Laughing Derp

Yes, but they could make an alternate history: like in king washigton dlc. But this time, you have to kill the professors and doctors of the V2 program, the me262 and the development of several other "Wunderwaffen" It could be really possible... A dream...

For first, i say 15 chapters à 3-4 or 5-6 Pages. An Intro, Middle-Part, and an Outro. I go so far, till nobody gives a shiet, be honest, dont you dislike when nobody reads your story? Im not into a certaib kind of characters, i do what fits best. And with characters itself, you know the concept, im very open with that.

What.... I think some understand this really really wrong, or my explanation sucks... The Fanfic ive written, is not finished, but i dont wanna continue it xD Im asking for ideas, for a NEW one....

Thank you Chip, i have a reason for this, at least in my opinion: Everyone can write a story, with the simplest words, me for example, my primary language is a very very strange dialect of german. Ive learned english from YT (im not kidding) and by playing some Online Games, over Teamspeak. What you learn as english today in Europe, excludes GB, is totally not for practical use. Also is my concious kind of special, i often think in english, sounds better. A word leads to a sentence, a sentence to a similar word, but different written and spelled. Its like ADHS just in my mind if you allow

What you say is indeed a good start, and you name good arguments. But of course, i would never ever write a story and offer it afterwards without a check-reader. For Grammar, i used a person who corrects and gives me advice. My example from above was just an example like i say. I dont like HIE, or PIRW (Ponys in Real World) like EG... God i dont like that... That ruined most of the fandom for me... Everywhere on tv commercials for toys, i mean the franchise-cow is milked til dryness... Back to topic, i havent decided what i wann write, so i made this new topic. But thank you bird

Oh crap... Accident ;_; But how was it, be honest, critic is necessary~

Let me try... "Ab bit later, i see something, what is physically impossible: a rainbow, in the middle of the storm! First i rub my eyes (can i write that so, rub?), but as my sight clears up, it is still there. Im holding my breath for a few seconds, and then, i just hear a bang and the only thing i see is black. I dont know how long i was knocked out, but i finally wake up. I feel something upon my face, soft, heavy as a feather. Maybe a towel? But what comes comes next is not better, my head feels like a sledgehammer ram into my face. Beside the pain, i lay in a bed, my eyes are still closed so i can only guess. But suddenly a sound is in my reach, a kind of knocking, on a wooden floor maybe. The next on my mind is a slightly better feel, someones talking to me, and i feel the soft thing is being put away. A voice, like an angel, is this heaven?* So, i tried... Never in english before, but i tried

Thanks for the advice, i know character development is the main part of a good story, honestly im more into describing (hope this word is wirtten correct) the surrounding things, let me write an example: *As he opened his eyes, a lightning stroke only a few hundred meters away. The Raindrops "plicked" on his face as he walked down the road. In fact, this person is me, a few years ago outside my house, somewhere in the forest near a lake. It was a small storm, quite nice to think about the life, what you do and how it impacts on your family. But i was interrupted, my face went white, as sudden a tree fell, right in front of my feet. A chill went down my back, i was lucky that the tree didnt smack me. I stood there for a minute or so, slowly reaizing what happened* Hows that? Is this a good writing style?

It was a big crap idea, the last Fiction. (Sorry for my english) I was looking, what would users like to read? Ideas and stuff... Things like this

War Thunder, some RPG's and all of assasins creed. Hmm... AC in WW2... O_o that would be awesome

As you can read, i need some help, specially from the community: Once ive started to write a fanfic, one was interested, the end. It made it to the 15th chapter, and i wont give up my writing. Give me some input, discuss, but it must have to do with the mlp universe. And a little advice with the grammar would be nice, ive never written in eglish before (means stories) Thank you very much, Derp

Thank you very much Lad, taht helps a lot. To be honest, ive never watched a trailer, and it might shock or surprise you, but i didnt like that "Princess" Twilight Sparkle thing... Yeah.... Bit weird but it just doesent seem that well made up in my opinion. But im gonna watch the trailer... In 6 hours or so, im trying to sleep now, its 1 am where i live :yawn: Ill see ya tomorrow, until then: Derp