Literally Snails

Hey can I join? and also do I need to post what weapon he will use?

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/forest-wind-r3438

(I'll just post it to be sure)

If accepted he will use a scythe that is sharpened on the inside and outside to he can use it.

hmmm, I would normally approve him, but we already have so many Pegasi. Do you have an earth pony or a unicorn or a griffon you can use instead? If not Ill just approve this OC. I just don't want this to turn into the Pegasus tournament.

@, "Hey, whoa! Hold up." Standoff caught Topaz before she could get past. "What happened here? Something bad, I'm guessing. Must take a lot to make somepony like you cry. Seriously, though. Something going on up there? Should I go see what it is?" Standoff looked up the hallway.

Topaz didn't look to see who had stopped her. She simply spoke, happy that someone would at least pretend to care. "It was different!" She said. "I'm all about pain and torture but... That wasn't an official match! That was just... Murder! It wasn't a game, it was murder! I never liked that Big Shot creep but... Why couldn't daddy just order someone else to kill him? Why did he have to do it himself?"

 

 

(Yeah, Topaz is a little messed up)

Helllooooo everypony! I'm back! But, unlike a bunch of people I know, I'm bringing a new guest to the party. THAT way I don't have to worry about chemical compositions, and think of to many creative ways to use my Chem class. Not to mention that in this new school year I'm in biology anyways.

I bring to you, Pelarium (Pella for short);http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/pelarium-pella-r4235

Anyways, +1 for the quota! Snails can get of my back!

Oh, I forgot! I was wondering if I could bring a weapon set; both Lightning, and Thunder. (Her push-dagger things)

The weapon is based off of Makoto's from BlazBlue. Jic you were wondering.

I kind of already approved it. The RP is up, be sure to read the first post! As for the weapons, I'm fine with them I know you won't go overboard.

@SecretAgentSnails

Ok thanks, I will try to have it up as soon as possible, but it's ify when my computer will be back in my possession, does that change anything?

(P.S if there is spot saving I would be very grateful.)

can do!

Mason started to walk away, but before he could get past the door, Topaz ran past him, fleeing through the hallway and crying. He thought nothing of this and continued on his way.

 

The fans were getting impatient. The announcer had left it a fit of tears and they were left without entertainment.

INSOLENCE!! ONE PIECE IS STILL BETTER!! I WILL BECOME PIRATE KING!! Uh...I mean...luffy...luffy will become pirate king...hehe...

Yusuke can kick Elder Toguro's ass. Elder Toguro can kick Luffy's ass.

Crimson smirked down at Masons ankle...face...thing... "hmm...a clay-like body? Regeneration after decapitation? hehehe...it looks like were both monsters...but for the record, that's not even close to my full power, if I punched you with one of my hotter flame techniques there wouldn't be anything left of you but ashes...then again, somthing tells me not even that would put you down..." said crimson with a bemused smirk.

the face absorbed back into his body and his head reformed. "Skepticism is dangerous to rely on. You thought I was rubber. You were wrong. The point has been made. I do not expect that you will cause any trouble. We can all be one happy family." He smiled again. (That makes three dead puppies)

Would it be ok if I joined with Rut-Light?  http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/rut-light-r3470.  He may not seem like much of a fighter but he has something sinister that I didn't mention in his bio.

mention what that sinister thing is in a PM, please, then I can approve you.

If.it's still open I would like to join with Frost, but alas my computer will not be avalible until tomorrow so that's when I can get you the link if that's ok

you have plenty of time. Lots a slots left.

 

 

And you thought it was one piece. I laugh at your ignorance! Haha!

Crimson smirked and chuckled dryly, "oh sorry, so your not made of rubber, yet you still want me to harm you? How cute! Well let me tell you somthing...kid..." said crimson darkly before igniting his hoof and punching Mason in the face with a flaming hoof. Crimson smiled darkly, "...your not the only pony who's a freak around here..." said crimson as he extinguished his hoof.

