

Ever since the Playstation 2 video games have sucked

Halo is a piece of shit doomclone

Xbox is easily the worst of the gen 6-present consoles

Capcom games don't actually suck

I liked Metroid Other M

Multiplayer games usually suck

I hate all MMORPGs

Every Final Fantasy game since 6 has sucked balls

Football is WAY too overrated

@@Doc. Volt,

Chain Mail, being a man of few words and much theatrics, sent out a wave of darkness around him. "And now, welcome to die." He said, to one of the few remaining guards, completely hidden by shadows. In under a second he exploded. And then his remains all exploded. "This really has been the best day ever."

In general I hate television, all of the crap on Cartoon Network (with the exception of Regular Show) is trying to pass itself off as "Dark" and "Edgy" and sacrificing the things that made them tolerable in the first place.

I didn't hate Blueblood, I thought he was a dumbass, but he was an otherwise alright guy.

I don't give a damn about kids that try to kill themselves because they are being bullied, I mean why would you care if people hate you, and how does that even work. How do you make people want to kill themselves.

I think the Titanic is a boring movie that just deserves to die.

Disney shows aren't the worst thing ever.

I've honestly thought about becoming a dictator before

I've had several points where I want to just knock my skulls.

I've never supported a DiscoPie shipping

@@Doc. Volt,

Oh no, they've deemed us all mentally unstable. So, we're responding in turn with the general response of "Everyone Kills Everything" so pick up a sword and bust some skulls in." He said, pulling out another one of his crystalline "death" swords and throwing it at the ground, only for the blade to stab it into the ground.

@@Doc. Volt,

"Well, a familiar face, that's a surprise." Chain Mail said, keeping his usual shrouded in darkness routine. "Or at least, one I've see and not wanted to kill before." He specified. "Though I won't hold it against you if you don't remember me." He said before half sinking into the ground.

"Feasting on Corpses

and looting the ashes

Ripping the flesh

off these dumb little asses

Still beating hearts that are wrapped in Intestines

These are a few of my favorite things"

Chain Mail sang through the guards he was experimentally possessing, once more taking the bits of the body that he wanted to eat.

"By god I love military training."

(Ok, it's midnight here, and since nopony's posted in the last 5 minutes I'm going to bed)

I would, if only I didn't absolutely despise the notion of getting a tattoo.

And then, I'd probably get Dashie's

(Well, this escalated quickly as hell)

"Well, if we're going the demonic route here." Chain Mail said to himself as he submerged himself in the floor. Then several shadows went out and possessed a guard.

"I hope you asshats are comfortable with the way things have gone, because you're my bitch now." All the Chain Guards said, holding crystaline swords in their mouth, they ran in seperate directions.

"I always do." One of the guards said, snatching the ribs out of the claw and started eating them raw.

((Shouldnt this not happen in a sanitarium??????))

(Probably, I'm just rolling with it since everypony here is a homicidal nutcase and I honestly figured that this would be an RP where everyone unleased their homicidal nutbag to kill some menial 9-5 government employees)

"HA HA, THAT'S THE STUFF." Chain Mail said, cleaving through the guards with magic and his bare hooves like they were butter. By the time he reached the end of the stair case, he was soaked in blood.

"(It's not. It is happening in the gates though because they are located in the building next door to us)"

(No, we're all inside, only like 1-2 people are actually new here. The rest of us have just been biding our time.)

@,

"Besides, NOW WE CAN PARTY!" Chain Mail yelled at the top of his lungs as he threw a brick at the demented ponies head. "I WILL FIGHT EVERYTHING ONCE MORE!" He yelled again. "After the guards are done anyway." He said, catching the brick mid air and launched it like a missile trough the air.

'Ha ha, I knew making sure that everypony wanted me dead just about would pay off in the long run.'

"Now, LET'S GO PUNCH SOME GUARDS!!!"