A large, smoldering hole replaced were Masons face once was. Barely anything was left of his head. "Now that's a punch!" His voice said. "I see why you were invited." The voice was. Coming from his right leg. His face, mouth, nose, eyes, and ears were protruding from his ankle!

Crimson stopped and laughed, before coming outside again and smirking knowingly, "hehehe, hit you? As in blunt damage? Thanks but no thanks buddy, I know magical abilities when I see them, and judging by how you stretched your neck, I would say your made of rubber, right? I'm not an idiot, I've been in more battles in my lifetime than you ever will..." said crimson ominously.

((Lol, sorry bro, your not the only one who watches one piece!! Rubber man!!))

"Rubber?" Mason laughed "Rokurokobi are not made of rubber. I am a very special breed as well. Nice catch on the neck, all rukurokobi can do that. I can do more. If blunt force won't work, try cutting me." He was now taunting Crimson, essentially asking for it.

 

(Not one piece, Yu Yu Hakusho)

 

Appearance: Like I said previously, I appreciate pictures. I'm a visual person when it comes to seeing characters, and I need to imagine the character at play. You can ask @Zhooves to draw your OC if you wish. Nonetheless, a mechanical OC is a nice change from other OCs. I can see lots of ways you can "develop" a mechanical robot. More on that later. Other than that, I don't have much to say. Still, if you need to use words to describe the image, then you need a lot more detail than what you have now. How large is the sphere? Can you provide exact dimensions of radius and volume? How large are his feet and hands compared to the rest of his body? That requires imagery and exposition. You are a writer. You can do it

            Score: Cannot give fair grade without picture. For now, 6/10

 

Backstory: Your OC has an interesting history... but some clarity is needed. First off, let us look at this first sentence: 

Program's robotic body, Gatasubal, was created for use in the Royal Guard, but was never used because it was too expensive to produce.

 

Ok, so the robotic body was created for use in the Royal Guard. What was its original intention? Why did the Royal Guard want to have such a contraption? Was there an external threat? Was it an improvement to security levels? Did somepony suggest making one just for the heck of it? Consider these questions and delve deeper. Maybe you can ask some questions of your own.

 

I find the fact a big evil boss stole the work just to act as his personal bodyguard a bit... anticlimactic. What if the evil boss had an even greater plan for the machine? And maybe... somehow... he escapes! He wants to see the world for himself instead of being cooped up in a building with his boss for so long! Just a thought. Nevertheless, the idea is still there and I like where you're going with it. Keep it up. 

           Score: 7/10

 

Personality: Ooh... a superiority complex from a machine. Not surprising, but I like that you've opted for this path of sarcasm and vitriol. It operates under logic. A vital weapon indeed for a robot having no morals. However... is there a way it can be given morals? Can a robot truly develop character and morality if given the right pieces of logic? There is so much room for philosophy with the mind of a robot. Delve into it. It can truly ask questions of "Who am I?" or "What are we as humanity? Mere robots or something more? What makes us different from a robot?" Good work. The above is something to consider for roleplaying or even a fanfic. 

          Score: 8/10

Thank you! I always wanted someone to say something about that OC, But did you like the speech changes (I and Me changed to It and This program)?

Crimson merely smiled sadistically at Mason's words, "hehehehe...funny how many overconfident little pricks there are in the world...it almost makes me wanna burn it all down...just to get rid of them...you might want to watch what you say BOY because I don't care how much money Rail has...or how strong you SAY you are...if you threaten me...I WILL kill you...in a very unpleasant manner..." growled crimson before turning away and walking to the door, but turned his head back, "oh...and you might want to fix your neck before somone here gets tempted..." said crimson before walking inside.

((Soory snails, crimson's motto is, "I don't give a fuck who or what you are...don't piss me off..." so he doesnt take crap from anyone...))

Mason touched his nose and smiled (+1 dead puppies). It was exactly the reaction he wanted. "I tell you what." He said to Crimson on the other end of the door. "If you can incapacitate me in one single blow, Not only will I leave you alone, but I'll also quit my job and never show up here again. Hit me as hard as you want wherever you want. I won't move."

What just happened?

a noobie. Just ignore it and he'll go away.

"Haha here" Umbra said as he stomps the ground the disappears. Thunder Dash and Umbra appears on a shadowy arena. "Haha... Your probably wondering where you are. Hm hm >... Welcome to the arena of shadows: location the dark side of the moon. Here you might need these." Throws night vision goggles to TD... "Your welcome" >

everyone ignore what prince umbra posts. He is not approved to be in this RP. Do not reply to what he posts. As for you, Umbra, I suggest you leave and learn how to roleplay properly before you start making people very mad. After this incident, you will not be approved to enter the roleplay.

At that moment, crimson put a hoof on ivy's shoulder, "hold up ivy, you can't leave without coming inside to say hi to that good for nothing husband of yours, can you?" Asked crimson jokingly before turning to Mason, "hey buddy, she has MY premission to enter, do you got a problem about that?" Asked crimson calmly, yet warningly.

"Disrespect is a very dangerous thing to play with, boy!" Mason scolded. "She can enter, but remember who's in charge. Rail wouldn't hire a chief of security who couldn't handle you. I could win this tournament given the chance!" He pulled his head forward to Crimson. His neck seemed to stretch an inch or two as if it were warm putty.

Not changing My mind on this one.

Do You think you could do one without a picture? I'm a writer, not an artist. http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/program-gatasubal-r2557

 

As a side note, Gatasubal means "Spectral Steel Beast"

I agree, Sir Flutter Hooves it is

Tempest rolled his eyes as he watched the monitors. "This should be interesting." He thought. The cyan pegesus was actually waiting for somepony important to him. "I hope she's able to make it."

 

Ivy trotted towards the Fighting Lounge. "Tempest should be around here somewhere." She thought.

"That's close enough." Mason said. He turned his back on the Fighter's lounge and blocked the doorway, facing Ivy who he saw walking down the hallway. "You aren't one of the contestants. I'm going to have to ask you to leave unless you have expressed permission!"

Is the actual rp set up yet? If so, did I miss anything important?

I JUST SET IT UP FIVE SECONDS AGO! GET ON OVER HERE! IN A RELATED SIDE NOTE, CAPS LOCK! CAPS LOCK EVERYWHERE!

@@Justin ZW,@@TheBreech, @, @, @@Moonlight Fire, @, @, @,

 

Here's the RP Topic I just made! http://mlpforums.com/topic/70449-the-dark-tournament-ii-slots-open/

 

This is gonna be so much fun! Just like last time only without the infighting (Hopefully)

(Link to OOC is in my signature)

This first post is pretty long, but it's also important. So read it!

The Dark Tournament. Once outlawed in Equestria, but now, thanks to shady business deals and money loans, it has come back to this once peaceful land. This brutal game pins sixteen of the lands deadliest fighters to fight to the death for entertainment and gambling, all for the purpose of becoming the grand champion and getting one wish granted by the corrupt tournament committee. However, participation is not an option for them.

Rail, the tournament director and owner arrived later than he had intended. When he walked into the stadium, he was flooded by reporters with questions.

"Mr. Rail! What are your comments on the new head of security you hired?"

"Is it true that you doubled your fortune in the last tournament? How much of that was added to the tournaments funding?"

"What are your comments on the ethical concerns raised against the tournament committee?"

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The contestants (That's you guys :3 ) were all directed into the fighter's lounge. It was a large room with plenty of drinks and furniture and monitors to watch the fights.

The door to the room opened. It was supposed to be locked, which means that whoever opened it had the key. A tall, thin stallion in a security uniform stood in the doorframe. He gave off an uneasy feeling, like a pony you would avoid walking near on the street. He spoke with a hushed, deep, nasally voice thickly accented with an unplacable dialect. "Welcome to the second Dark Tournament. I am Mason, the new head of security. If you have a concern, you address it to me. If you cause a concern, I address it to you." He smiled. It was the kind of smile that makes something beautiful shrivel up and die. "I do hope all of you are ready. Rail is already giving the opening remarks."

He directed their attention to the monitors. All of them showed Rail standing alone on the stage, levitating a microphone in front of his mouth.

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"Who the hell is that guy?" An audience member asked.

"Don't you pay attention to anything?" Another audience member scolded. "That's Rail! The owner of the tournament!"

"What's he doing on the stage?"

"QUIET! Let's hear what he has to say!"

Rail put on a professional smile. "Welcome, all of you, welcome," He said, "to the second annual Dark Tournament of Equestria!"

"RAIL, BUDDIE! YOU GOTTA HELP ME!" Someone in the audience interrupted. There was a rustling in the crowd and Big Shot, the former Tournament committee Head, jumped over the railing and approached the stadium. He was dressed in casual attire. "I spent everything I had to get a ticketI I had to sell my jacket! This was the only time I could see you all year!"

"Who's this creep?" Topaz, the lead announcer asked over the speakers, not recognizing Big Shot. "And where is the security team when you need them?"

Rail watched his former partner approach the ring. "It would be unwise to walk onto the stadium." He stated.

Big Shot didn't listen. He pulled his fat body onto the stadium ring and walked closer to Rail. "I need some of my money back!" He begged. "Not all of it. Just some!"

When he was within hoofs length of Rail, Rail lowered the microphone, sighed, and delivered a swiping kick strait into Big Shot's neck. Big Shot's neck snapped and he fell on his back, gasping for air.

"*HUUUUF*- We were- *HUUUUF*- partners!" Big Shot gasped.

"And I used you... pity." Rail said coldly before stomping down on Big Shot's face with one powerful hoof, causing his face to bend inward and shatter. Rail turned back to the audience and dusted his left leg off. "Ladies and Gentlecolts!" He announced on his mic, "The first blood of the Dark Tournament!"

The crowd broke out of their silence with a loud cheer. Rail dropped the mic and strolled off stage. "Animals." He said to himself.

Can Ivy enter the fighter's lounge to talk to Tempest? If she can't, I don't mind.

that depends on the head of security. Don't worry he's a very nice, creepy guy.

Vaery well.

wait... What the... How did you post that? It's less than 75 characters. How did you even....

Well...

 

Eh...

 

Alright. I guess I'll do it. But I'll have to come up with a reason to participate. Swordpoint hates violence and all that. Yada yada yada.

 

Can you work something into the story?

  

I'm gonna try this one out with my primary OC: Thunder Dash 

 

Hopefully he's not to OP, 'cause he's got something really unique. 

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/thunder-dash-r1861

  

Do you mind if I use Tempest in this? He could use a good fight with a random pony. If I can't, then I don't mind.

  

Count the pirate captain badass also known as crimson grinn in this...thingy...THE LINK IS IN MY SIG!!!

  

This seems interesting, I'll join with my oc sole if that's ok with you. His link is in my sig.

  

Can I still join this? :3 I think I'll join with my OC Whiplash, she's tough. Her link's right in my sig!

  

I think I will enter, if only to get the accolade that I've participated in two sequel RPs. Suppose I'm using Standoff again. Weapon at a later date.

  

Somehow I didn't realized I needed to submit Cosmo again lol

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/cosmo-shadesteel-r1538

My one weapon will Altair, Cosmo's Katana (No Black Swans this time.)

Okay, listen up, because I don't want anybody to get lost. The RP topic should be up by tonight, ALL of you will start out in the fighter's lounge. I suggest you stay there and interact with each other until the fighting starts. The fighting won't start until I post the bracket. I won't post the bracket until we have seven more players. Basically you all have free time until the other fighters show up.

Hi, I'm new here too for some reason! (Seriously, I just got a random Welcome to the forums message from the mailmare. I must be new too,somehow.)

 

Welcome to the forums! us newbies gotta stick together.

Hey Ragestar, you wanna rate Topaz and Rail? Come on, you know them pretty well. (I don't have OC pages for them yet.)